Holy Lord in the Heavens

P a piece of Golden Holy Lord

Well, this book will soon have 100 chapters. Let me tell you my own opinion. First of all, this book is one of the best among all the Xiaoyu fanfics. The advantage of this book is that it is not like a studio account and some short stories written by some authors. Skipping dozens of chapters will not affect the reading and will not let the reader down. People feel that it is intellectual, and the author's grasp of the plot is relatively tight, and the details are relatively perfect. There are various exciting points when they should be there, but he still has some shortcomings First of all, it is a shortcoming that is not a shortcoming, because the title of the book has already stated that this is a book of astronomy, but to read this book Most of them came for the Holy Lord in the title of the book, but this world was really written too fast, and there were many things that were not available, such as bracelets, mirror gods, god tokens, god armor, lotus temple, and the Eye of Aurora, and it was said in the animation that demons can devour each other. Those who plunder the power are directly sacrificed to the system from the protagonist. The second shortcoming is that the balance speed of the black energy is too fast. Although the author has explained it later, many people still can't stand it. If I add one of the shortcomings I mentioned, it will be a hundred cards. I hope the protagonist will not still be a virgin dragon. These are all the advantages and disadvantages of this book. Let me talk about the most important point. The heroine Xiaoyu, the heroine Xiaoyu, the heroine Xiaoyu, the heroine Xiaoyu, the heroine Xiaoyu, the heroine Xiaoyu, the heroine Xiaoyu, endless shouting.

Recommend this book "I, the Devil Little Dragon, I Begin as a Kind Father and a Son of Filial Piety" It is also a fan of Jackie Chan's Adventures. The protagonist is the Devil Little Dragon, and the Holy Lord is directly killed by filial piety!

After reading forty chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. Maybe my reading interests are not in line with this novel.

This is the first fanfic of Jackie Chan's Adventures that I've read. The entry points and settings are well complemented. I have no interest in the world behind, especially the cool articles that relax restrictions. Why does Superman have flaws? Ultraman is a fast guy who only has a few minutes? What is invincible can only be the means, not the settings. Also, the types are unified, super magic and super technology cannot be grasped by ordinary people. Human beings cannot break through their own cognition, and the level of cognition varies. It's hard to have it both ways

The change is a bit meaningless, the father's enhancement is too outrageous, and the protagonist has been suppressed. The Holy Master series represents black energy, and the father's side represents righteousness. The positive energy should suppress the black energy for too long, and the black energy counterpresses the righteousness. As a result, the positive energy now suppresses the black energy. The most important thing is that the protagonist of the novel is always suppressed, which makes me feel aggrieved.

The picture shows the dagger, Holy Lord.

Why do so many authors want to tease Xiaoyu? Is it because my writing skills are not good enough that I can't write an original heroine? Or that without a heroine, I can't write an attractive work?

Don't go to a world with a high force value. I can say with certainty that most people don't like to read infinite stories that travel through a world with a high force value. They prefer to read medium and low martial arts. Don't go beyond the level of Fengyun, Datang, Pirates, and Naruto. Write about some film and television comic worlds that others have not seen. You can write about the customs and features of other worlds. Use this world as a logistics base, and then By learning how to transform, you can start a company from scratch in a modern world, establish a militia, or use technology to fight monsters and monsters. Go to the world of martial arts and establish a sect. You can be a righteous person, a gangster, or the mastermind behind the scenes. Go to the paradoxical world of war in the Three Kingdoms, build a force, recruit famous ministers and generals, be an emperor, or want to have a harmonious world. Go to the western magical world, be a lord, build a city, gather refugees, establish caravans, orcs, kobolds, jackals, crypts, The great maritime world, be a pirate, drive a big ship, grab treasures, gallop on the sea, overcome obstacles, for no other reason than to enjoy the feeling of starting from scratch in different stages and different worlds, this kind of traveling through the heavens Unlimited novels are among all literary works, the most anticipated and the most infinitely possible. You can add fantasy waste material flow, change the map urban god flow, fan fiction Pirates, Naruto, Dragon Ball Slam Dunk, mainstream fantasy, wizard flow, behind-the-scenes, muscle man, etc. This is not cliché, many people want to read it but no one can write it,

Why not go to the Little Carp Adventure in the next world to get the Five Elements Dragon Scales and Dragon Horns to replenish the source, since the dragons there are already dead anyway.

Apart from anything else, Valon and his three followers are really awesome. They don't care about these extraordinary powers at all. They only have three thoughts in their minds: making money, making money, or fucking making money.

Xiaoyu and sissy daddy

Don't change it randomly. Dad is really that powerful. There is no need for Jackie Chan and Xiaoyu to deal with the Holy Lord and the devil dragon.

The author changed it a bit too much. The balance of yin and yang in the original work is dynamic, are you forcing it to be static? You are so righteous, why do you just keep cheating? The reason why the story of "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" in the original work happened was because of the black energy's counterattack. This is the era of black energy, and the black energy is strengthening to counterattack the righteous energy. Is this the plan to directly kill the representative of the black energy without waiting for the black energy to counterattack? Understand that at the beginning, the protagonist is the weak side. It is correct to be strengthened at the beginning of the finals, and to be unrighteous is to be weak, and then it can catch up and destroy the protagonist's purpose every time.

