
A Commoner Ninja of Konoha
木叶平民忍者
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 756k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
287Chapters
0Votes
1.4kRecs
21.3kFans
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Reader comments 24
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The plot was too silly. I forced myself to forget the plot, and then I immediately asked Naruto to come directly to him with the seal branch book. Not to mention anything else, Naruto was being watched by the Hokage the whole time today. Who are you and are you qualified to watch? I'm investigating your activities. My dear guy, both of his parents are dead and have a secretive mind. He likes to read books about the Second Hokage. Don't ask, I'll cut off the roots and slice them for you tonight. You can be killed if you learn ninjutsu secretly. What if you, a commoner, want to take advantage of it?
Is the principle of substitute technique interchangeable? Then why do you need a substitute? It's very sad to see that this kind of substitute is interchangeable. Master of space per person,
You, a commoner, are more stupid than cheaters. You are still not familiar with the plot and have no talent in writing.
It's good to see that Chapter 12 is not a conspiracy theory about Naruto, but it also has a lot of flaws! The first sealed book was too far-fetched. The second substitute directly becomes the Flying Thunder God. The most poisonous setting changes made by the fans, and they have already read the book of seals, so there is no need to do this. The Third Immortal Technique can absorb natural abilities without any foreshadowing. If you add someone with a gift of perception, strong mental power or past life meditation, it will be easy to accept. The fourth is to forcefully join the Wave Kingdom mission, even if reinforcements are needed, the protagonist will not be able to get it.
The protagonist's name is very good, and it makes you laugh at the first sight. Is it difficult to come up with a name that matches the style of your painting? No, it is easy to come up with a Japanese name. Even if you are really stupid, there are many Japanese surnames with one character, and the most famous surname is Lin, which can't be used in dramas. But the author refuses. Because of the so-called brain twitch, he abandoned the book. After all, he doesn't even pay attention to the small writing style, and he still expects people to write stories seriously?
Konoha is not dark, what is the difference between that and Boruto?
Running account. The author doesn't want to write about school life, that's fine, there's no problem. But the subsequent fight scenes are also not described. I also learned about Ninjutsu training several times. Just a few strokes of Gaara and it was done. Is Gaara that weak? The Four Purple Flame Formation was easily solved. Too exaggerated. The protagonist will be invincible in Chapter 100.
Sarutobi Hiruzen is the most hypocritical politician
If Sarutobi Hiruzen is immortal, Konoha Village will always be shrouded in darkness. Naruto will never be simple, and will always be a replica of Japan and South Korea under the control of politicians.
I don't even understand! A group of people who say bad things about Konoha's "our country"! Have you eaten enough to hold yourself up? Do you know what this means? Is Konoha "domestic" bad? You go to other villages and "countries" and have a look!? You should really go to the Land of Rain to experience what "Crying Village" is like versus the reality of "Iraq and Afghanistan"
The original 12 Xiaoqiang can still look like a kid when he is 12-13 years old. When it comes to Uchiha Itachi, Obito, and Kakashi are like high school students in their teens, they are so mature and well developed.