I Play a Prophet in Salvation.

Salvation, behind-the-scenes, and organization-building novels are all my favorite genres. I look forward to a masterpiece that will amaze me, so I hope my suggestions can be helpful to the author in the early stage. Highlights of this work: 1. Personally, I like the process of recruiting talents. Just like the Tarot Club in "Lord of Mysteries", different members have different personalities and different stories. In layman's terms, it is a group portrait. The process of recruiting talents for the protagonist is like collecting cards or drawing cards. I look forward to the emergence of more characters, and hope that the author can give them fresh life and make them a "living person". However, there is a problem that needs to be noted: the recruitment of talents is linked to the map. A larger map means a richer plot, and possible tragic battles in the future. Nowadays, there are only a few people tomorrow, but the protagonist's predecessor saw a hopeless future. Even if the fate line changes, it still cannot be solved by a few people. If it is solved by a few people, it will be a bit of a joke. If there are more main people in the organization, the personalities of different people will be more distinct, which will be a great test for the author. If it is written well, then this group portrait will be a very good point. Be careful not to destroy the character. 2. Control of the plot, the protagonist is the prophet. He predicts major events that will happen in the future through his diary. This kind of spoiler can shape the characters who will appear in the event in advance, but it will also deepen readers' expectations of how the event will go in the future. For example, there are very few diary records about the appearance of the witch, so I wouldn't be too surprised if he was killed by the protagonist in the early stage. However, if the horrors of "Starscream" and "Ten Thousand Arms" are introduced from the beginning, their handling cannot be too simple. In other words, if the description of the BOSS you revealed in advance is very powerful, it cannot be easily solved in the later stage unless you are fully prepared. Therefore, the next crusade against the origin-level monster "Starscream" cannot be too simple. Because of the current strength, you also said in the diary that the entire army will be annihilated and the monster that will appear in a few months can only be laid out. Defeat him through a series of plans that are grand enough (although you now control one of the cores). If the author wants a plot where the protagonist can turn the tide, of course, to me, it will feel a bit like a nanny taking care of a child, because the reader will always believe: "Oh, the prophet will solve it." This inevitably reduces the expectation for the ups and downs of the plot. What I want to see is the growth of a group of characters, not "the nanny mother and the child she doesn't have." So this is also a test for the author, and a heroic crusade is also a plus point, because he witnessed the development, which is the process of history! 3. The shaping of the official organization, this is also a point that can be completely ignored, because this represents the IQ level of ordinary supporting characters. The author is not required to give each of them a distinct character, because there are too many and readers cannot remember them. But the overall core values ​​must be introduced: that is, what is the purpose of the organization's existence? What concepts do they uphold? Every action and appearance they make must present their overall core concept. Can the future be solved by just organizing one tomorrow? Therefore, large and small organizations represent different ideas. They can cooperate with the protagonist, or they can stand on the opposite side (of course, it is best to be the opposite of the idea). If the group portraits of the protagonist group in the front constitute the vivid Mingri Organization, then the group portraits of organizations large and small constitute a complete world! 4. Witness the process of history The development of Tomorrow's organization will be accompanied by events large and small. When readers look back, they will have a sense of witnessing history. This feeling will at least make me want to stop. 5. The reaction of the masses Since the protagonist adheres to the purpose of letting the masses understand and adopts live broadcast to popularize science to the people, the reaction of the people will definitely be related. Like many live-streaming articles, the interesting comments and reactions from netizens are his highlights. When the protagonist is like popular science, it is impossible for them to have no reaction at all, and these reactions are also interesting. Of course, these plots are just seasoning to enrich the plot. At the same time, who will go live and who will carry the banner also depends on which role the protagonist arranges. So, tomorrow the organization's departments will be divided. Which one is the Propaganda Department? Which one is the warhead? The process of dividing the departments later and witnessing the birth of a complete organization is also a highlight. Next are some suggestions: 1. The author divides the levels of enemies, and Origin is the highest level currently. However, we still need to strengthen the segmentation in this regard. Readers must not be confused about who belongs to which stage. 2. How does the author prepare to create the members of the organization? For example, the young lady at the beginning, I can't remember her character clearly now. She didn't speak much, so I only remember that she is now a driver of the protagonist? Are you planning to relegate her to a less important role? The same goes for other characters. For example, Ding Yan, in my opinion, is now a passionate sophomore boy who relies heavily on the prophet and lacks independent opinions. As I said before, if he can become a character who no longer relies on the protagonist and is very independent, then this process must be very interesting (just my own YY). After all, the members of the protagonist must at least grow up to be upright and protective characters in the future. Otherwise, it all depends on the protagonist, and the significance of the salvation organization will exist in name only. 3. The protagonist may be able to deepen his psychological activities, say less words that seem to be profound in long paragraphs, and try to be short and yet profound (this small suggestion can be ignored) 4. What about the description of ordinary people? This is also a place that enriches the plot. In summary, I am very optimistic about this novel and hope the author can write better and better

