Cultivating for Immortality

No, it's too poisonous. All kinds of forced intelligence and sensationalism. The supporting actor was subdued by the three successful powers with one blow and was able to assassinate the protagonist in his prime that night. He was over 20,000 years old and didn't know if he was acting or he was really a holy mother. He was whipped for some supporting actors. It's so poisonous that I can't stand it even if it's acting.

I thought I was picking up people's wisdom, but I didn't expect it to get better.

It's boring after reading the first chapter! I have waited 13,500 years for a technique! How utterly stupid is this! The protagonist is a human being, right? Not a pig, right? Don't you know how to create exercises yourself? Isn't it possible to create the strongest technique even when you have wireless time? Hide yourself in a ravine and raise a group of people to specialize in experimenting with techniques!

As a cultivator, the protagonist cannot be seen to be cautious. He assassinates the emperor, wants to conquer the Nascent Soul at the peak of the Golden Core, and is confident that the Nascent Soul will not come out without cowardice after finishing the exercise. I came here after reading a similar novel, and the whole thing feels like an assembly line.

The Emperor's Tomb Chapter is really disgusting. Is this the person who was cultivated by the so-called big forces? Stop being funny, there is Ksitigarbha girl, she is simply mentally retarded, and she has her cultivation level sealed! Look at how she handles things and her ability to adapt to events. Bah, are all the big guys in the power blind? Choose her as their spokesperson! Really stupid

Lived for 20,000 years Also lived for 10,000 years in the secular world In the end, I still have an ordinary heart, I haven't seen through love yet, and I want to To be honest, it sucks

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It's far worse than my immortality in the world of immortality.

It's awesome. Cut it after one chapter is on the shelf. It's really awesome. Then you should consider cutting it after you look at your follow-up reading. Cut it as soon as it's on the shelf. Your editor won't bother to care about you in the future. Your attitude is too bad.

It was quite interesting at the beginning and was good to read, but from the beginning of the Zi Mansion it became vicious and watery. The little Kara who can kill with one sword can write three or four chapters. As exciting as it is in the front, there will be more water in the back. He has lived for 20,000 years and laid out the plan hundreds of years in advance. When he enters the Immortal Secret Realm, he has to write a burden just to pretend that there is a woman to avoid the shock, and there is no need to arrange such high-level enemies for the protagonist when he is not strong.