The Eternal Emperor Who Came Out of Zongzheng Temple

The writing is good, but it feels a bit watered down during this period. Some of the descriptions of scenery, character dialogues, characters' thoughts, etc. Are simply unnecessary.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I can't help but express my opinions on this book. I don't know if it will be helpful to the author. The following are personal opinions and are meant for friendly discussion. What you criticize is a matter of your quality. After reading more than thirty chapters, I finally understand some of the reasons why this book is lukewarm. First, overhead. Looking at the history books of online literature, we will find that few fictional novels are popular, that is, at the level of Wanding, the most high-quality novels, but even the high-quality ones are very few. This involves a problem of sense of substitution and cognitive identity. There are always many reasons why we read historical texts. One is that we are familiar with this period of history, and we have resonance, perhaps yearning, or regrets. Because of these, we want to read historical texts to satisfy our own needs, or to have a beautiful dream, recalling the ancient lanes of Gunung, or to regret that the wheels of history have taken the wrong route and have suffered for hundreds of years, or to grieve over the mountain of war-torn corpses. The sea of blood, the brutal invasion of the foreigners, was indignant at the imperial court's mismanagement, and was angry with it; one was for the celebrities, generals and beauties in ancient times. We live now, but we have heard all kinds of stories and legends about them in ancient times. We want to have a glimpse of their iron-blooded loyalty, how they rebuked Fang Qiu, and we also want to look forward to how they will sink into nothing and be famous forever. All these have formed the novel type of historical novels, and historical novels are not alternative fan fictions that follow the official history. The most fatal thing about ostracism is the sense of substitution and identification. To make up for all of this requires strong writing and story involvement. This book is imaginary. Even if you write it after a historical case, it is still a layer apart and cannot allow people to be involved in it in the early stage. This is the first reason. Second, character design. When we read historical novels, we are not looking at heroic epics. In my opinion, in online articles and even paper books, personality is very important. It is even like a person's appearance to the first impression of others, but it is more important than that. Because, even if the appearance is not good enough, there is still a chance, but if online articles see that the character design does not match, they will basically forsake it and rarely continue to support it. Of course, the character design of this book is okay, but let's just say there are many highlights and it can make people like it from the beginning, but it's not enough, and it seems a bit mediocre. In my opinion, for historical novels, if you don't know what kind of character to write, then write heroic ones. A heroic male protagonist is a universal template for historical novels, domineering and persevering. With these characteristics (I won't go into details, let's take two recent examples, Li Xia in the late Song Dynasty, Jia Heng in Red Mansions, etc.), Shehui-ism Hongqi youth is out of place, because historical novels are harem novels after all, and it is okay to have a single female protagonist, but is it necessary? The female protagonist is an embellishment and should not occupy much of the scene. This is a male video, and the writing is not strong enough to make readers want the male protagonist to be exclusive? Be more domineering and handle it like Li Xia. This is the second reason I think. After all, the first thing I care about when reading a book is the characters. Third, style. History books do not require antique charm, but they cannot be mixed up either. I felt two weird flavors in this book. One was that I actually felt a little Japanese style (I forgot where, but I felt it anyway. It's scary to think about it. The Japanese invasion was so subtle. Fortunately, I don't watch Japanese anime. I often see "I'm on my way~" in Qidian novels. It's so embarrassing). The other is a female channel style. The author As a reader who watches both men's and women's videos, I may have read more books about women's books than men's books (after all, women's books don't have that many words). I can feel the style of women's books in them, you know what I mean (for example, Zhao Shou's worried eyes, distressed eyes, and other descriptions also have the style of women's books, but I am not as impressed as Zhao Shoushen). I understand that you also borrowed from Nirvana in Fire, but don't forget that it is a female channel book. Is it possible that you also want to have a bit of bl style in this book? And the reason why the female channel's writing method is least suitable for the history of male channels is the heroism. What I feel most deeply about this book is that the male protagonist is soft and has a sickly white face. Even if you repeatedly emphasize that the male protagonist is very strong in time travel and has good physical fitness, I still feel that he lacks aura and feels weak. Without heroism, it is difficult to arouse people's pride. Fourth, partner. I have reached more than thirty chapters in this book, and the heroine appears, a heroine from a small official family??? Are you emphasizing how different this woman is and how she matches the hero? Let's refer to the Final Song Dynasty. I won't comment on how the emotional scenes in the Final Song Dynasty are written, but his model of recruiting women is very correct. The problem in the Final Song Dynasty is that the male protagonist is like a robot and lacks human touch, but the female protagonist is reasonable and not awkward. I read the book reviews and saw what kind of betrothal heroines there are. I feel that you will have an affectionate boy character in the future, a harem with only one person, and a horse queen template that shares the joys and sorrows (but the male protagonist is not a commoner). The female protagonist is important in historical texts because she is an important part of the family. Without a female protagonist, it can be said that the male protagonist has no family. How do you write it in your daily life? Don't you get tired of watching the conspiracy every day? Will the perception of it not decrease? The multiple female protagonists are not for erotica, but for political friendship, as well as the warmth of the male protagonist, and a warm home. I don't know what the reasons are for advocating that historical documentaries have only one female protagonist or even no female protagonist, and I don't know what An's motives are. The third reason is that I feel that this heroine is weird (maybe there is really only one heroine in the end. I haven't fully understood the heroine's design yet. I'll check it out later). This is the fourth cause. Fifth, rhythm. The first thirty pictures are very flat, boring, and dull. Author, you are writing an online article in 2022, not ten years ago. You can write slowly. You have to make people expect and leave a deep impression, right? So, the male protagonist should be attractive, right? The writing is good, right? The characters must be distinctive, right? I understand that you want to foreshadow, but which of the historical dramas written well now (except for brainless novels) does not have good writing, good characters, and interesting characters to keep readers. The author's writing is good, but it is not enough, so the rhythm must be controlled. This is the fifth cause. Sixth, feel better. It is important to be cool in online writing, and the same is true for history books. In today's online writing environment, if your writing skills are excellent, your grades will not be bad, but combined with being cool, your grades will definitely skyrocket. If the writing is not that good and the writing is not enjoyable, then few people will stay. The cool point can be said to be the personality display of the male protagonist (appearance, martial arts, family background), it can also be the female protagonist, or it can be the incident... There is a saying that pretending to be silent is better than being vocal. In this realm, you can refer to the cool point arrangement of Red Mansions. This is the sixth cause. Having said so much, I just typed on the fly without considering formatting. I wrote whatever I thought of. Some of the reasons may overlap, but they also expressed my thoughts, so I'll just make do with it. It's really boring to write such a long list. Come on, the author, and welcome all book friends to have friendly discussions. We civilized people don't like swearing and bad words.