"An organization needs to be established, an organization to save the world." This is an era that belongs to the prophet, this is the best era, this is the worst era. "Who are you?" "I am willing to put a block on you" "Changing the Destiny of Death" The train of history is still moving forward, but midway a pale man in a trench coat boarded the train, which made some changes to the train that was originally going to drive towards the cliff. "If you want to change his fate in advance, you might as well smash everything that has been established from the beginning." "Disaster Born in the Rain" "Your dream should be to walk in a physical form, right? You want to really walk in scenic spots, not in photos or film and television works. You also want to eat spicy dishes, no You just want to be satisfied with the description of language and words. You also want to experience rain and flowing water, you want to see the life of "Xiaohao", you want to go to high school..." "The Weaver of Dreams" "You can call me... I am 'Prophet'" (Patient with late stage of secondary disease) Welcome to the arrival of our Lord! ! ! I'm really too lazy to think about it, so let's just do it~

The writing is actually quite average, and there are no outstanding points in terms of settings or other aspects. Especially in terms of character creation, I always feel that the protagonist is like a junior high school student, and some logic is also not smooth. There are bugs in many places. For example, why the corpse does not stink, rot, and develop spots after a few days. Even a facial contouring artist cannot explain it, especially when the protagonist has a hole in his chest. Many places are pushed forward without clear explanation, which makes it more and more uncomfortable.

It's a pretty good book The plot framework is okay, the writing is also good, and the world view is interesting. I'm looking forward to it.

I would like to ask if it is an all-female member article? I don't want to test the poison myself, have you ever read what the boss said?

By the way, does the protagonist really stink? How about learning from the Hanged Man and putting himself into an antiseptic container, and then talking through a computer?

I am already past the age of second grade, but this book gave me that feeling of second grade. I hope the author can continue writing. By the way, let me tell you my own thoughts. The author can refer to them as appropriate, or you can ignore them completely. I really hope that my thoughts can give the author suggestions, but I am also afraid of interfering with the author's thinking, so you can make up your own mind! The first thing is about the ability of prophets to predict the future. This ability can be said to be bug-level, but the writing is also full of bugs. First of all, it is about the future. The possibilities of the future are endless. If someone can predict the future, then the result he predicts is the predicted result. The predicted result is the predicted result... Endless. This is a bug. However, you don't need to pay attention to this kind of detail in the novel, just ignore it. As for the application of this ability, there are already many works that can be referenced, such as Nicolas Cage's Foreseeing the Future or Tom Cruise's Minority Report. There is no need to elaborate too much on the prospects of this ability. According to my idea, Death is Coming is also a good reference. In addition, there are accidental killers. The method of killing people using various mechanical skills is very suitable for predicting ability. However, if it is simpler, then get a Barrett anomaly special sniper rifle, hide and shoot from ten thousand meters away, because when you shoot, you can already predict whether you can hit it, and you don't need to care about your shooting skills at all. Even in the future, will there be an ability like the good luck girl in One Piece, where she can directly kill her opponent through a chain reaction by just flicking a coin. In addition, there is no need to be so troublesome about the collection of intelligence. You can let the protagonist keep a diary, sort out the information collected in daily life, and write it all in the diary. By predicting the future, watching the subsequent diaries... This method can completely effectively organize the information. I even thought about talking to my future self through the protagonist's abilities. There is also a plot about the protagonist pretending to be cool, watching people from the future communicate... In the eyes of others, it feels a bit like a fool. You might as well know what the other person is saying through your ability before the person on the other side speaks, and answer directly before the opponent asks questions. In terms of ability, I will write so much first. This is also my own idea. The author can just show it to you. Well, in terms of plot, you can make up your own mind. When I first saw that bus, I had an idea. Could it be controlled by a web spinner? Or maybe this bus was owned by the witch. So would snatching it also give the witch a warning? Anyway, the witch will definitely not dare to take action. As long as it does not exceed the bottom line, it will be robbed. I even imagined whether there would be a big battle in the future when a bus would suddenly drive out from the void, and a bunch of Mingri members would descend from it. It would be such a surprising, magical, interesting and curious scene.

The follow-up reading I saw from other authors is really important for newbies, thank you

Recently I saw a picture, and I feel that his blindfolded tone really looks like a prophet, hehe, let's take a look

It's really sad. I liked this book very much, but I ended up going to find Tianyuan as a eunuch near the end. The prophet's journey has no end. When you were an eunuch, he was still fighting against time! Doesn't this extend the prophet's time endlessly? I want an ending!

