Douluo: Legend of the Dragon Phoenix

Oh, isn't this Immortal Emperor Yunze? Why haven't we seen each other for so long? Go to the small world of Douluo to play house with a group of children? No, no, no, I can't see that you, the mighty Immortal Emperor, still have such a childish side! Hahahahaha!

Do you read what you wrote? In the first chapter, it was written that the male protagonist was able to make a hundred thousand-year-old soul beast kneel down by relying only on coercion. He had the strength of a god king, but in the third chapter, it was directly mentioned that he has become an ordinary person? Not cultivated? After 6 years of sucking the living gold, all the gold has been sucked into the dog? Why don't you correct the inconsistency? The invincible novel is said to be useless again

I think this problem mainly arises in two aspects. First, the writing style of Douluo Dalu is biased toward the Western fantasy system, and there are many elements of online games. Adding the identity of the Immortal Emperor, a Chinese cultivation system, to this background is like eating beggar's chicken in a French restaurant. Putting these two unrelated elements together will inevitably give readers a huge sense of separation. Secondly, in the eyes of most people, the Immortal Emperor is of very high status, usually in the last few realms of a work. Not to mention covering the sky, it is much more powerful than the entire universe, and it is definitely an existence that spans the entire universe. The most expressive one in the entire Douluo series is that in The Legend of Tang Sect Heroes, a dozen god kings plus the power of the seven god realms break out of the black hole. The huge gap in expression between the two also gives the work a huge sense of fragmentation. I think it would be better for this work to change the identity of the protagonist to the creator god of a certain god world or star¹. Note 1: The Divine Star is a planet in the Legend of Heroes of Tang Sect that is more powerful than the Divine Realm and is comparable to a star.

The author must not become a disciple! It would be too poisonous for the majestic Immortal Emperor to have an ant as his teacher.

The author suggests that when the time comes, the Golden Dragon King's bloodline in Tang Wulin's body should be extracted and given to Gu Yuena to merge into the Dragon God's bloodline to make up for his shortcomings.

Fighting the Silver Dragon King

Viewed 634 photos. I can already imagine what the subsequent plot will be like. I don't know why you read this book in the first place? I am a bookworm. Plus this is the first Dou San fanfic I've read. The protagonist has his own main plot. I'm not someone who can't write without the original work. Let me summarize this book. This book is placed in Urban Literature. It's the second generation of rich people in trouble. Encountered Miss Decline by chance. Then the rich second generation made a deal with the lady. Then the rich second generation helped the young lady revive the family. In the process, the young lady developed a secret love for the rich second generation. Then the girl's journey of licking dogs and chasing stars began. With his unremitting efforts, the second generation of rich people gradually became fond of him. The young lady confessed to the rich second representative. The rich second generation refused. I'm not a casual person. We are just friends for now. The lady said firmly. I'll make you fall in love with me. Then the rich second generation helped the young lady revive the family. The transaction has been completed. The rich second generation will leave soon. The lady also knows. Still struggled for a long time. Then he made up his mind to leave with the rich second generation. He planned to give up the position of team leader to his rich second generation. After thinking about it for a while, he agreed. Emphasis, emphasis. They are just friends now. The rich second generation said that I will definitely let you be in my place in the future. One of the richest men. I want to say that rich people, you, an ordinary friend, are treated very well. If you are treated so well, then your friends must be flying all over the world. What are your friends? Friendship is established when the other person is equal. In the case of mutual interests, I am the richest man in the world. Would you make friends with a beggar? Will help a beggar become a rich man. Even if a beggar saved my life. Will I help him become a rich man? What's more, he didn't help with anything. It's just a transaction. Transaction completed. Just an ordinary friend. The heroine has lived for hundreds of thousands of years. It was the leader of the soul beast clan who made an adolescent girl suck. And this protagonist. He was still an Immortal Emperor and lived for endless years. It would be too easy to become friends with a big guy like you. I have lived with you for more than ten years. You can help him become the boss of your world. Not very poisonous, but a lot of minor poisons. All I can say is that the character is broken. All I can say is that it's empty. Others are completely inconsistent. The longer people live, the more like monsters they become. I haven't seen any woman in a long time. What have you not experienced? Vision and its high vision and its breadth. I have been with you for more than ten years. Help you become a strong man in his world. Became friends with you. Then you, the Immortal Emperor, lived like a dog. Then your friends must not be spread all over your world. That person is the top powerhouse in your share of the world. You have so many resources! You are truly a living Bodhisattva in this world! Do good deeds without leaving a name or asking for anything in return. Biji hopes that the young master and the young lady can achieve positive results as soon as possible. Make me embarrassed. The dignified Immortal Emperor cuts the grass without eradicating the roots. I guess the male protagonist of Spring Breeze Killed the Immortal Emperor killed Huo Yuhao. The protagonist has a high possibility of releasing Huo Yuhao's soul. The protagonist also wants to free half of the people in the God Realm. Kill half and keep half. If the ashes of the real Immortal Lord were raised for you. It lifts up your entire universe. Look at what this Immortal Lord does. The sign set for the protagonist is too high. Make sure to do something for kids. The character collapses and cannot be controlled. And Gu Yue. Lived for hundreds of thousands of years. You made him look like a girl in heat licking a dog. And you created the protagonist. Lived for countless epochs. This is my first time watching Douluo 3. That's okay. If you've seen something similar, don't watch it. To put it another way, if the strength is not good, the personality is too high. When your strength does not match your identity, your problems will follow. Overall, I would give this book a six. No more. If it weren't for my amazing physique, I would have died from the poison. Large toxins do not. But smaller toxins are more deadly. I figured out the rest of the plot in my head. I have even figured out some of the plot of the second part. I dare not look at the back. I was afraid I would die suddenly on the spot. The plot is pretty good. It's just that the writing is poor. The writing is just satisfactory. I feel a little reluctant to finish writing it. What's more, I want to write a second part in a row. That wouldn't even kill a piece of fish. Purely personal opinion. In fact, it's pretty good in fan fiction. Maybe I'm too picky. Have you ever seen the snow falling in the world? Have you ever seen the blood floating in the world? Whether the devil is evil or not, the world has its own Feng Jiuge. Fangyuan lives for me. Witness the wonders of this world!

Seedlings are worth raising, but the wording used in a long fantasy novel like Chaos Yuanlong seems awkward. Maybe I'm tired of reading too many novels like this.

Ah Yin and Xiao Wu Tao Tuo's soul beast traitor

Yunze