Seven Gods

After reading three chapters, I really can't understand why the seven gods couldn't think of the ordinary boy in the author's book, and even started fighting over it, and they couldn't do anything to anyone. The most embarrassing thing is that the ordinary protagonist survived the so-called gods' fight, and he can control the body, and he can check and balance the so-called gods with a ridiculous reason. Is this a god?

Ah, this is too watery. I feel like two chapters are not as good as one chapter.

The biggest flaw is that the writing is not good, the narrative rhythm is not arranged well, and it is extremely awkward to watch.

Why do foreigners also speak Chinese?

I like the male protagonist's responsibility. Even if he is killed by seven gods, he will still use the power of the gods to save others if he can. Even if I bear a lot, I will comfort myself by saying that I have saved thousands of people and this life is already worth it. Even so, once there is a chance to reverse the situation, I will seize any opportunity to become stronger and never think of giving up. With such a personality, there are still people who say Holy Mother, I am not Sister Li 😂

When I read Snail's works, I started with the fake immortals, then the second generation immortals, goddesses, and the Seven Gods. Here I analyze each work step by step. One, fake fairy. Fake Fairy is a perfect work in all aspects. It implements most of the funny writing style, has a branch line that is enough to arouse readers' emotions, and a main line that is mysterious enough to whet readers' appetite. All of them are perfect. Under the threat of the system turning into a fairy again and again, adding stick sticks, and using various novel and coquettish operations, the reading of Fake Fairy is as relaxing and enjoyable as its genre of "light novels"; but beyond that, there are stories one after another: the Binghong Sword that the senior schoolmate refused to pick up in her life, the drunken millennium who spent her whole life trying to get revenge but failed, was His wife was treated and domesticated, fell in love with life, but sacrificed his life to the Qilin Dongfang after losing his beloved... In most novels, I can't even remember the name of the protagonist or even read it, but the subplot of the fake fairy can give me a huge impression, and the battle of heaven in the later novel is even more exciting, and it is not out of touch with the popular market. Then let's look at the later works. Two, the second generation of immortals. The early stage of the second generation of immortals is quite good. I think the highlight of the second generation of immortals is "Langmeng". One hundred thousand years ago, An Lin led his classmates to found the Sijiu Immortal Sect, and led it step by step beyond Taichu, towards Hongmeng, and evolved into the current Immortal Emperor Palace, representing the power of An Bulang's previous generation. The Lang Alliance composed of Yueyue, Yinyin, Mo Shi and others is different from the Immortal Emperor Palace and is An Bulang's own force. The recognition that An Bulang desperately seeks is to get rid of his father's glory. This should not be a personal adventure, but an all-round growth, leading his own partners to walk out on the supreme road. But the snail didn't realize this. After Yinyin became an immortal, she withered completely, and the entire Lang League withered. The forces belonging to An Bulang were annexed by the Immortal Emperor Palace, and the new wave behind was covered by the wave before. This was a failure. An Bulang himself is even more outrageous. He has almost lost all emotions and has become a killing and cultivating machine. In the later stages of reading, I couldn't relate to him at all. He didn't feel like the protagonist who had followed him for hundreds of chapters, but more like a stranger I didn't know, a ruthless, terrifying and heaven-defying power who only knew how to become stronger. The novel was no longer a novel, but more like a biography recording the sermon of a big boss. An Bulang stepped out on his own path, and Lang Meng hugged him into his lap. The readers saw the fake immortal character they missed. But is it really appropriate? Snail, ask yourself, apart from Xiao Ni, Brother Cheng, Tina, Chen Chen and other fake immortal characters that exploded one after another, is there anything else to watch in the late second generation of immortals? The final imperial battle did not have the excitement of the battle of heaven and earth at the end of the fake immortals. Instead, it was deserted and terrifying, fake, big, and empty. Three, goddess. The snail writes about goddesses as a way to practice writing. It should be mainly because he wants to try a simple and mindless novel. Although the theme is not as thought-provoking as the battle of heaven, it is much better than the struggle for power and profit of the second generation of immortals. By the way, it fills in the pitfalls of rebellious truth. But he still had several failures. The writing style of 1 Goddess can only be said to be that of a conventional light novel, almost completely losing the signature of Snail. In terms of funnyness, my evaluation is not as good as that of Crazy Flower and Ichinose from a certain package next door. 2 Your soft rice is lonely. Except for your eldest wife, other goddesses are just decorations! More than 30 creation realms, it doesn't matter whether you say there is a barrier in the mountain and sea realm or not, they are also lying when you go to the Demon Star Realm, and they are also lying when you go to the Ancient Road of Taichu. I guess what kind of angel are you afraid of? Do you have more than 30 Creation Realm decorations in your home? On the contrary? I won't talk about these two points, because these two points are nothing more than pulling the snail, who I considered to have platinum potential, down to the level of an average proficient player, and there will be two more failures in the future. First of all, what attracts me to the goddess? The first one must be the author, after all, I read Snail one by one with emotion; then there is the Kunlun organization. In the beginning, Kunlun felt like a king in a heaven and earth. I like this organizational form very much. At the same time, the Black Dragon organization is also very interesting. Although it is against Kunlun, it can be consistent in facing foreign enemies. This is a very good construction, with great potential. You can completely write about how Xu You got higher and higher in Kunlun, how he performed tasks with his companions, developed a sense of belonging, transformed in strength and spirit at the same time, and then became a god general, secretly took over the Black Dragon, cultivated the canteen, and then pushed China to the top of the mountains and seas, and finally used the power of the whole world to fight against the rebellion. But the actual processing is more awkward than the random idea I had while typing. 