A man who has just graduated from college, with a bunch of half-grown children, who are not yet 60 years old, we want to save the world, hahaha (ಡωಡ) The 68-year-old security guard at the entrance of hiahiahia said that he still has too little homework.

2p pure enjoyment of vertical painting (?) Someone has released xp, just take a look (paralysis)

Yes, I feel that there is tension and excitement, but there also needs to be the brilliance of humanity, such as a brother to a sister, a sister to a sister, or between brothers, or between lovers, a great relationship. Or the happy picture of grilled fish in a golden environment

The most ideal photo I can think of is actually this one that I substituted at the beginning. I feel that Ding Yan is a little less intellectual and a little more naive than this one, but at least he is still a serious college student (By the way, the picture is from Miyoushe. I can delete it if I am not satisfied with the original picture)

You are not Yang, you are Ga

Okay, what the hell were you doing when you first met the witch? ? Riddlers just do riddles for the sake of riddles. Doing too many riddles will make people feel bored. There are many kinds of ambush plots, so there is no need to keep asking the Riddler. It is fun for your protagonist to be the Riddler for the supporting characters. Doing riddles for readers, are you trying to make an airplane? Brother, if you really can't do it, stop writing books and go to Gotham to be the Riddler 😄 Haha

How should I put it? After reading Chapter 19, I personally feel that I was attracted by the introduction. The author feels that the writing style is not enough. It feels weird to read. The second is the section where the web weaver broke the defense. I can't figure out why he suddenly broke the defense? ? And there is Chapter 15: The protagonist and Lin Shu are forcibly brought together. The two have not known each other for a long time. They just say a few words and think a lot. Can the protagonist make Lin Shu so happy with just one sentence? ? Also, when I was pretending to be the Riddler, maybe I didn't see much of it. I felt like I was just pretending. It was very embarrassing. It was really embarrassing.

How to say it? Looking at it, I always feel that it smells like a small family.

I'm going

It was good at the beginning, but later on, it was very blunt, talking to itself, pretending to be inscrutable, just once or twice. When meeting people, it talked to itself, about timelines, the long history of time, destiny, etc. The more you read it, the more disgusting it becomes. I'm sick.

Absolutely, it's embarrassing for students, but it's just right for adults.

The protagonist and Hermes enter the abyss, and time is on the verge of collapse due to the conflict between the "Bering" personality and the basic rules. The protagonist uses the "wrong" rules to kill all the Berings, and the personality of time is destroyed. The protagonist gets the authority of time, which in turn restricts the wrong rules, and uses endless time to eliminate alien species in countless parallel worlds, thereby eliminating the concept of alien species. In the end, only the "wrong" protagonist is left. The protagonist becomes a god, and the concept of alien species is erased. The protagonist finally activates the power of time, and the world regresses to a state without alien species. The protagonist becomes an observer of time. People no longer remember the alien species and cannot learn the name of the prophet. Get the ending you want

Come on, after waiting for so long, the author is gone, and he didn't even say a word. I laughed so hard that all the things I bought before were in vain.

A rookie who only knows how to draw Q-versions goes crazy after the match () Relying on impressions to draw the main character () Nothing is the same except for the red scarf (?)

Notification, the sun has passed, it is a eunuch

It seems that he is a eunuch. A look at the catalog shows that the book has been completed. So many people asked but he didn't even answer. Alas.

