The Black Hand of the Mysterious Resurrection

The first part was quite interesting, mixed with my own original inspiration But in the middle I broke up with Yang Jian and started to feel a little confused, as if I had no creative direction Later I wanted to forcefully explain the existence and significance of the protagonist Overall The first part is worth reading, the middle part was a little confused, and later I wrote my own original ending, but it always felt like it ended in a hurry. I should have been able to write hundreds more chapters Keep working hard For the next book, you can try to set the ending first. From the shallower to the deeper Don't pay too much attention to the description. Many times, including me, it's all taken away at a glance Of course, the exception is the word count you told me about. You can focus on the ins and outs of the plot, sort out the rationality, and increase the number of supporting characters.

It is impossible for anyone to be perfect, and everything cannot be perfect. But when you like a person or a thing enough, you will ignore his (her/it) small problems, then he (she/it) will become perfect. A person is like a broken disc. Through continuous growth, you get the disc fragments. Slowly, piece by piece, you will get infinitely close to (circle), but you cannot truly become (circle). I don't know if the public will agree with my statement. This book written by the author is really special. I have been a prostitute for a long time. I have read countless books in the past few years but there is no authentic copy. But this book is the end of my life of prostitution. I want to do my best to maintain it.

The same story about Mysterious Resurrection is just good, much better than other cats and dogs.

After reading seven chapters, Chapters 3 and 4 are too discouraging. They take the information too seriously. They casually tell the information about controlling the second secret, and talk about conflict and balance in such detail. Needless to say how important this early stage information is. Look at our protagonist's understatement and he can't say anything. He doesn't want Yang Jian to owe a favor. I said it's such important information. It's not too much for me to solve the ghost puzzle by myself. As for the protagonist, the information said that he still owes Yang Jian a favor. Brother, you need to lick more. You also told the headquarters almost all of your information without reservation, so that the headquarters can easily handle you in the future, right? What kind of moral character does the headquarters in the early and mid-term headquarters not know about? Yang Jian sells them whenever he wants. He basically doesn't treat the ghost controller as a human being, but as a consumable. He only wants to trick you into doing it to death. The kind of thing where he'll do it until he's dead...

Alas, the front part is really good, but why use a supporting character to make the protagonist and Yang Jian fall out? It's not necessary. Is it just for the protagonist and Yang Jian to have a fight? A fight scene? This gap was left directly, which was a bit uncomfortable to watch. Either you don't have a close friendship with Yang Jian from the very beginning, and they will become rivals directly after the conflict, or you can write as buddies and have a good relationship. . Why do you want to become a brother-in-law, and the relationship is broken by a supporting character? There are so many plots in the original book that can be written and pretentious. Why are you afraid that the plot will not work without pretense? Do you have to fight with Yang Jian in this situation?

To be honest, I gave up decisively when I saw a fight with Yang Jian. This place is really too poisonous. After working so hard to travel back and forth and become a ghost with human spirit, he completed the work that Xiao Wang only dreamed of completing, but in the end it still seemed inhumane. I really don't know why such a big change was made. Two good friends broke up because of a supporting role... I'm so stupid

Collect all kinds of ghost information. Name. Physical characteristics. Ability. Law. By the way, avoid it, otherwise it will be too unsolvable and I'm afraid the protagonist won't be able to defeat it.

I personally feel that being a classmate of Yang Jian, being an outlier and getting involved with Yang Jian in the beginning is a failure.

I thought the protagonist would get benefits by self-destructing himself, but in the end he just forced himself to become a thug. The protagonist has no brains at all if he throws away his bones.

I don't know if the author deliberately suppressed the protagonist's combat power. The beginning was very good, and he got puzzle pieces one after another. In the middle period, he insisted on suppressing the protagonist's strength, so that the protagonist could not get the puzzle pieces, and he became more and more frustrated. In the later period, he simply wrote dozens of supporting characters, and the protagonist looked like a passerby.

I worship you, I have also written a novel Mysterious Resurrection: The Sunken World. I hope it will also have good results.

The characterization is not deep enough, including the protagonist, there is no charisma, Yang Jian is like a passerby without any ideas of his own, the original Yang Jian has a suspicious character, and here he looks like an idiot. It looks like a running account and makes me want to doze off

I feel like a fool who has been tricked. He exposes himself instantly in exchange for a little charity and reveals his biggest trump card. He has to pretend to be a ghost master or an alien. How can he expose himself directly?

Jiang Chao, controls four puzzle pieces: a left arm (ordinary people who touch it will directly turn into corpse water. Touching a ghost master will cause death of the same level, and other ghost master puzzle pieces can be forcibly taken out). One left ear (can hear sounds five kilometers around. If you find another one, you can hear sounds ten kilometers around. Based on ordinary speech sounds, the farther you hear, the longer the disabled time. Normal use has no side effects). A complete spine (strengthens his physical strength and has the ability to kill two ghosts. It is Jiang Chao's main means of maintaining ghosts in his body.) Ghost Skull (the source of Jiang Chao's ghosts, which can control people's thinking and deceive the enemy's memory. The higher the strength, the longer the maintenance time The shorter the time, the skull and the other three puzzle pieces are all derived from a complete ghost, so the power of the puzzle reaches 80%) The characteristics of Jiang Chao's ghost ghosts are: 1. It pulls you into infinite loss of self-consciousness. The longer you are trapped, the higher the degree of consciousness dissipation, until it dies. ② The ghost can be pulled into the ghost ghost. The weaker the ghost, the faster it will die. (S-level ghosts can be pulled into the ghost ghost restriction by setting level three. Their movements are slow and their power is weak.) Currently, the ghost ghost has a maximum of five levels. The fifth floor can directly detain S-class ghosts. The number of ghost ghost layers can be increased as the number of puzzles increases. ③Restart (seventh level) Weapons: Bows and arrows (three arrows) must be shot from a set of bows and arrows. Hitting one arrow will cause S-level ghosts and below to freeze directly. Two arrows can directly cause S-level ghosts to freeze (provided that they must hit the head of an S-class ghost). At present, the third piece cannot be shot, and the bow and arrow are too expensive. When the third arrow is shot, two puzzle pieces will recover by 70%. Ghost Bicycle: A man-made supernatural object. Riding on a bicycle can block the perception below S level. The driving speed depends on the degree of use, side effects, and supernatural recovery in the body. Character profile: Jiang Chao: Height, 178cm, thin body, pale face, ordinary appearance. He is the inheritor of a ghost-controlling organization from the Republic of China. He has a complete inheritance of ghost-controlling knowledge, superb physical skills, and is a ghost-suppressing tower passed down by the Guardian Organization. Character: He has a cold personality. He doesn't care about anything except the Ghost Suppressing Tower. This is probably because he was affected by supernatural beings when he was a child and grew up in a cruel ghost control organization. He is cold and ruthless and has no emotional influence on him.

