Something's Wrong with My Roommate

Looking at the recommendation on Douyin, the Japanese fat man and the little boy were both blown away. Come here, you are laughing your head off.

This book is better than the previous one, with a better grasp of the pacing, and it's very interesting. I've always been worried that the heroines would look bad if they closed it too quickly and it would look like they were wasting their money. So far, there's been no problem. (Like it👍🏻) Also, the author played it too 🌸, which is good. I'm just a little worried, 🌸 Huoduo has been challenging the limit. If it doesn't cross the line, it will be fun, but if it crosses the line, it will be poisonous. For example, when I saw Akimiya Yue's S attribute and Yukino's M attribute, I always felt that Lily in the harem was the poisonous point (personal opinion). Just like what the author said about the male protagonist, I feel that there is a tendency to this, and I hope the author can grasp it well. (The unimportant supporting character Lily doesn't matter) I feel that this book is underestimated and should not only have this score. Once you get used to this author's style, it's really fun to read.

There is such an organization in the book, but what about the logistics? Why does an organized killer rent a house and live together?

I came from piracy. I didn't know how to give a monthly pass, so I just paid some money. To be honest, I like this author very much. The content is to my liking🤥

Want to know if it's a stallion harem story? (If yes, it's better to read the pornographic book, if not, I think the introduction is fine)

To be honest, there is no need for you, the author, to work so hard. Give yourself a little buffer space. There is no need to keep forcing yourself to update intensively for the sake of fans. After all, we hope that quality is greater than quantity. This is my immature idea. Okay, I'm done. It's been quite a while since this chapter was released. Are you done? After the break, please update as soon as possible! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this!

I rarely criticize a book, but this book was too vulgar and had a lot of bad jokes. After reading a book for ten years, this is the first time that someone has written the main character in such a vulgar way, which gave me a strong sense of non-mainstream trousers and beanie shoes integrated into a small and shabby person. The most important logic loopholes often cause problems, even I, the internet writer Shennong, can only stick to chapter 12. The writing style is between average and poor, and the writing style is really conflicting. I'm sorry that these words may be a bit hurtful to people who like this book, but I still want to give a warning to the people behind me.

It made me laugh to death because it was supposed to be two updates of 5,000 words, but later it became one update of 10,000 words. I was once told why there were fewer updates... Now it's 5,000 words per update Let me say it should be 2,500 words per update. I'm definitely praised by book friends for my diligence 😁

Do girls really like this kind of wretched guy who talks about porn and loves to take advantage? The male protagonist is simply written in the same way as the urban pig brother male protagonist more than ten years ago. The greasy US military wants to attack.

Seeing that so many people in this book circle want to have enough food and clothing by themselves, I will build a building here. You can collect it yourself. The format is as follows: (number of chapters) - (content)

Play some hell jokes to the Japanese idiots in the book review section to break their defenses 😁

It's quite unflattering. So far, the male protagonist's IQ is above average (he's not too disorganized), and there's a limit to how he can express himself in a royal voice. He's not too vulgar or mean. I hope to keep this character The homophones are okay, I hope to keep it, but don't overdo it Can the male protagonist's code name be changed to a normal one? If it really doesn't work, let this code name appear less often. It may have a good funny effect if it appears once at a critical moment I still hope that there will be less sudden surges in the breathing method. Normally, you can upgrade it level by level. If you need to explode on the spot, you can consider super power explosion. After all, training-type explosions such as breathing methods are inconsistent, but super power is more acceptable than metaphysics Finally, don't be a eunuch 🙂

Use the appearance of the character card and your own appearance to tease people, and have ambiguous contact with the heroine respectively, and you always feel like you are arrogant🤔

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When I saw Chapter 118, I didn't want to read it Anyway, the protagonist gave me the feeling that it was vulgar, vulgar, and played with bad jokes. Half of the chapter was about YY women She didn't take the task related to her lifespan seriously As for the women in the harem, there is nothing good to say. The heroine is strong in the early stage and useless in the later stage.

How can a mature book club not have idiom solitaire? I will come first and take the lead.

Did you write that I turned my gay friend into a girl?

All the dialogues are either pornographic jokes or jokes, which is a bit excessive. Eating too much meat will make you tired, so a combination of meat and vegetables is the way to go. Good harem stories can't become popular just by driving, why don't I go directly to see Liu Beiwen?

I don't understand why many people can't stand it. I really like this book. It's so interesting! I personally think it's a work worth watching.

When I met him, I looked at his nickname and asked "Will you turn into a pigeon and ascend one day?" Tu Ge smiled and calmly replied to me, "Pigeons can't do pigeons. Whoever pigeons is a pigeon!!" I believed it. After a few months he disappeared. When I went to look for him, I only saw a pile of clothes on the ground with a cooing pigeon in the middle. I shouted with tears on the spot, "Slaughter Pigeon, Slaughter Pigeon, how did you become a pigeon? I told you not to take the word pigeon in your name, but you didn't listen!!" I saw the pigeon on the ground waving its plump wings and signaling with eyes "I will come back after evolving into a human in a few months!" I believed it. Now looking at the slaughter pigeon who is coding, I nodded and affirmed the efforts of the slaughter pigeon. "After all, the wings have evolved into the hands of rough old men, and they can indeed code."

The book "Pigeon" is well written, and the emotional line is really clear. It is much better written than the one about "Vampire". Don't always say that "Pigeon" has a pornographic voice. Is it possible that the harem novel should be written as a housewife? Flowers in the greenhouse should stop reading online novels and read more classics.

Hoshizaki Yukina, secretary personality. The picture stolen from next door is so suitable

Why does this kind of mask even change its body? It's very cool to drive very fast, but when I saw the mask and the heroine in front of me making out, I really felt like I was being cheated on... The author also made the height of the original owner and the mask so wide apart. The sense of separation is really strong, and it is difficult to completely regard them as the same person. The setting is very good, but my impression is that the protagonist's soul is jumping back and forth in two bodies, engaging in ambiguity...

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"Stop crying, sister. Don't be afraid. If I die, you can go find mushrooms and resurrect me. If I turn into a zombie, keep me in the basement. When you die, you will turn into a zombie, and we can be together forever..." Aren't you particularly moved by just reading this paragraph?

I feel that the score of this book is low. I personally feel that this book gives people a relaxed and happy feeling. The author gives you a little bit of work from time to time without lacking the plot. The ability of the protagonist reminds me of the 2017 light novel Shenzuiwoxiaoyiren's "Fengshen". I think it is worthy of the author if the score of this book is doubled.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I decided it was not to my liking and I canceled it. Advice for latecomers: the writing style is off-kilter, the jokes are inappropriate, the protagonist is irrational and has a low IQ, and there are a lot of awkward interactions with the heroine. The heroine suffers from intracerebral delusion, which happens almost every time she appears (is this cute?) I don't understand.

Pay attention to the person who said lightning protection. He only read a few chapters and guessed the plot to mislead you. The protagonist's identity card is to be sacrificed as material, and he and the girl are both the original body. When he gets stronger, he will basically become the original body. Status, in addition to the mandatory ID card when downloading a copy of the system, and the daily life with the girl is also the original version. After downloading the copy, the girls have found the original version, and the person who likes him is really wronged. I have been cheated and I still have to say thank you 😅

The protagonist's use of archives is the same as 💩