🙏Because even if you don't agree with what the book club says, it will still be more or less offensive to you, and you may be a little more biased when reading novels, intentionally or unintentionally. So if you read the book circle and think this book is not good, That's a big mistake! 😎😎😎 So far, I think the author has written very well. WrongProphecy That one can be said to have followed me all the way down and thought about the timeline. I was also surprised. It was the kind of thinking that didn't stop, but it still surprised me. It was impressive. There are some areas in the early stage that the author did not handle well, such as some details, and some very small settings that were forgotten by the author (similar to if this shotgun is not used later, it should not be hung on the wall in the first place), If you think the author's writing is messy, I suggest you not read it; if you think it is childish, I suggest you read this novel without prejudice. 👍First of all, the first point. This is a different world! ! ! The characters, history, and composition in it are not exactly the same as our modern world. Needless to say, this is unless you missed out on the nine-year compulsory education, or you simply gave up on the two subjects of history and politics at the beginning or did not think about it at all. (I personally think there shouldn't be a lot of this kind of situation, after all, similar speeches will be criticized by most readers as long as they think about it for a moment) Second point. It is not that as the protagonist group becomes stronger, the people around them also begin toappear in situations where disaster levels are as high as🐶. Instead, the protagonist was in the prophecy of his ability from the beginning, and deliberately approached and solved these places where the origin of disaster and various big monsters appeared in the prophecy. The author has never written it in the article. Except for the place where the protagonist appears, various disaster levels have begun to spread in other places (just think about it, there is no need to play it at all). So instead of disasters and prophecies actively coming to the protagonist's side from the beginning, the protagonist directly sticks to them. Later, the protagonist gradually developed a reputation, so some old guys and old monsters gradually turned their attention to the protagonist. The third and most important point! Some people say that prophets like prophets who have the ability to predict but cannot fight should be controlled. I was really confused when I saw it. Let me give you a rough analysis of the protagonist (my personal opinion): Well, as of the wrong prophecy chapter, a total of four prophets have appeared. Two of them have already been sent, and they are still fake (this is not a spoiler). The protagonist counts as one. Another Prophet (anyone who has seen it knows it, so I won't spoil it). Whether it is these two true prophets or the other two false prophets mentioned in passing, it can be said that once prophecies are released and slightly confirmed, they will have a great influence. Even the far-fetched ones will have an impact for a while. Coupled with the horrific description of precognitive ability that is carried out almost throughout the book, sideways and frontally, it is outrageous that this person can even be locked up. If you want to arrest me, I already know it and run away. By the time you come, I will be gone. ←This is almost the case. The protagonist's ability is constantly improving. Whether it is his ability to predict or his frontal combat strength, all the deficiencies in frontal combat ability are made up for by prediction (it can be simply understood that I have predicted that you will make this move, and I will immediately change my posture to give you a big one). Some people think that the protagonist will be caught when he is weak at the beginning. Laughing to death, take the example of the witch. When the protagonist was weak, he made perfect use of the right time, place, and people to help him avoid crisis after crisis and achieve the optimal solution. Being weak also has its advantages, Because you are too weak Too unknown, So the big forces don't even know who you are! Let alone arrest you. And when the official forces really learned about the protagonist, the protagonist already had a strong ability to protect himself. Now that the protagonist has gained some fame, he is still considered a threat by those villains who have abilities but don't know much about the protagonist, but are not that dangerous. (They had this mentality before being dunked by the protagonist. It's understandable, because you don't know the protagonist's abilities in detail if you don't understand them How terrifying is it? If you really want to experience his terror, you can only keep seeing the back all the way, and then it will become more and more terrifying. Fortunately, he is your teammate). I don't know if anyone will think that the author has opened up his cheating fingers. So I'd better mention it. If you want to survive this worldview in the future, it is unlikely for ordinary people to survive (those who survive are all madmen, and madmen are not ordinary). If you want to be able to protect yourself, you must first rely on talent, and secondly, luck. If you want to live a successful life among the survivors, you must either follow the same path as An Jianxiu's subordinates, or have extremely strong abilities, such as the Red Lotus Walker. Because Walker is under the control of the protagonist, it is not obvious. Just imagine if he is the protagonist, I think everyone will think that he is Long Aotian. Using the red lotus in his body as the "golden finger" is much more abrupt than the protagonist. The classic divine power comes from heaven to help, and then the protagonist becomes his grandfather hahahaha. Look at the other people under the protagonist, some are born crazy, some have great backgrounds, some are extremely talented... Then look at the villains, it's even more outrageous - they were born with half or full level. The human side is already weak enough, but this is a traitor, a deviation in thinking, and an internal consumption of human fundamentals. Can we still play if we cut them down again? ? ? The most important thing is to look at history. And the degree of utilization is much more outrageous than the protagonist, including a certain meteorite falling from the sky. They all say that reality is more magical than fiction. There is no need to explain this. 👏Last point, speaking of the author's writing styleXiaobai, first of all, the author's writing style is constantly improving. Comparing the chapter on the wrong prediction with the first chapter, we can see the author's rapid progress. The foreshadowing and the flexible changes in the timeline can no longer be described as novices. Even if we take the early cards as an example, White is still the best. It combines the second grade , fantasy, and Prophetliu very well. There are very few books in the same genre. If you don't read this book, you won't find anything more delicious. So I hope the author will not give up. Come on, I will vote for you every month. 👏 By the way, if you give up thinking while reading, it is normal, then It means that you are overthinking and need to slow down. If you feel that any one of them is suddenly strange, then rest assured, I will definitely explain the next few.

The positioning of Elio in Star Railroad and the protagonist are similar. Did the author go to mhy to work as a copywriter, so he cut the book? (

Hey, man, something really happened to you, right? ! It would be nice to give an accurate message to report that you are safe...

I'm crying. Why is this beautiful novel cut off at such a crucial point? I'm really being punished by God. I beg you, author. Write 1,000 more, book friends can do anything 😭😭😭