After Eighteen Years of Hunting, I Entered the Thriller Game

A new subscriber Talk about your impressions of this book Written before: I position this book as a cool article, semi-invincible flow. I am not here to pick stones, so I will automatically ignore some small issues. This book was accidentally discovered after reading a lot of books during my endless book shortage. I also read the latest chapter in three days Advantages: 1: Humor. Now I want to read novels that are not vulgar but can make me laugh. This is one of the few novels. Both the system and the supporting characters have a rich sense of humor, especially the reselling that made me laugh for no reason 2: The character scale of the protagonist. The protagonist has a clear mind in a certain way, not a virgin, but he is definitely not a reactionary. He can sort out big things clearly and play tricks on small things. This greatly improved my perception and satisfied my requirements. In addition, the strength increases quickly and it looks great 3: The author describes it well. The description of the dungeons in the infinite data stream is reasonable and clear, and the plot rhythm is suitable. At least so far, the dungeons are diverse and the descriptions are clear. The stories in the ghost world and the stories in Banjie Mountain are very interesting and very to my liking. I will not say that it is deliberately delaying the plot. Some issues I am thinking about and worried about 1: Coordination of combat power. This is a very common writing problem, especially in data flow. I personally also like data flow novels and have read quite a few. A lot of books are too late to be written and have no outline. But the larger the data, the harder it is to master. I hope the author can coordinate well 2: Regarding female characters and supporting roles. There are too few cool articles that can describe female characters brilliantly. If the author wants to match them, the premise must be to ensure that the male protagonist does not collapse. He may need to refine the relevant paragraphs and add personal characteristics and personality in less space 3: The copy is interesting. The current scripts are quite interesting and there are many types, but the repetition will definitely increase as you go forward. This is also the reason why Infinite Streaming becomes more and more boring later on. I hope the author can increase the mode of copy (if there are still copies written), so as not to fall into inferiority in the later stage. (You can look at classics like Thriller Paradise) Thinking about the creative model Finally, this book is the food I found in the data stream. I write this book review because I don't want a good book to be buried. I hope the author can work harder and this book can have better results. I will also subscribe silently Attachment: Please be sure to order more under the premise of ensuring quality, it is really not enough (please face) Note: The above is purely personal opinion and does not contain any form of illegal thoughts. If you don't like it, please don't spray

The book is quite interesting, but I would like to make a small suggestion. After the protagonist sells ghosts, the requirements of the buyers can be enriched. For example, in some special worlds, only ghosts that have not harmed anyone can be acquired, or some ghosts with specific skills can be acquired, and the mines can accept all kinds of ghosts, etc.

Full order The copy looks good, but the real time is boring

The previous writing was average, but the writing style and content are getting better day by day. The more I watch, the more addictive I become

Can you update more, and show this to someone?

Can you update more, and show this to someone?

The ghost school is even better written, so cheers to the author! Update soon!

To sum up, here are some points worth reading in this book! 1: The male protagonist is not a virgin, and his IQ is online. 2: The theme is novel, the male protagonist helps them plan ghost births (referred to as ghost dealers) who are fierce ghosts in the eyes of others. As long as you sell ghosts, you can increase your strength! 3: Don't abuse, don't suppress your realm! 4: The most powerful ghost weapon in this book - the pink sack (no refutation accepted, a must for macho men) 5: The description of the battle scenes is good and will not be summarized! 6: Suitable for old bookworms who are tired of watching pretending to be pigs and eating tigers, pretending to be 13 and getting slapped in the face!

The author should pay attention, the protagonist has a tendency to become a nanny, which is not a good thing, and those three ghosts are not the protagonist's father!

By the way, what's the use of Dong Potian's three supporting characters? They are still with them. They have no strength, they can't become a strategist with their IQ, and they are not beautiful women who can be eye-catching. Now, the starting point is getting more and more weird. You said that there is no female protagonist and he is not interested in women. Why are they always entangled with men? Is this leading them to another direction?

