Rebirth: Random Talents Every Week

The highlight of this book is that the male protagonist, who has experienced an ordinary life, returns to his student days and comes into contact with the hidden side of the world due to the heavenly system. The absolute collision between the extraordinary world and the ordinary world of rebirth, wandering between making up for the regrets of the past life and the extraordinary new life. "If you could get in touch with the other side of the world, would you abandon everything you have experienced, abandon the beauty, regret, sadness, confusion, and all the emotions intertwined in the previous life..."

I came in full of expectations and closed in frustration. . With such a good subject, you can either make it lighthearted and funny, or happy and romantic. . As a result, I have been writing some strange plots. What I can briefly mention is as long and smelly as the foot wraps. In terms of fluency, the reading is a little laggy, and the more I read, the worse it becomes, and it still feels like an ancient Mary Sue novel. I don't want to criticize the author, I just want to make some suggestions. It doesn't look like the 99-year-old protagonist at all, since you set this age. This writing style should be more serious, it is too fragmented now. . . . The protagonist described in this description has an IQ of 99. It is simply incredible that he could live without worries about food and clothing until he reached 99 in his previous life. I have never failed in this life, and the secrets of my whole body are really clear.

Not to mention anything else, it's very interesting. If you keep writing, you'll be able to follow it, but the rhythm may need to be carefully controlled. Now I feel that the writing is a bit too big (1). It's just the first few abilities and it's like this. What about super-powerful abilities in the future? Can't we lower our strength? Or do you want the protagonist to go to another dimension? (1) Big refers to the world view and plot development. It is a bit too outrageous. It has nothing to do with rebirth. The protagonist has also forgotten that he is reborn. Now it is in chaos. Jiuxiao was directly countered not long after joining. It was quite stable before, so I don't understand why the protagonist is the opposite. Although I also know that there are many people who want to live forever in the end of the Dharma era, but they can use strategies. There is no such thing as saying the opposite. They are unabashed and have achieved the leadership position without any scheming. It looks very strange, although I can't say it is weird.

It's quite interesting, as long as you don't dwell on it and just follow the author's lead

①Rebirth line. The protagonist is reincarnated and plans to make up for his regrets + the warm dog food article about his current girlfriend + the girls (previous life) mentioned from time to time ② Extraordinary line. Martin's Morning + Official Organization + The End of Law (?) These are two lines in this book, but these two lines are somewhat... Separated (for example, it is very abrupt for the protagonist to celebrate the heroine's birthday immediately after fighting the vampires), and the author did not combine them well.

It is highly toxic, the subject matter is eye-catching, the content is all poisonous, there is no need to read it, the previous plot, novice writing, a lot of bugs, messy plot, vulgar development, all the mistakes that should not be there are all there. Only the subject matter is good, so it is better to start writing. Generally, few people can persist in reading. Even if the author writes well later, most people will be persuaded to leave the first part.

The first identity of the protagonist, a vampire, seems to be quite invincible, but it turns out that it takes a long time to beat him up.

Author, if you want to force the plot, don't use the word "China" to name the country, okay? The China you wrote is leaking like a sieve. Hundreds of vampires blatantly successfully entered China to cause trouble, which is not realistic at all.

The topic is very good, I thought it was about some kind of weird superpower, and then it was an easy everyday article. As a result, it turns out that for a long time, it was still the same as the vampire elf Taoist, the national superpower agency, the most nb old man in China, and the east and west were opposed to each other. . . Moreover, it is a 99-year-old old man and a young girl from a different family. Does the author want us to bring in a 99-year-old man? . .

This is my first time writing an original work. I found a lot of problems during the writing process. I'm sorry, everyone, please feel free to complain...

The content you wrote is too false. What can be changed in 30 years? Ever since you started practicing Tai Chi, time has long since diluted those feelings, and you still have such intense feelings towards that school beauty. It's so fake. Now that you think about it a long time ago, I don't believe you still have that. Also, the protagonist behaves completely like an adult, has no understanding of human relationships, and has a horribly low emotional intelligence. Slip away

It felt like ten years ago, and there was no outline. It can be said that the author has written all the poisonous points that can be written in the past few years 😅😅😅 It's too outrageous. From the beginning of suppressing the protagonist's strength, it is cliché and poisonous. I wrote it wrong before and now no one is reading it at the starting point. Books written by somewhat famous authors are like this. I will also get sprayed, and I feel like I'm going to write a book.

The plot is too toxic, the protagonist is played like a primary school student, and his combat power is greatly reduced...

After reading books for so many years, I thought I wouldn't be poisoned, but I didn't expect that this book would be a concentrated poison.

I have read Chapter 20, and the plot is okay. The daily life of the school beauties is quite cliche, and it is not too poisonous. The 99-year-old setting is indeed problematic, and the main character's mentality is that of a young boy. You can delete the 99-year-old setting, it's not necessary, just write about terminal illness. The rest is fine. If I think of the protagonist as a young man, he won't be poisonous, but if he is 99, there will be problems.

If you don't have the ability, don't write about emotional lines. Rebirth has no meaning. The protagonist has lived for 99 years and is no different from an ordinary college student. If you don't have the writing power, you can't write about rebirth for such a long time. Don't be too slow when dealing with enemies. It's best to take them away in one wave. Nowadays, few people like to suppress first and then rise. Fast-paced and refreshing. The subject matter is good, but consider the next book.

I had some expectations at first, but by chapter 20, you can write a bloody plot, and this book is finished.

Can you describe the feeling of a 99-year-old man coming back after being reborn? How old is the author?

I thought it was a good novel until I came across Chapter 5

This book is really a rare good book The awkward and embarrassing passages will make you tremble, the setting collapse is not just a little bit, and the various poisonous points are presented directly without any pre-embedding, it is simply perfect I hope all my friends who read this review will run away quickly.

I read three chapters and didn't see how the protagonist lived to be 99? What other high-level vampire is so rubbish? It would have been extinct long ago if it was exposed so easily.

It's a pity that the subject matter and writing style are a bit poor. It seems that after more than ten years of reading novels, my ability to resist drugs is still a bit weak! It's gone, I wish the author will write better and better😊

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Isn't it too much to add more essence?