
Datang Deep Space Exploration Ship
大唐号深空探索舰
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 219k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Future World
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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11Fans
75Chapters
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The logic is barely there (much better than other novice articles), and the layout needs to be improved. Such a big accident cannot be investigated in detail enough. No captain would handle it this way. Lai Yuanhang has insufficient authority and can only appear in public areas, including the location of the collision. Therefore, engineers will not go to public areas with such important supplies. It is mentioned in the article that this is a major loophole, and engineers will be investigated afterwards. Second, this valuable core component must be packaged very strictly during transportation, so that it will not be exposed even if it falls on the ground. Third, the cause of the accident must be strictly investigated after the accident. It must be dismantled to find out the cause of the accident, so as to understand the purpose behind it (if human intervention is suspected). Fourth, the author emphasizes that no one paid attention to it and closed the case hastily. This is funny, because it is not important to accuse Lai Yuanhang. What is important is that if Lai Yuanhang is not the murderer, it means that the murderer is at large. This hidden danger is too serious (in a sealed spacecraft, someone secretly sabotaged it). Based on the above reasons, the author's logic needs to be improved, and the layout of mining needs to be more basic. Come on, author
No, after chasing him for so many days, he still felt so frustrated that he was at the mercy of others? Now I still can't even get the permission The protagonist has never pretended to be awesome in the whole book. How do you want to write it? The protagonist is stepped on to the end?
It was painful to watch. . . The protagonist doesn't make progress (the progress he says is just mental progress, no real learning, his attitude has changed in his mind, but in fact it remains the same, he can still thrive in such a dangerous environment) and is always passive. Are you abusing the author?
Just this, I don't understand why with this logic.
It's starting to break down. Are you giving in so easily?
It must have collapsed. Also, there is not much written. I could split one chapter into two chapters.
Author, you have failed to write, and I really can't understand what you are writing now. Just ask Chief Engineer Wang to release poisonous gas or anesthetic gas to make everyone die or become comatose. Then he fell into a deep sleep himself. Just find a random reason for why you do this. Then the protagonist and the robot are left in the new earth waiting for the earth to come over. The book can end after you come here. Or a bunch of aliens. Foreshadowing the next book. I really don't understand why you wrote it like this.
If you don't understand, just ask. How to watch for 10 minutes
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It's a bit interesting, so I'll hurry up. 30 Pictures didn't make it into the main text, and it's still laying the groundwork. It's too slow to update, so it's boring.
I think it's okay. It's definitely not a cool article, but the updates are too slow!
It felt wrong, so wrong. Don't let this book collapse.
If you don't look at it, why should you open a trumpet
I knock brother, Duan's position is good.
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