It Turns Out That I Am a Swordsman!

I quit after reading the free chapter. Let's talk about some main issues. 1. The running account is particularly serious, and there is too much content without a core story. 2. Before the protagonist is portrayed, too much space is spent describing the supporting characters. 3. I can't write emotional scenes at all.

Learn some punctuation marks, why are they all exclamation marks? It's uncomfortable to watch

What's going on?

I am the first book review commenter on this novel

In fact, I really hate this type of 2B novels. The author treats the youth of the 21st century as if they were idiots. Elementary school students all know that seeing is believing, this time traveler is like a retarded person who believes whatever others say! I was so taken with it that I actually vomited. If Yuan doesn't go back, he will make up for it by himself. You vomited

Skip half of chapters 36, 37, and 38. This is a pretty good book with many layouts. A big picture covers everyone, and you can't help but guess what happened next and who this person is. The author keeps one sentence in mind: If there is no woman in my heart, I will draw my sword to the God of Nature!

The book is quite good, but the emotional scenes are a bit awkward. Those who can tolerate it can read it.

The main character is too stupid. He can be innocent and kind but he can't be really stupid. There are also emotional scenes. I really can't stand it. It's just to force the male protagonist to accept the female protagonist. It feels so fake. He wants to be a slut but also wants to act immediately.

So I want to say that the protagonist is like a fool, how can someone who traveled through time be deceived into that? No brains?

It's pretty good, but it's just that it's too early for the ancestors of the human race to die, and it's not at the moment of life and death, just to add a bond to the protagonist. The human emperor is still there, and there is the shadow of Gao Wu. Overall, it's not bad, come on

From reading the introduction, I feel that the male protagonist is not intelligent enough to understand common sense on his own.

Eighteen hundred times, Lantern Monster, Sword God, I won't talk about it. Shilipo Sword God was originally criticized for being so stupid that he was close to mentally retarded. He copied his weaknesses.

The protagonist is like a mentally retarded person, having no other thoughts of his own except Gou. It's fine if you're from the local area. There's no such thing as a time traveler. This image is really the ultimate in one aspect, right?

There is obviously something wrong with the logic. A 4th-level Huang-level person can injure a 9th-level Heavenly-level person with all his strength. There is a gap of 32 realms in between.

After reading about thirty chapters, the beginning was okay, but the more I read, the more awkward it became. I can only say that the author's writing skills are limited, and the more he writes, the more he becomes ignorant. .

It's okay to be cautious, but it's just pretentious to blindly trust others.

When I clicked in, I saw the name of the heroine. A man I knew had this name. He owed me money and refused to pay it back. The more he thought about it, the more angry he became, and he ran away!

Isn't this similar to your routine? You just changed it a little bit.

The protagonist's golden finger training system must have collapsed. When he was more than 50 levels ago, Zhou said that his strength was about level 5 and level 6. Assuming level 10 and level 1, then level 100 would be level 10, followed by Xuan level, earth level and heaven level. When the protagonist was at level 55, he last-charged a white tiger for 3 million experience, which was only enough for him to reach level 56. The army behind him killed 8,000 soul-calling birds in 10 minutes. He killed them for several hours. The soul-calling birds themselves said they had summoned an army of tens of thousands, 90,000 and 90,000, which is tens of thousands. Each one is guaranteed to have a few hundred experience points, and there are thousands more. Calculate an average of 500. These experiences are only enough to upgrade to level 9. I still want to reach level 1000 in the future, but I think the protagonist has no chance until he dies.

I won't say anything else. If you don't like the emotional line, you don't need to read it. If you don't write a normal book, you have to create some kind of emotional line. I'll give you two masters a blow with my backhand. Being idle and doing nothing creates weaknesses for yourself, right?

It's just a conspiracy theory. How do you continue reading this?

If you have opinions, characters you want to write about, beauties you want to kill, and other random things, you can mention them. Well, as for listening or not, copying or not, that depends on the situation.

Haha, the Human Emperor is also awesome. Not to mention the first one, but later on he actually watched his good friend being eaten 48 times. It's awesome.

It's quite interesting. At first I thought it was like Sword God. Unexpectedly, it became more and more interesting as I watched it, and I finished it without realizing it. It's the kind of story that starts off average and gets better and better as you read. The content is very big, so the author needs to hold on tight and don't collapse.

He's a eunuch 😭,

I think the writing is pretty good. Anyway, I like to read it, but the updates are too slow.

He's already a eunuch before it even starts 😅

It was interesting to watch the protagonist at first, but after watching the protagonist for a long time, he still looked like he didn't know anything, and I felt that he was stupid.

This book is a bit funny, I love it. The rhythm is pretty good too

After reading ten chapters, it seems like I didn't read anything, I just saw fighting monsters😃