The Sect Growth Plan of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality

Poison Point 1 This is a time traveler, but he has no memory of his own, only the memory of the indigenous people, and no plot memory of mortals. But sometimes their thinking patterns and personalities are like modern people. This is very contradictory. Either you write about time-travelers, or you write about pure aborigines. Of course, if it is well written, this book can also be read. Poison Point 2 Take the initiative to learn Elephant Armor Kung Fu. The reason is that the heavenly secret diagram shows that this technique is white light, which is an opportunity. Logically, there is nothing wrong with it, you must seize the opportunity. But this setting is the biggest poisonous point. What is Elephant Armor Gong? It is a technique that trains people to become corpses. Look at the practice methods written, the practice methods for self-mutilation. The immortal cultivator's physical body is so damaged that he cannot use his physical body anymore. How many hidden wounds will your self-mutilation technique leave behind? Elixirs for clearing erysipelas and treating meridians are very rare in the world of immortality, and cannot be bought with money. If the author can make this setting, I know that the subsequent plot will be unwatchable. Don't say there are no side effects, and don't say it can be made up for later. There is no point in forcing a mentally retarded plot. Instead, it is better to write a book about other physical exercises. So now I only see these two poisonous points, so I urge you to retreat.

A great benefactor in the world of immortality, allocates disciple resources according to needs, and provides various elixirs, magic tools, and exercises for free. What kind of communism is this?

It's extremely poisonous. This setting is about natives who are born literate, and still have the memory and understanding of adults. What kind of sect plans can they have, and they also have their own skills. How many people have been persuaded to quit in the Golden Three Chapters?

Sorry, eunuch protagonist, I can't see it, after all, I'm a normal person

The more I read, the more I feel that the protagonist's cheating is outrageous, and after the protagonist established the sect, he wandered outside every day. Most of the functions of the central building of the sect were basically unavailable. He benefited the group of disciples and provided free kung fu and Lin Dan snacks until the foundation was established. I think it is possible for a mortal to cultivate the world of immortality. When the protagonist comes back from wandering, he will probably be a kind master and a filial son.

Author, forget about your writing style! But when writing a fanfic, you have to respect the original setting, right? Otherwise, why would it be the same?

The title of the book is martial arts, but almost no martial arts is mentioned.

This book has nothing to do with the sect. It is entirely about Zhujiao wandering around alone.

With 400 Foundation Establishment Pills, even Han Li's success rate in refining pills was ridiculously high. In just the past few years, he was still running around, where could he come from so many medicinal materials?

It's outrageous that he is still wandering around regardless of his own sect.

Dear fellow Taoists who are passing by, please click to collect and recommend. It is the first time that Hu has written a book. If there is any immaturity, I would like to express my gratitude to all fellow Taoists for their support!

I don't know why the author wrote it like this. The protagonist is only in the Qi refining stage, so why should he stop someone in the Dan formation stage from being seriously injured? In that secret realm, there is only the strength of the foundation building stage. There are also a lot of people.

This is a book with all kinds of ruined settings. It has no outline and is written to that point. It is simply a source of mental pollution.

Why do I say it looks too confusing, and the protagonist has been in the world for so long and looks like a fool. How about he went out with Han Li to cultivate immortality and has more experience than Han Li. However, he has been in the sect for so long and still looks like a novice. The author should look at the changes in Han Li's heart during this period of the original work (around the time of the Bloody Forbidden Land).

Do so many people like the clan stream and clan stream? Isn't this a proper nanny for good fortune?

Come on! Do you have the confidence to write so many words on science and cultivation of immortality?

Fellow Taoists who have signed a contract and have monthly votes cast some monthly votes, and Hu is grateful.

There is a deliberate feeling You show understanding between the lines, but on the surface you pretend to know nothing It's very awkward You don't know anything but you quote everything from the original book, it's too deliberate

Keep up the good work, persevere, and don't give up just because you didn't sign the contract, I'm optimistic about you!

What should I say! Everything else was well written, but when I saw the protagonist absorbing demonic energy, I found that it was not suitable for me. If the protagonist is a demon cultivator, it would be normal, but he is not a demon cultivator! What's more important is that I came to read novels about cultivating qi and cultivating immortals, not novels about cultivating bodies and cultivating immortals. After arriving in the Sea of ​​Chaos Stars, I have been refining my body!

I haven't finished the first one yet. Is the protagonist an indigenous person?

Great and relaxing fairy tale! 👍

The book wasteland has moved on, and the tower defense is the public enemy.

It is rare for an author to have perseverance and perseverance. Come on, author.

The author writes well. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Click on the avatar to go directly.

Well written! If you subscribe, you will get a monthly pass for free. Come on author.

The protagonist's personality is not very good and he is not suitable to be the leader of the clan.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are disturbing, please mute me.