The Legend of Dragon and Phoenix of Douluo

I've been messing around with those forces every day for so many chapters. I'm tired of reading it. I'm not in a hurry to improve my own strength. Why don't I focus on improving my own strength and then suppress everything? You play games with those forces every day, scheming and scheming. Either you slander me or I slander you. Don't you find it annoying to watch? Moreover, you, the Immortal Emperor, play with these natives every day, which is so out of character. I thought you were rushing to become a god and then develop your power outside the stars. You, the Immortal Emperor, are so slow in cultivation.

Oh, isn't this Immortal Emperor Yunze? Why haven't we seen each other for so long? Go to the small world of Douluo to play house with a group of children? No, no, no, I can't see that you, the mighty Immortal Emperor, still have such a childish side! Hahahahaha!

Do you read what you wrote? In the first chapter, it was written that the male protagonist was able to make a hundred thousand-year-old soul beast kneel down by relying only on coercion. He had the strength of a god king, but in the third chapter, it was directly mentioned that he has become an ordinary person? Not cultivated? After 6 years of sucking the living gold, all the gold has been sucked into the dog? Why don't you correct the inconsistency? The invincible novel is said to be useless again

I think this problem mainly arises in two aspects. First, the writing style of Douluo Dalu is biased toward the Western fantasy system, and there are many elements of online games. Adding the identity of the Immortal Emperor, a Chinese cultivation system, to this background is like eating beggar's chicken in a French restaurant. Putting these two unrelated elements together will inevitably give readers a huge sense of separation. Secondly, in the eyes of most people, the Immortal Emperor is of very high status, usually in the last few realms of a work. Not to mention covering the sky, it is much more powerful than the entire universe, and it is definitely an existence that spans the entire universe. The most expressive one in the entire Douluo series is that in The Legend of Tang Sect Heroes, a dozen god kings plus the power of the seven god realms break out of the black hole. The huge gap in expression between the two also gives the work a huge sense of fragmentation. I think it would be better for this work to change the identity of the protagonist to the creator god of a certain god world or star¹. Note 1: The Divine Star is a planet in the Legend of Heroes of Tang Sect that is more powerful than the Divine Realm and is comparable to a star.

The author must not become a disciple! It would be too poisonous for the majestic Immortal Emperor to have an ant as his teacher.

The author suggests that when the time comes, the Golden Dragon King's bloodline in Tang Wulin's body should be extracted and given to Gu Yuena to merge into the Dragon God's bloodline to make up for his shortcomings.

