My Experience in Konoha Liver

I'd like to ask, is there a female protagonist? Is this book going to be a novel without a heroine or with a heroine?

Catch up on the latest in one go. It is a high-quality fanfic that completely disrupts the original work and has its own style. The protagonist is a time traveler who doesn't rely too much on plug-ins and knows the plot. There are really many preparations for becoming stronger. The character of the original work has not been changed. It is a Naruto fanfic that makes people doubt whether this book is a novel or a biography. It's just short, not enough to look at! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this!

This author, you don't want to not read this book every day, right?

By the way, in Naruto, the upper limit of sword skills is not low, right? At the level of White Fang and Mifune, he can be considered a mini-boss even in the later stage. If equipped with a fairy mode, the environment will not retreat until Kaguya comes out If I have to say it, what Naruto can use in the later stage is the fairy eyes, fairy body and fairy mode. But these are either innate, and if you have to write, it is better to arrange them into the family directly at the beginning; or you must at least graduate from the ninja school before you can get in touch with them, and the protagonist can't get them. The most critical point is that the protagonist does not have many choices, but has nothing, and relies entirely on the teacher's support. In this case, it's good to have a systematic training method. I really don't understand why the protagonist would look down on it.

What was written before is so good, and the preparation is hard work and new techniques are developed, and there is also system possession. In the end, the Sharingan is still inseparable? What a weird circle. I specially ordered a chapter to express my displeasure.

It's very awkward when the team comes out, even if there are twelve little heroes in it. It gives people the impression that primary school students have formed an army. Under the leadership of a few particularly awesome primary school students, they were lucky enough to complete a mission, and then they actually dared to organize it. Parents of primary school students can really accept it.

It's so embarrassing to watch. The plot seems to be trying to imitate the anime. What kind of bond are you looking for? Watching the anime and the BGM can hide this. Just reading the text makes me dig my toes. There is no emotional foreshadowing, the whole book is about training, and there are only a few words of communication in the article, can it be regarded as foreshadowing? Don't write these emotional plots. If you say something touching in the anime and directly transfer it to the text, it will only be embarrassing. Sorry, abandoned.

I would like to ask, why do so many people praise this book? I feel like people who haven't read the original work or high-quality fan fiction are praising it. I don't understand.

Chakra itself is the fusion of body and spirit. Extracting divided cells for a long time will shorten the life span. Generally, ninjas use the current extraction method. Chakra extraction is not that mysterious and needs some skills at most to be quick. Chakra control technology is roughly shaped with chakra knife, puppet silk, Tsunade's strange power and Chakra. After mastering the change of nature, you can directly make fire and generate electricity, the kind of adsorption like climbing trees and treading water And the protagonist's perception can only be considered passive, not the secret of perception and sealing, Chakra's blessing for ninjas. If a ninja is a ninja, it will be considered passive, but not the thunder escape chakra mode.

There is an invisible setting in Naruto, which is also the true situation of Japanese society in reality! That is xenophobia, extreme xenophobia! Without this setting in Konoha, ninjas from Kirigakure and other ninja villages would have fled to other places long ago! After all, Japan is an island country and has never experienced face-to-face competition. For example, in the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, talents would have a long way to go.

It feels like a huge poisonous spot, and I only feel like there are two of them at the moment. Let's not mention the minor points. One is that the plot between Shisui and Sasuke was not well portrayed. Sasuke left with his family. To be honest, it would be better to just die and leave him alone. The portrayal is not good. It's not that saving people is not good. It's because of Shisui's intrusion and spirit. Space, the description of the whole paragraph is not good, and the second one, I think most people fell here, Ninja Brigade, I'm sorry, I'm really angry about this, let alone the readers' feelings, in this case, do you think such a Ninja Brigade is good? Isn't it superfluous? Even if you win over people, it's not enough to graduate from the same class. Their teachers teach different things. What's the point of not separating? What kind of tasks require your team? There is so much to complain about, I don't know where to start.

I can't figure out how to bring all the students into a group,,,, I say it's for my own team, but the protagonist has feelings for them, and says it's for their own good,,, this is a war, how strong the protagonist is now, so what if he can drive Susana,,, Minato couldn't save the students,,, with so many rookies, he will definitely die on the battlefield,,, I don't know what I'm thinking.

Many Shennong died in the chapter of Shisui's death

Brother, is your crotch stretched after surgery? Are you kidding me? White Fang slashes a Hokage-level kid, is this called pulling? And you are also a proficiency panel? Is there a problem with the author's setting or with your thinking?

The author is really busy trying to tease the supporting characters.

When I see the protagonist starting to match up Naruto and Hinata, I have no motivation to read on. The post-marriage situation of Naruto, Hinata, Sakura, and Sasuke in the original work is full of the sense of deja vu that the protagonist pushed people into the fire pit.

It's too white, and many of its ideas are too naive.

When I saw the ninja brigade, I couldn't bear it any longer and withdrew. You, a newly graduated ninja, are going out with a group of core second generations of the Konoha family. Unless you have Kage-level strength, how is it possible?

I originally thought that I would learn step by step from Anko, then snake psychics, learn the art of snake sensu, and then develop a relationship with Orochimaru. As a result, it was sent from the beginning of the Uchiha plot.

Team combat can effectively allocate resources. When you come up, you have to form a large team. How can you fight if your abilities are uneven and your coordination is not tacit. The protagonist cannot protect everyone

I should say it or not, what you wrote before is pretty good, but what the heck is that to Shisui. The first Shisui just gave you a little pupil power. Good guy, if you just use such a little pupil power to open the fourth stage kaleidoscope, Madara will say you are awesome when he sees it. Moreover, he still has no eyes and only pupil power. Second, opening Susana not only requires pupil power, but also chakra. Otherwise, why would the Uchiha clan's eyes increase in chakra as they level up? Because if you don't have enough chakra, you can't even open your eyes. Shisui only gave you a little pupil power, but he didn't give you chakra. Not to mention the fourth stage, the first stage can drain you dry. In the fourth stage, it's not enough for you to be sucked into a human and fucked. Third, how could Hiruzen Sarutobi let the Uchiha clan leave the village? Let's not talk about the impact on all aspects. This might be an enemy. What if the Uchiha join other villages? Even if they don't join, what if they are hired to deal with Konoha? In this case, it is better to destroy them all.

It feels like it doesn't respect the setting. The chakra extraction technique cannot theoretically change the amount of chakra.

The early stage is very good, especially the part that follows Shisui's Gundam, which I think is very cool. Then as my imagination grew bigger and bigger, the article became more and more empty.

It looks strange. After Orochimaru read the script, he had to study the blood stains left by the Six Paths to upgrade himself. Didn't he always want eternal life? Why make trouble. After reading the script, you can know the difference between the protagonists. According to his character, shouldn't he be carefully observed? See if you can research it. If you can't beat it, you can level up yourself first. In the eyes of the ninja world, it is impossible to reach the Sixth Path level without the Sixth Path blood stain. Or rather, the script I read was the script after the protagonist arrived. Unable to accept the reality, Orochimaru, the cold lord who had experienced a lot in the ninja world, went crazy. So take revenge on society. No matter if the Otsutsuki clan wants to harvest the ninja world in the future, they will kill themselves.

It's quite nice, not out of the ordinary, and the ideas are pretty good. Is there anything similar? I won't look at it, too.

It's more interesting than expected, come on

Please have a larger quantity

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Not good in the front, okay in the middle, but weak in the back

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