1 Xu You had no thought at all about responsibility when he was promoted in Kunlun. He is a born sage. He claims to be a free man, but in fact he does everything by himself. In addition, his strength expands too fast, so he can solve everything. Isn't this a good thing? Hey, as a junior, you are beaten by everyone and do everything for you. How dare you be the only one in Kunlun who is either a self-indulgent person or a loser? 2Dads are too cheap. Besides Bai Luo's big fan, Xu You also has two backers, one is the "boss" Ye Junhao, and the other is his father, the Tianlong Divine General. Not to mention that these two characters are as long-lasting as Chen Chen, at least they should be the bosses and external deterrents for a long time, while Xu You will do some smaller tasks, and the two bosses can also come out to fight when they encounter danger. But the problem is that none of the above plots exist. Xu You has reached the level where he can beat these two big guys in a matter of minutes, and the two of them have not even appeared before. Including Dao Zun, he just started blowing hard, and soon he was held down and beaten by Xu You. Later, the "canteen" is used to represent human power. Kunlun's shadow is gone. We still don't know where Boss Ye has gone. Maybe he joined the canteen. 3 Problems with Character Handling As a sister control, I am very optimistic about the sister Xu Mengran. But in the later stage, this guy became more of a pendant than a pendant. I almost forgot about this character. Do you dare to say that you have handled it well here? If it were another author, I would even use a fake fairy to teach him. Even in the later stage, old companions including brother Su Su Cheng and senior sister Liu have not yet been offline. Dogs and monkeys can also beat vegetables, and there are new powerful assistants such as Tina Xiaoni, Xiao Ze and Xiao Tu. Obviously we are still on the same team here, but actually haha. Except for Xiao Bai, everyone else in the dining hall is poorly drawn. Without branch lines and daily support, they can only be empty shells. Look at why we have feelings for Brother Su Su Cheng and Dabai the Clown. He has lived with the protagonist for a while and fought together for a while. Senior Sister Liu even has an exclusive branch line. The portrayal is in place, and the feelings naturally come out. Is there anyone in the canteen? No! The top geniuses from all over the world gathered together. It didn't matter what they wanted. Dingtian had some personality, such as Fengyu's arrogance, Fozi's love for trouble, Shenzi's calmness, and nothing else! That's it? To be honest, Xiaobai's portrayal of Ye Xilan, except that he saved the protagonist in the early stage, is almost like a passerby in the later stage. Four, seven gods. Seven Gods: At first I thought the snail was back. To be honest, people say this at the beginning of every book. I also say this at the beginning of every book. It's actually haha. It can be seen that this snail is trying to find the funny writing style, and my evaluation is a bit of a failure. I think I laughed while reading, and it also stems from the feeling of intimacy when reading a familiar author. To be honest, it is funny, but it is not as funny as a few words and phrases that deceive the system. Then let's get serious. I personally think that there are basically no interpersonal relationships that need to be dealt with seriously in comedy novels. The protagonist basically does two things: deceive people and kill people. The former is for friendly forces. Through Guasan's operation, I am tricked by others to amuse the readers. I discovered in the previous competition that there is a limit to self-entertainment. Looking at Chen Ping Barbecue from a reader's perspective, one would only think that the painting style is "fantastic", which is consistent with a light novel. But if you say it's funny, then I'm sorry, it doesn't work. Including the doll here just makes us curious about what he will do to the doll, what difficulties he will encounter and what the doll is. As for the rest... It's harmful. But Chen Ping happens to be an honest person, so deceiving people is not an option. If Snail wants to regain his reputation as a fake fairy, he has to find a protagonist like Gua San like An Lin, not someone as honest as Pippi. I generally understand why the brand is original fantasy and not a joke. Then killing people, the important thing is to arouse the hatred of readers. This is very easy. Basically, just a few words can arouse hatred, or this guy is an enemy who must be killed. But Snail is good at writing about fake immortals, but not the other three books. In the later stage, An Bulang would kill everyone he saw. Xu You was fine at first, but in the new chapter, he inexplicably killed all the players in the same batch. He didn't know what he wanted to do. It's the savior of the world, haha. Chen Ping was killed inexplicably. Although this guy hasn't killed anyone so far, can you cross-examine the killer before you kill him (face covering). I admit that I was wrong when I said you were not good at playing word games, okay? In fact, rationally speaking, these killers are all worthy of death, but in fact, I feel inexplicable when the killers are killed. I think it's actually a process issue, and Snail lacks the steps to attract hatred. The other issue is the grade. It may be because I have written too many articles about cultivating immortals. The grades written by Snail are really worthless. It is not easy for us students to get an A in the grade exam. Can we not write AB so that the price is reduced? For some reason, in my impression, C is the elite, B is the level of the backbone, and A is the ultimate trick. Not only does the level drop, but Chen Pi also breaks through the realm very quickly. I'm really worried that the master will have to beat the apprentice again before he reaches 50 chapters. To be honest, rather than beating the master every minute, I prefer to be covered for a longer time and eat more to make myself soft. In other words, I hope that the master is like Chen Chen Bailuo, and he won't be like Ye and Xu, who was taken over by his son after a short period of time. I don't want to say much else. If I say too much, it's useless and it's not good to add pressure. I just think about the saying that "there is no fantasy after mortals". I don't feel that way. Instead, I am being tricked by fake immortals. I just stared at this relaxed style of writing and couldn't see anything else. The single-player mode will feel lonely and lonely, and I can't stand the big sword. If there are no grooves, it will feel bland, and the straightforward narrative will feel watery... Of course, I'm not saying that Snail is rotten or anything like that, but I am just lamenting the great master who surprised me back then, "Isn't this person platinum?" And even made me dream of writing. His experience and technology are greater than his new ideas. "When will you be able to sum up all your shortcomings and complete the road to becoming a god, which was only one step away from you when you were a fake immortal?" - The emotion of me, your unknown little fan.