Fighting the Silver Dragon King

Viewed 634 photos. I can already imagine what the subsequent plot will be like. I don't know why you read this book in the first place? I am a bookworm. Plus this is the first Dou San fanfic I've read. The protagonist has his own main plot. I'm not someone who can't write without the original work. Let me summarize this book. This book is placed in Urban Literature. It's the second generation of rich people in trouble. Encountered Miss Decline by chance. Then the rich second generation made a deal with the lady. Then the rich second generation helped the young lady revive the family. In the process, the young lady developed a secret love for the rich second generation. Then the girl's journey of licking dogs and chasing stars began. With his unremitting efforts, the second generation of rich people gradually became fond of him. The young lady confessed to the rich second representative. The rich second generation refused. I'm not a casual person. We are just friends for now. The lady said firmly. I'll make you fall in love with me. Then the rich second generation helped the young lady revive the family. The transaction has been completed. The rich second generation will leave soon. The lady also knows. Still struggled for a long time. Then he made up his mind to leave with the rich second generation. He planned to give up the position of team leader to his rich second generation. After thinking about it for a while, he agreed. Emphasis, emphasis. They are just friends now. The rich second generation said that I will definitely let you be in my place in the future. One of the richest men. I want to say that rich people, you, an ordinary friend, are treated very well. If you are treated so well, then your friends must be flying all over the world. What are your friends? Friendship is established when the other person is equal. In the case of mutual interests, I am the richest man in the world. Would you make friends with a beggar? Will help a beggar become a rich man. Even if a beggar saved my life. Will I help him become a rich man? What's more, he didn't help with anything. It's just a transaction. Transaction completed. Just an ordinary friend. The heroine has lived for hundreds of thousands of years. It was the leader of the soul beast clan who made an adolescent girl suck. And this protagonist. He was still an Immortal Emperor and lived for endless years. It would be too easy to become friends with a big guy like you. I have lived with you for more than ten years. You can help him become the boss of your world. Not very poisonous, but a lot of minor poisons. All I can say is that the character is broken. All I can say is that it's empty. Others are completely inconsistent. The longer people live, the more like monsters they become. I haven't seen any woman in a long time. What have you not experienced? Vision and its high vision and its breadth. I have been with you for more than ten years. Help you become a strong man in his world. Became friends with you. Then you, the Immortal Emperor, lived like a dog. Then your friends must not be spread all over your world. That person is the top powerhouse in your share of the world. You have so many resources! You are truly a living Bodhisattva in this world! Do good deeds without leaving a name or asking for anything in return. Biji hopes that the young master and the young lady can achieve positive results as soon as possible. Make me embarrassed. The dignified Immortal Emperor cuts the grass without eradicating the roots. I guess the male protagonist of Spring Breeze Killed the Immortal Emperor killed Huo Yuhao. The protagonist has a high possibility of releasing Huo Yuhao's soul. The protagonist also wants to free half of the people in the God Realm. Kill half and keep half. If the ashes of the real Immortal Lord were raised for you. It lifts up your entire universe. Look at what this Immortal Lord does. The sign set for the protagonist is too high. Make sure to do something for kids. The character collapses and cannot be controlled. And Gu Yue. Lived for hundreds of thousands of years. You made him look like a girl in heat licking a dog. And you created the protagonist. Lived for countless epochs. This is my first time watching Douluo 3. That's okay. If you've seen something similar, don't watch it. To put it another way, if the strength is not good, the personality is too high. When your strength does not match your identity, your problems will follow. Overall, I would give this book a six. No more. If it weren't for my amazing physique, I would have died from the poison. Large toxins do not. But smaller toxins are more deadly. I figured out the rest of the plot in my head. I have even figured out some of the plot of the second part. I dare not look at the back. I was afraid I would die suddenly on the spot. The plot is pretty good. It's just that the writing is poor. The writing is just satisfactory. I feel a little reluctant to finish writing it. What's more, I want to write a second part in a row. That wouldn't even kill a piece of fish. Purely personal opinion. In fact, it's pretty good in fan fiction. Maybe I'm too picky. Have you ever seen the snow falling in the world? Have you ever seen the blood floating in the world? Whether the devil is evil or not, the world has its own Feng Jiuge. Fangyuan lives for me. Witness the wonders of this world!

Seedlings are worth raising, but the wording used in a long fantasy novel like Chaos Yuanlong seems awkward. Maybe I'm tired of reading too many novels like this.

Ah Yin and Xiao Wu Tao Tuo's soul beast traitor

Yunze

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This Immortal Emperor is also weak enough. Why do you have such a domineering name? Go for one. Ordinary people. Can bring the world of God JJ

It is not an exaggeration to say that the Ming Dynasty and the Ming Dynasty are traitors to the soul beasts.

Tsk, tsk, tsk, this protagonist's Immortal Emperor's cultivation level cannot be in a low-level fantasy world that is only slightly stronger than Douluo Continent. Otherwise, how could it be possible that he could barely beat the people of Douluo Continent? A few epochs are many years! What a waste, this can't be the Immortal Emperor of the Cave Heaven Realm in the perfect world, right? He has lived on a dog in these epochs, oh no, the dog has been training for several epochs, and the city is deeper than the protagonist. He can casually plot against everyone in the Douluo Continent. The protagonist can't start training from an imbecile, right? Only the Immortal Emperor who has cultivated to the Cave Heaven Realm has the IQ of an ordinary person, right? (It's a fact that I don't have Black Douluo Continent. People who have lived for several epochs can barely play Douluo Continent. People who are only a few dozen years old. If he were not the protagonist, Tang San could easily plot him to death. Tsk tsk tsk. These days, any novel can say that he is the rebirth of the Immortal Emperor.)

