Konoha: My Brother's Name Is Minato

Brother, I advise you to change your vest, otherwise these 5 eunuchs will be too scary.

True Uchiha 25Ai

Mad, I don't even dare to look at it. You know, when you go to the author's homepage, all the good guys are eunuchs.

I'm really convinced. I really beg you writers who write mindless fan fiction, can you please stop forcing the protagonist? In the beginning, the protagonist has the Eternal Kaleidoscope, and Thunderbolt awakens. As a result, he conducts a small magic experiment and makes the protagonist blind for a week due to excessive use of pupil power. He can't use the kaleidoscope for a year. Brother, this fucking is the Eternal Kaleidoscope. Sasuke and Naruto fought for so long after the Fourth World War and their eyes were not blinded. Why on earth did you stop the force of nature from exploding and your eyes were blinded? Brother, if you don't know how to write, why don't you just start the game with invincibility?

Even if the combination of natural energy and chakra explodes, it is impossible to injure an Eternal-Eyed Uchiha into coma. That's too ridiculous. Susanoo can't wrap it up? Can't the protagonist touch Minato with his other hand and take him to the Thunder God?

Uchiha Hongyun, Uchiha Zhenyuan, Uchiha Hongjun, Uchiha Nuwa... Why don't you write about Uchiha Tathagata?

Author, stop writing about political economy, you are too bad

It can only be said that the protagonist is a weak Uchiha. It is a pity that a weak person has the same power as Uchiha Madara, but does not have that kind of courage.

I can't say Big Poison, but this is the most boring and grinding fanfic I've ever read. I only wrote about half of it in order to perfect my second creation practice. . . It makes me feel like I read the novel more than ten years ago

It's really awkward to see all the postures from behind.

It looks good. The character of the protagonist is enough to make people look at it without irritation. However, I have some doubts about the choice of the heroine. If it is Liuli, do you want to describe her in detail? It's a bit thin now. If it's not her, then it should be Tsunade? But Tsunade appears too little, so of course it doesn't matter if there is no heroine or more. .

The protagonist is so weak and his strength is not matched.

Not bad, not bad. If you have your own things, you can understand if you calm down. The person who scolded you has eaten too much fast food and can't think clearly, right?

It's all politics and I don't like it. The start is kaleidoscope. Why are you still engaging in politics? Just push it flatly.

Konoha, your brother's name is Shunliu

Wow, what did I see? The peerless great eunuch (Gao Yao's affirmation), you are entering the palace a bit frequently now. I, the chief eunuch, need your talents.

The author's thinking is wrong. Namikaze Minato became Hokage because of the compromise and recognition of the major forces in Konoha. It was not "selected" by some civilian ninja. Without the consent of the Third Hokage, the elders of Konoha, the senior officials of the major families, and the jounin class (the jounin class is also controlled by the family ninjas), or if they are firmly opposed by these forces, how could Namikaze become the Hokage? Namikaze Minato is a civilian ninja, but that doesn't mean that he must firmly represent the interests of civilian ninjas and offend all the major ninja clans. Otherwise, if he really has such extreme thoughts and positions, then he can't be Hokage at all!

I think the author should not have absorbed all his power. There is no confrontation and no passion. The politics he writes are too childish, really. . .

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Why is it said that the third generation represents the ninja clan? Just by looking at him accepting apprentices, you can tell that he wants to make Hokage out of the common people! Moreover, it was his operation that allowed the Fourth Hokage to rise to the position, otherwise Minato wouldn't be able to become Hokage. The conspiracy theory written is too poor, just like the protagonist says he doesn't understand politics but writes about politics.

Just put it on the shelves. If you don't want to charge money, you don't have to put it on the shelves.

Your brother is Minato, and there is no direct eternity in a process. Why not just add the perfect magic technique to the Six Paths? It's not a conspiracy theory or a counterattack. It's really not interesting at all. Even if a family member dies, there's no emotion at all. It can only be said that it's not interesting at all. The protagonist has no charm at all.

It's so scary, Master, why do you write all about eunuchs?

In the first chapter, he started boasting about being invincible under the Six Paths, and then forcibly sealed his eyes. If you don't want the protagonist to be invincible at the beginning, then don't set it up like this. In the end, it will disgust you and the readers.