The protagonist of this kind of power wants to rely on his power to get to the top. It will test the author's writing skills and imagination too much. If he is not careful, he will collapse. It seems pretty good so far. This witchcraft case is a bit like the Langyabang Meiling case.

Explain the early rhythm issue. The first ten chapters: Preparing for the crisis and getting a temporary opportunity to get out. 10-20, the Heaven Sacrifice Ceremony, leading to future opponents. 20-30, the confrontation in the court took the first step. 30-35, in Zongzheng Temple, he armed himself (software, Zhanyuan knife, dragon tooth dagger, Wenxin Baiwei.) 36-38, at the inn in the city, he led out the third Jing Zhaoyin and learned about the book of people. 39-43, leads to the line of the Wang family. (This paved the way for future breakthroughs.) 44-49, solved potential dangers and sorted out some clues. In 50-54, he went to Jing Zhaoyin, took the second step, and introduced two key figures. From 55 to 60, I went out of the city, witnessed the tragic situation of the victims, and buried the line of old friends in advance. 61-63, led to the line of Pingyi Bo (with the help of the five old families.) 64-67, initially cleaned up the Jingzhao Mansion, and spent all three departments and one hospital to prepare for all-out disaster relief. In 68-76, a third-level official surfaced, and the family took the lead in taking action. 77-83, take advantage of this crisis to achieve four goals. Create discord within the enemy and use the power of the people to lay the groundwork in advance. Currently updated to chapter 77, and chapter 83 written. Everyone is unhappy with the two updates a day, and I'm also unhappy with not posting it. However, there is nothing we can do about the new book period, so please forgive me. It should be on the shelves on the 15th of this month. Once it is on the shelves, I will explode

Sincere thanks to all the book friends who have provided valuable opinions. Writing a book is a long process, and Iced Tea has tried his best to avoid some mistakes during this process. But when manpower is limited after all, sometimes mistakes will be made unknowingly. Working behind closed doors and going out is not the right thing to do. My current state fits this sentence perfectly. If it weren't for your valuable suggestions, perhaps some errors would have followed this book until the end. Even following the ice tea until the next book, the next book, and then... If you fail to realize your mistake, you will eventually become a lifelong addict. Every time I see everyone pointing out mistakes, Iced Tea's first reaction is to be happy (of course, malicious insults will also make me sad.) After being happy, I directly open the starting point, find the wrong chapter, and assume myself as a reader. Read it carefully once, if it doesn't work once, then read it twice or three times. After you fully realize the mistake, reflect on it, open WPS or the background, and make careful modifications. After revising, openly admit your mistakes. It's not scary to make mistakes. What's scary is not knowing about the mistakes. After knowing about them, instead of correcting them, they pretend to be nonchalant. My character has always been to admit when I'm wrong, and I'll admit it when I'm done. So, I have never been afraid of admitting mistakes, and I have never thought that admitting mistakes is a shameful thing. What I fear most is making mistakes without realizing it. So, in addition to thanking all the book friends who have provided valuable opinions. Iced Tea also wants to take advantage of this opportunity to open a permanent error correction post, or a post for soliciting opinions. If you feel that these two names are too euphemistic, you can also call this post (Ice Tea Criticism Conference.) (Ice Tea will never delete it as long as it is not an unreasonable insult.) Finally, sincerely thank you, thank you.