There is Yao Lao in the Endless Fire Realm, but Yu Xiaogang is not seen in the God Realm The grudges are clearly scattered in the clouds, and all five hundred soul masters are slaughtered The Fire Realm is established on the border, and it leads to the abyss. Can I be a human being? The grace of a drop of water is repaid by a spring. How many years of care will it pay off? Mu Chen has become a master, when will Yuhao be free? Xiao Mei and Xiao Yu were divided as much as they wanted, while Chenxiang's cousin was turned into ashes Never cause trouble, he is not afraid of trouble, he is a mediocre person who dare not cause trouble Ascend the Qian Yuan Qi, the god of the Tang Dynasty for ten thousand years Guard the Da Qian against the evil clan, how many people will die in the ten thousand years plan? Never claimed to be a good person, Tang Sanshao was pure and pure

After reading the first three chapters, I knew that this book was just like capturing a goddess and becoming invincible. It was a mindless re-editing of the novel. With such a strong strength, you still want to show off your wealth with mortals, just like billionaires like Bill Gates and Muggle Vine show off their wealth to beggars 🤫

I can't see the domineering power that an Immortal Emperor should have at all. I just feel that he's very low and doesn't live up to his name at all.

I feel like this was written by Dou San, so it's okay. After all, there's too little written, either it's awkward, or it's slow-paced and drags the book to death. In some places, the character writing is a bit broken. For example, the soul beast doesn't even care about increasing its lifespan, but it's a little bit concerned about money... And Gu Yuena actually needs to be taught to absorb the bloodline of a Golden Dragon King? These two points are indeed relatively poisonous points, but compared to most other Dou San fandoms, they are indeed okay. I can barely accept these poisonous points, but I still hope that they can be changed so as not to forcibly lower IQ.

There is something wrong with an Immortal Emperor who offends others and then uses public opinion pressure to do it, refuses to admit it to others, and tries to reason with others in a fantasy world. Hahahahahaha, it doesn't work. It makes me laugh to death, I'm afraid he is not a nuclear bomb Immortal Emperor.

The protagonist is the Immortal Emperor. It stands to reason that as long as you have enough energy, you can continue to level up. You don't have to worry about your state of mind. Why does your level rise so slowly?

Divine Phoenix Immortal Emperor... How did a man get this title? Shouldn't the man be the Divine Phoenix Immortal Emperor?

It takes so much effort for an Immortal Emperor to fight a Douluo.

The double standard went too far, scolding Tang San while doing something almost as dirty as Tang San.

Let's talk about the shortcomings First, the Immortal Emperor is forced to lose one place and two places, and the contact with his subordinates needs to be through outsiders. Third, there is a lack of energy in practice. It turns out that practicing with huge energy will lead to instability of the state? The reason why people's realms are unstable and cannot break through quickly is because they have to stay in this realm for a while and experience the mystery of this realm, not because they use huge amounts of energy to make your realm unstable.

Pick a big one among the short ones. This book is already very good in Douluo fan fiction. The author's book is to give the protagonist a cock-shaking personality. He is the only one in the sky and the earth. I like this kind of personality, but I don't want to talk about the things that this kind of character does. Anyway, it is disgusting. I don't understand which immortal emperor this emperor is. I remember he is talking about the apex. The Immortal Emperor in Cultivation of Immortals, how did he become an Immortal Emperor? Cutting off the roots but not eradicating the roots is actually a suspicion that he was brought to the Immortal Emperor. Killing half and keeping the other half is disgusting anyway. It really doesn't affect you, but it looks disgusting to me. If you can't write that kind of character, don't be in this kind of character. I'm going to blow up the character and then write about it as a child. The style of doing things is very NC

Are there any fanfics in Legend of the Dragon King where Gu Yuena is not the heroine and it is best to kill her in the end and is anti-Tang San?

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This "Dragon and Phoenix Legend" is much better than the original work. I hope the author will work hard.

Why do you want to make the Silver Dragon King look like a little girl? It's so disgusting.