Is this the original god? Is the protagonist justified?

Everyone should be familiar with me. After all, I make jokes, knock on CP, heckle, and complain in the comment area every day. But this time I will seriously analyze why I recommend Yaoyao to be the heroine. Not only because her fist-waving action is cute, not only because she and Chen Ping are in love, but not because she is some kind of "Tianyou Holy Body". We know that the selling point of a work largely depends on its characters. An Lin's funny image, Xiaolan and Tina's dedication; An Bulang's coquettishness (but it disappeared in the later period, which is the reason why the crotch was stretched in the later period of the Second Generation of Immortals); and now Chen Ping's determination to defy God with his mortal body and his responsibility to protect civilians. The character design of Yaoyao is very simple: cute, timid, and tea-cha. There is no shame in being greedy for life and afraid of death. Survival is the first instinct of all life. But the value lies in the contrast. Although she is timid, she is willing to assassinate Mr. Jiang with the protagonist. Although she is timid, she is willing to stay alone in the protagonist's home. She can think of everything we can think of. But the protagonist was so anxious to save his gay friend that he didn't expect so much. In his opinion, soul awakeners can hide their aura to keep themselves safe, but good friends need help. But Yaoyao may not have expected that because the alien beasts are staring at their enemies and beating them, the Chen Ping family must be the focus of attention. The reason why she didn't follow Chen Ping was just because she didn't want to be a burden. This idea of ​​not wanting to drag Chen Ping down made her overcome her survival instinct and let her stay, finally facing death. This kind of behavior that goes against the survival instinct is nothing else but dedication and love. As for rescuing her, the two outcomes are obvious: save her, she will survive, but Chen Ping's soul will be damaged; if not, Chen Ping will be fine, but she will die. Obviously the former option is profitable. But the first thing she did when she woke up was to stop Chen Ping and try to take his hand away. This is the contrast of personality. The coward who puts survival first has overcome her fear of death simply because she doesn't want to see the protagonist get hurt for herself. At that time, Xiaolan saved An Lin with Tao Tu and Shou Yuan; Tina saved An Lin twice with cultivation memory and freedom. Yaoyao has nothing. She does not have the S-level power that I speculated before, nor does she have those things that can be exchanged to save people. But she did what she could: she was willing to subvert her own principles for the protagonist. This is enough, because this is the purest and deepest love. In fact, there is no shortage of this kind of love in Snail's works, which may be as light as a goose feather or as heavy as Mount Tai. We sometimes ignore it and don't pay attention to it. But in fact, isn't this simple and selfless love the most valuable thing?