When I read Chapter 53, I always felt that the author had added something private to the article. The first is Blue Clothes. Without going into details, this chapter has popular science and can be found on Baidu. The second point is that the blue clothes embezzled the belongings of the Wolf Warriors. The main point is that the official organization embezzled the belongings of other organizations. The third point is the section between the blue-clad members and the protagonist in Chapter 53. The protagonist believes that he can enter the headquarters of the official organization at will. The protagonist believes that the official organization is a tool of power for a certain person. I won't go into details about other places where there are suspected private goods. These three points are here. I don't believe that the author has nothing private. So when it comes to writing, just write well, why add private stuff? The original relaxed atmosphere is ruined by people like this 😜

Let me talk about my personal evaluation I feel good so far, and I can read it There is nothing much to say about the plot, it is just a cool article Then there is the current article, the update frequency is relatively ordinary, and the number of words is also small. In this regard, I do not require the author to have tens of thousands of words and a super high update frequency, but at least the number of words and quality must be guaranteed Slowly and steadily, the plot will not collapse, and it should be able to be signed and put on the shelves safely

I suggest the author write about the lives of those ghosts after they were sold. I really want to understand the world of those who specialize in collecting ghosts to work as miners.

Be blind. . With the official power, it is not that difficult to find someone when they really put their efforts into it. When I go from one city to another, I get a text message reminding me "Welcome xⅹx to Even the daily poison guide at a certain point can almost make you interested... At least those that you are disgusted with will not be recommended to you. Let's take a closer look, the location of the signal, the habits and hobbies of the account owner... For modern people, as long as you use a mobile phone, it is really not difficult for the official to find you.

It's obviously well written, why do you need a fan to speak up? How many readers had to go? I almost clicked out.

Is this book really a weird subject? Why did I read a hundred or two hundred chapters, but it was full of fantasy. There is no weird feeling at all. The descriptions of the characters' strengths and abilities are more like those in a fantasy world than in a weird world.

It still looks good at the beginning, but becomes more and more boring as you go on. Do you have to take the path of fighting for the human race? Don't use the excuse of collecting money. The Lone Wolf is pretty good at the beginning, but seeing the sudden sadness in Banjie Mountain... It's very awkward, not because it doesn't fit the logic, but... It's like giving you a piece of stinky tofu when you're having a seafood dinner. You can eat it, but it's outrageous.

Chapter 223, abandoned the book. The beginning is quite innovative, but as it goes on it becomes more cliche and embarrassing.

The first two dungeons were horror stories, but then they turned into fantasy?

I read the title of the book and thought it was thriller. After I came in, I found that it was good-looking, but the "thriller" was not quite right. It was like cooking without adding salt. Although it was delicious whether it was sour or sweet, but in the end there was not even a salt-flavored dish in the meal. It felt like something was missing, and I felt like I couldn't finish the meal. Or maybe it's like Sichuan food that's not spicy. It feels like half the flavor of Sichuan food that's not spicy.

I was a little dizzy after reading this chapter today... I felt a strange sense of familiarity... After thinking about it... Isn't it something that many old authors have done for a long time? I offended my opponent to death, but I just didn't cripple him or kill him. Why? The protagonist said that I am the protagonist and I will not suffer any loss. The author said that I will use them to guide the subsequent plot... Hey... What a good writing. I especially hope that it is a new author so that he will not use such an outdated method to trigger the plot... This kind of plot makes me a little dizzy. Come on, author, I really like this book... But don't... Forget it, you go at your own pace. If I like it, I will leave if I don't like it. Sorry, I still can't help but BB.

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt that the novel followed a pure and refreshing line. There is no problem with the route, and there are some ideas and creativity, but the various settings are purely subjective. What the author thinks should be what it is, and there are big loopholes. Moreover, the motivations of various characters in the book are too straightforward, simple or insufficiently motivated. In addition, the development of the plot is too boring and boring for readers with certain experience. In addition, in the book, Weird is more like another group of players fighting against humans, but in the form of ghosts. After reading the first copy, there is no sense of tension and excitement. All in all, it looks pretty good so far, and I feel like it's hard to keep some old bookworms.

I don't understand what the author wants to do with an ambiguous female ghost. She's not the heroine, but writes a bunch of embarrassing emotional scenes, and then returns the knife. It's really disgusting. It feels like all the money I spent before was IQ tax.

It's so damn cool, I can't tell a single thing in a few chapters.

Where is Wanjie Mountain? From the time I opened the dungeon to the start of the game, the only interesting thing was that I stole a cup and wrote a whole 17 chapters... I feel really uncomfortable. I'm going to find another novel again.

I have watched 90+ times, and I have delusions of persecution, the protagonist's goal is unknown, there is no heroine, and all the various forces seem to be from the dark camp.

After it was put on the shelves, it seemed like it was sold to a studio.

First reward in 5 years, so fast

The protagonist rents a villa, and the landlord's daughter comes back from abroad. Unfortunately, the landlord hasn't told his daughter that the house is rented out. You can think about the rest of the plot for yourself.

... Eunuch? Looks good