When writing historical novels, if the protagonist wants to fight for world supremacy, then it is inevitable to have a group of wives and concubines. If the protagonist becomes an emperor through time travel, then it is necessary to have a harem of three thousand beauties. Unless the protagonist does not develop his own strength after traveling through ancient times, as long as the protagonist succeeds in ancient times, there will be countless people asking for marriage or marriage. Do you want to be a stud in such an environment? It is normal for lovers to be officials in modern times, let alone in ancient times.

The little daughter of the Wang family

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The most vicious thing is that a prince dares to have a private life contract? Not reporting it to the emperor? An unfilial title will cause his reputation to plummet. Does the person named Lu think he is an expert? I didn't expect that forgetting these things could actually influence the prince's marriage? Too toxic, completely illogical, bad review

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Awesome! To be able to write more than two hundred pages in one winter, the author is extremely exhausted!

The biggest failure here is Zhao Shou

There are a few people who have been thinking about it for a long time and don't know which one is suitable. If you have a better one, you are welcome to discuss it 😭 "Your Majesty, please go on the road" "Why did your Majesty rebel?" The Emperor of Eternity who came out of Zongzheng Temple "Severing grudges in front of the Xuanwu Gate" "Please pay with blood, your majesty" "I use my power to achieve hegemony" "Xuanwu Long Song"

66666 What dynasty do you write if there is no harem?

We will all be emperors in the future. The heroine is not important🌚

To help this shitty disaster, just go on stage and shout Princes, generals and ministers, would rather have the seed Wouldn't it be more delicious? It's frustrating to see Machiavellianism.

Everyone is saying that the early plot is protracted, but I think it's quite good. After all, under those conditions, the early plot is relatively reasonable and is all foreshadowing. If it is written too fast in the early stage, it will feel like a pure novel. I believe many book lovers are not willing to spend too much time reading this kind of book. My writing became better and better after I arrived in the feudal dynasty. The most important thing about writing this kind of power-building article is to detail the long flow. You can't attack them all at once, and you can't build power all at once. Also, what attracts me most about this book is the author's description of the conspiracy of each force and each person. All aspects are well considered. It is a very attractive point for me. It is very good. Keep up the good work, author!

First of all, let me say that I really like this book. From the first chapter, I felt the shadow of Nirvana in Fire. I have a few regrets to say. The important supporting characters are not portrayed enough and their personalities are not distinct. On the contrary, some insignificant characters have been portrayed with great effort. While reading the book, I vaguely felt that some of the character settings were brilliant. However, there has never been a deeply rooted portrayal, which is a bit of a waste. Secondly, the micro-movements used to describe the characters are too feminine 🥺 and I even feel that the author looks like a cute girl from a female channel. As a person with a very accurate sixth sense and easy to have random thoughts. I think the author is a woman between 25 and 30 years old, most likely an institutional worker, and unmarried. Have a heart that longs for love. When I said this, I suddenly didn't want to talk anymore. Are you in love? Let me talk about it carefully.

The protagonist is not like a serious time traveler, maybe he is a real person who traveled through time.

Deleted the post again? You keep repeating it like crazy and you won't let anyone talk anymore? You delete it, delete it again and I'll post it again.

I always feel that this book has been written recently with too much nonsense, too much repetition, and is suspected of being coded, so I shouldn't continue reading it---

Those without household registration are exempted from land tax for three years, but what about those with household registration? It is not about scarcity but about inequality. No matter what the black households are, they can be said to be outsiders to a certain extent, but those who have household registration and diligently pay land taxes can get nothing. Can you understand that it is better to give to foreign thieves than to domestic slaves😞. People are divided into three, six or nine grades, and the degree of closeness and dedication is also divided into three, six or nine grades. Black households can be gathered to fight against disasters and work to pay wages. , Letting them have money to pay taxes is no better than tax exemption at all times. If they want to be exempted, it is better to exempt them all together and see if the Yan Palace goes bankrupt😪😪😪😪

There's too much water, it's been more than 20 chapters and I haven't gotten to the point yet.

What's going on? Is the author brother in?

This is a parallel import! ! Updates when there is nothing, cheating money! ! !

Chapter 616, how to shoot the complete version? Only Chapter 608 is visible?

The Xiongnu can be driven away with the Eight Banners system

It has not been updated for thirteen days, give it another day.