This book finally allowed me to find the joy of chasing fake immortals. It is light-hearted and funny, and has a lot of imagination. The seven gods are like grandfathers and cheap enemies. The interaction between Pippi and them is so joyful. I am looking forward to the subsequent game. I hope Snail will write well. I will keep chasing it. Come on!

The writing, creativity, and IQ are all top-notch, but the character of the protagonist, the Madonna, is unacceptable. She sacrifices her own interests and even her life many times to help unrelated people, and many times spares no effort to kill enemies who want his life.

Cute campus goddess

That's it, ordinary!

This god is too useless, can he still be called a god? A small restricted area can block the signal. What's the point? I'm really speechless here.

Is this a harem? If there was a harem, I would skip it. I can't read harem stories, but the author's writing style is okay. I look forward to other works.

The only shortcoming of this novel is that the description of the male protagonist is not handsome enough. At least his appearance should be on the same level as his sister, rather than an ordinary appearance. I guess this ordinary appearance will dissuade many people.

I was immediately persuaded to quit the plot of pretending to be my boyfriend. Being a dog licker in real life is not enough, but I still have to be a bitch online. I really vomited😨😨😨😥In fact, the previous ones were okay, and the setting was also quite good.

When I saw the invincible style and imaginative style on the label, I couldn't help but want to complain. Forget about the invincible style. Do you call the routines from 10 years ago called imaginative style? I came here from Fake Immortal. Fake Immortal is obviously so good, but this 12-chapter book of persuading people to quit makes me suspect that it was written by two people.

I found that I still can't read the comments when reading a novel. When reading a novel, it is easy to be distracted by some chapter reviews that care too much about logic. I originally thought there was no problem after reading it, but when I read the chapter reviews, I felt that there are problems everywhere, and the anger is very strong. You still have to calm down when reading the novel, otherwise you will not be able to finish the novel.

My evaluation is that the male and female protagonists have no emotional basis, and they look really weird. Maybe they were written but not shown. Other than this, everything else is a minor issue.

After being persuaded to quit, I saw that Song Siyao was finally alone with the protagonist. Instead of promoting the relationship, you showed up as a princess for me? It's really disgusting to me. If you don't know how to write about emotions, you don't have to.

If I were still in junior high school or first year of high school, I would still be able to read this book. Now I can only say that I read it while pinching my nose when there was no book to read 🙂, and why the post was deleted 😊

It's very poisonous as soon as it's put on the shelves, bye bye

As the first monthly ticket for this book, I think it should have its own unique style.

I voted for this book with my first monthly vote in my life.

It looked okay in the beginning, but after more than 20 chapters, it was too toxic, what a bullshit plot😅

Our two characters have already appeared You can compare your feelings with them every day This can not only increase the star value of the character but also improve our contribution to the character Upgrading the character will also unlock a series of rewards such as opening a circle of points, customized gifts, avatar pendants, etc. In short There are many benefits to comparing your feelings to the characters You can compare your feelings to the characters on the last page of the chapter after catching up every day It won't waste too much time You can also send gifts to the characters It will also increase the fan value You can also contribute to major events This will also increase the star value.

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After looking at it, I can only say that it is just average, with many poisonous points. If you enter the Kunlun Academy, you will be the pride of heaven. So what does the protagonist's sister mean as the key training target of the Kunlun Academy? That Jiang just has the possibility to enter the Kunlun Academy and directly become the protagonist. Can you use some brains? And the one who confessed was really disgusting

I've finished watching half of it, but I don't think it's as good as Fake Fairy. Most of the early content and the plot are obviously a bit clichéd, and it feels like a template. You can probably guess what will happen next, and you can basically see it at a glance.

But to be honest, the character dialogue, plot advancement, and descriptions of fighting scenes are comparable to junior high school writing, and the writing style of Zhan Shen has reached graduate school. This is the gap between the books And the dialogue is sometimes too elementary school to advance the plot, especially Chapters 92 and 93, which directly lowers the rating of the book.