Zhu Heng's death and the conflict with Yang were too deliberate, and could even be said to be inexplicable.

After reading a few chapters, why did I suddenly leak all the information to the headquarters? Enough

Really... It's not that your writing is not good, but that the original text of Mysterious Resurrection is so well written... It's hard to be a fan

To be honest, the more I read now, I feel like the author has put too much in and I can't tell the difference. In the latest chapter, the relative ran away to go to someone else and said it was a betrayal? The relatives mentioned in the previous picture divided the inheritance and went to seek refuge with other people. It was not they themselves who ran away, but their relatives took the inheritance and ran away... I was not able to protect the shareholders well, and the relatives were afraid of death. Isn't it normal to run away? If you can protect others, who will run away? Isn't it because you failed to fulfill your previous promises? Why should others give you money to establish this company? Isn't it to save your life? If you can't save other people's lives and their relatives run away, is that a betrayal? The part about letting go of ghosts was already very disappointing, and now it's even more frustrating... There's also the words "Come here, prepare a car" in the article. Are you kidding me? Have you watched too many wealthy dramas? ? Farewell

The attitude of the headquarters is a big flaw. It can be clearly seen from the early stage of the original work that the headquarters only values ​​the stability of the country and the stability of the country. The influence of international public opinion may be there, but it cannot be huge, because the headquarters is not timid! In order to curb the S-class ghosts, the headquarters even dared to introduce another S-class ghost painting into the imperial capital. This is the confidence of the foundation. In the original work, the headquarters made compromises to Yang Jian again and again. That was because Yang Jian solved the problem first and then got paid, and this was also in line with the headquarters' purpose of hoping for social stability. All the ghost masters in the headquarters, and even the circle of friends, no matter what their personalities are, are really serious about maintaining the stability of the area they are responsible for. And what about this book? An A-level supernatural incident broke out in the mainland, and the protagonist went to Yueben to seek revenge. The headquarters' first thought was international pressure, not the destruction of life in the ghost realm. Are you afraid of the protagonist? Mr. Qin is still alive and well! In my opinion, the headquarters of this book is the largest force of ghost masters, not the guardian of the country. I think the author seems to like to write about the dark side of human nature, such as no one helping the soldier, but the description of the dark side should not conflict with the setting. Is it reasonable that the headquarters, which exists to maintain social stability, does not care about the people of its own country, but worries about foreign countries and international pressure?

The protagonist is a body possessed by ghost hands. Why he can eat is very confusing.

The writing is very poor. It's not that the book's logic is faulty, but that the author's ideas are different from ordinary people's and cannot be accepted.

I wrote about the Ghost Controller Forum earlier, and it feels strange to live stream these live broadcasts. There are millions of views, and hundreds of thousands of people watch the live broadcast. How many ghost controllers are there?

The protagonist is a ghost, fused with a person. No matter what, it is impossible to be a ghost controller. The body should be a ghost slave. There is also supernatural power corroding a person's physical body. To make sure that person can still maintain a normal state, to maintain the state, it is also maintained with supernatural power at all times. A ghost controller who survives in that kind of world situation, don't you suspect that something is wrong with the protagonist?

I see a lot of people saying it's not good. To be honest, it's not bad. At least I really want to watch the extras now.

Okay, I can accept this ending and look forward to the next one

If Yangjian, Li Leping, Liu San... And other aliens are completely corroded by ghosts in 50 years, will they become human skin or wish ghosts? Because conscious ghosts such as human parchment and wish ghosts are former alien ghost masters who were corroded by ghosts and turned into ghosts. Liu San will become a paper man ghost, Yang Jian will become a ghost master, and Li Leping will become...

It's good to watch, but the ending is too fast. It feels like watching Zhu Xian at the end. I couldn't write two more chapters. It has to be this ending.

Although the ending is a bit fast, it is a good ending

When the protagonist arrives in Dajing City, he completely forgets that he is a ghost. He also says that he wants to be different from Yang Jian. This is ridiculous. Yang Jian has made it clear that he is the master of ghost eyes. He then fights with Yang Jian. Isn't this looking for death? That vicious dog is destined to belong to Yang Jian. Why write if you offend him?

Why does Yang Jian need to be there when the protagonist goes to find the second piece of the puzzle? According to the plot, Yang Jian knows that the ghost used to sell money must have come into contact with ghost blood, so his own recovery situation of the ghost should not be optimistic. I think it is not in line with the character of Yang Jian in the original novel to use the power of the ghost so easily and meddle in such nosy things.