Why do you always think of using rat charms to fight? Isn't this a living omniscience? Although the units resurrected with the rat charm are not strong, their brains are still good and they have a lot of memories. For example, if I resurrect a mage, he may not be as powerful as the original version, but he has a lot of ways to use magic spells in his mind. Isn't this just a moving magic book? In particular, this thing can directly resurrect characters from film and television works, and directly shoot a short clip of "Dragon Talisman" to make people who have no idea of ​​​​Dragon Mind. Not to mention invincible.

I don't understand why the author keeps using the Shadow Corps for close combat. The Adventures of Jackie Chan is set in the United States. Well, the Shadow Corps. Each of you has an AK or a bazooka. How much mana does Dad have to withstand the attacks of AK, bazooka, and Gatling? Directly sniping Barrett from a long distance, I don't think the so-called decent can survive for a few days. What does the so-called righteousness have to do with ordinary people? Hire a bunch of gangsters or gunmen and go straight to the scene. I don't think the protagonists still have time to cause trouble. With that middle section, the protagonists would have already picked up their things and ran away.

Tik Tok stole it

After reading the first thirty chapters, there are three main problems. 1. The protagonist is always deficient, which makes people feel uncomfortable. 2. The protagonist forcibly suppresses his intelligence. I don't know what he is doing. 3. The Holy Lord is still the Holy Lord. It feels like it is not that the protagonist has taken away the Holy Lord, but that the Holy Lord has extra memories belonging to the protagonist.

The protagonist is so humble. As one of the Eight Great Demons, he is so humble to ordinary people. What is he writing about?

I think Lope is very smart. He directly deposed the Holy Lord, and also kept the Holy Lord in reality, allowing him to occupy the dark side. It can be said that the human beings in the world of Jackie Chan's Adventures can develop to the modern age, and Lope and the Holy Lord have made great contributions.

Holy Lord

This balance of yin and yang can be considered that the eight demons are all late-stage heroes. They are full of divine equipment. They are resurrected by the fountain after death. The eight heroes on the opposite side are weaker. They sacrifice themselves to seal the demon. The level is reduced, the divine equipment is snatched away, and the restraint equipment is left. Then they are gone. Dad and the others are equivalent to super soldiers. They are powerful, but that's it, but the demon has no blood, no level, no equipment, and there is no way to defeat it. At this time, the game planner has a headache. Demons can be resurrected, and their growth rate is top-notch. Once they catch their breath, they will be unable to suppress it. At this time, the balance is that as soon as the demons gain a few levels, Dad and the others will get the equipment left by the gods. The key is that these equipments are very powerful against demons, and they will be sealed if they encounter them. Regarding equipment, it may feel like you can either suppress it and push the devil back to its starting point, or you can't suppress it and take off directly, so the balance of yin and yang has become a joke. If you want to balance, you need existing things. The gods have clearly figured it out for you. Either you let the righteous energy suppress it temporarily, and then it can rebound, or the black energy counterattacks, and the righteous energy cannot be suppressed, so the situation becomes so embarrassing.

Hehe, Shadow Jade

I feel like I'm going too far. Since I've been restrained, I'll flip the table. Find nuclear arsenals and put nuclear bombs everywhere, use the nuclear binding treaty to directly end the world, detonate the Yellowstone volcano, detonate nuclear bombs in the Maria Trench, push meteorites into space, etc. To directly exterminate and restart civilization. Or you may not fight against the righteous energy at all, use balance to kill a large number of black energy creatures, or find a way to swallow several other demons to weaken the black energy and thereby weaken the righteous energy.

Let's talk about the author's philosophy of this book: the black energy side has a combat power of 100, but 90 of them are suppressed and cannot be used. The righteous side has a combat strength of 20, and can cause five times the damage to the black energy side. According to the will of the world (that is, the author), the combat effectiveness of black energy and righteousness is 100:20, so righteousness needs to be continuously strengthened. From the reader's perspective, the combat effectiveness of black energy and righteousness is 10:100, and righteousness keeps cheating. Readers who cannot accept the author's point of view (purely higher than the upper limit) should proceed with caution.

In order to give the author better inspiration, build a world building.

The protagonist is either being deflated or abused throughout the whole process, and there is no sense of enjoyment at all. The author keeps suppressing the protagonist, talking about the balance of yin and yang when talking to him, and the more he watches, the more angry he becomes.

Finished? Or a eunuch?

Whatever he writes, Mao's logic doesn't always justify himself. A demon is worse than a goblin. At least goblins can kill people.

Yeah, I've read about 40 chapters. I think the author has added a lot of patches to The Adventures of Jackie Chan, which I think is very good, but I feel that the protagonist has always been deflated and suppressed by his righteousness and his father, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. Demons and mages are all pawns of righteousness and blackness. The point that attracts me is the Holy Lord Heavens, which is equal to 1+1>2. The Holy Lord is also the protagonist, and the part I saw was shabby, and the main text of Zhutian was at the back, so I didn't read it.