The Disaster TV Series Begins with the Sword

What a waste! The imagination is okay, the writing is poor, and the protagonist's words and actions are not very good. Let me give you a suggestion. During the Anti-Japanese War, what our army, including the vast majority of the people, lacked most was food. It is recommended to buy a large amount of insect powder. Although it is really not delicious, it is highly nutritious, more nutritious than meat. The most important thing is that it is cheap, it seems to only cost a few cents per kilogram.

Is there a possibility that Xiang Shaolong and the Qin cavalry help Li Yunlong pace Ping'an County shun and headshot Yamamoto from a long distance to save Xiu Qin?

After reading the first few chapters, I found that there was a problem with the character of the protagonist. This guy said he loves watching military movies, admires passionate and fearless heroes, and even served as a soldier. Don't these settings just want to tell readers that the protagonist is very patriotic? Then, the TV mutated and was connected to the Liangjian plane. So based on the protagonist's character, shouldn't he report it as soon as possible? Otherwise you are so patriotic? Just talking about it?

It's like an anti-Japanese drama. My head hurts from watching it. Various bugs and loopholes. It's purely the author's fantasy.

You need structure but not structure, you need IQ but not IQ. He lies and brags all day long and is self-righteous. If the images on the screen were not created by actors who worked hard, this novel would not be able to portray the character in any way. Alas, I thought it was a good book when I clicked on it.

Why do you say that buying instant noodles is too embarrassing, and the dialogue between the protagonist and the group leader can reveal that the protagonist has no worries about food and drink, so why not let the protagonist bring food instead of instant noodles? It is difficult to understand that in an era when it is difficult to eat, the protagonist is not allowed to bring food but flashy instant noodles. There is no sense of being a group leader at all.

The more I watched, the more frustrated I became. When buying instant noodles, you also need to buy them in bags. With that kind of money, you might as well buy flour and rice. When buying antibiotics, they go to a ghost market. In China, except for some control over analgesic drugs, there is basically no control over anti-inflammatory and antibacterial drugs. Even if you go to a veterinary store and buy several kinds of veterinary drugs, they are much better than the drugs of that era. If you dare to buy type O blood in the ghost market, what if you have a blood infectious disease?

Using the setting of Bright Sword, I blindly changed the plot of Bright Sword. In the first chapter, it was said that the protagonist likes Bright Sword. As a result, the plot was written blindly and I couldn't even figure out the timeline. When the reader asked, I directly replied that this is Bright Sword and not that other Bright Sword. I think the most important thing to write in a fan is to respect the plot. If the unreasonable changes in the plot are only explained by parallel worlds, it would be too perfunctory and unstructured.

I hope Shunliu's sister won't die

The Qin army's crossbows were the most powerful in history, and they feel worthy of today's artillery

There is an indescribable feeling that the character and the protagonist's IQ are flawed. The most taboo thing about this kind of Astronomy is to suppress the protagonist. Don't people who watch Astronomy just watch it for fun? As a result, you made a bunch of restrictions on this and that, but you still can't spoil it? What about time travel? Just to shine, you might as well openly cooperate with the country. I wanted to give the protagonist a patriotic character both inside and outside of my words, but all I did was to show petty arrogance, the pattern could not be opened up, and it was not satisfying to watch. I read a few chapters after it was put on the shelves and couldn't stand it any longer, so I withdrew it!

I don't understand. If you can deliver supplies, you can deliver instant noodles instead of rice and white noodles. If you deliver instant noodles, you can deliver instant noodles and also deliver them in barrels. The production date is superfluously painted out. It would be better to just deliver large boxes of bulk noodles. It's not hard enough to make up the word count.

There is no big shot behind any movie or TV series, it's just the imagination before dying suddenly in front of the TV.

The most speechless thing is seeing people dying during the Anti-Japanese War. Doctors were obsessed with the place of production and shelf life. It would be good to have medicine at that time. You don't have to die, you may survive if you use it, but the result is... Extremely poisonous. And the drugs produced in that era also had production locations and shelf life? At that time, the army looked at the packaging to know where the product was produced. At most, the name of the drug and the name of the factory where it was produced should be marked. There's not so much mess. And at that time, there were medicines that were used directly, but they were not enough and they were expired. Still struggling over and over again. I can't stand it

Support Lao Li with some gas tanks, motorcycles, fuel, glass bottled ice cola, toilet paper, used electronic waste, DJI reconnaissance aircraft, scrapped cars, model aircraft accessories, etc. ^_^

What we are saying is that instead of sending canned instant noodles, why not send flour, oil, salt, sauce and vinegar?

Author, come on, come out, why do beef instant noodles smell like beef? 😂😂😂😂😂😁😁😁

Author, please wake up, don't go into a world with a bright sword. The protagonist's life is his fate. If he eats well, drinks hot food and sleeps with beautiful women, it is true that he should get rich first and become invincible. To be honest, even if the world of the bright sword is destroyed, it has nothing to do with the protagonist. The protagonist should make himself immortal first! It's serious to smash the planet with one punch. Giving you some TV is not to benefit humans in other worlds. If you don't care for yourself, you will be destroyed by heaven and earth😱

The greatest and most efficient way to write this type of time travel story is country-to-country, but it is difficult to write and easy to write. The next point is that the protagonist is facing a country from another world. Whether the protagonist wants to get rich or avoid the tragedy of World War II, he should try his best to make contact with them. Only Li Yunlong can see the contact during the protagonist's time travel, which just protects the protagonist and Li Yunlong. The protagonist can contact Yan'an through Li Yunlong's intermediary and fully help our party. But in Chapter 9, in the commentary, other readers raised the issue, and the author actually replied, "How can Lao Li pretend to be so cool when cooperating with the central government?" ! ! I can't bear it. According to the time-travel mechanism written by the author, when it is clear that the protagonist and Li Yunlong can be protected, cooperation with the central government can maximize the benefits whether it helps the government or the protagonist. The author actually just wanted to show off! Forget it, I don't want to curse. I just want to say that novice writing and pretentious writing will not go far.

Can the book be written with heart and brains, and not fool the readers into thinking they are fools? The characters' behavior must also conform to the logic and situation of the play. The writing is readable, but it makes you angry when you see the poisonous points. If you fool the readers, you are fooling yourself. The cheat itself, you also need to think about your settings carefully. If you limit the plot just to limit the props, it gives me a headache. It's a bit poisonous because the author didn't give the protagonist a brain. This could obviously be handled better. I just checked the information and looked for other ideas, but there were none. I just wrote it casually. To fight the Japanese, you don't need clothes or cans? Is this something a normal person can do? I'm so angry, I'm just so angry. This can obviously be a good book, but I feel like you've fooled me into thinking I'm a fool.

I was attracted by Golden Finger, but ended up with all kinds of sexy operations, many of which were very speechless. In the end, I couldn't finish it even though I skipped to watch it~~8

There is something, this is rare, I hope the author can have a perfect ending

Alas, you are not the first to write about this subject. Others have written so many books that begin with "Bright Sword", but you haven't integrated it and learned something good, at least set up the golden finger!

Let me try the poison I read more than 20 previous chapters I have a good head and the subject matter is acceptable. I can tell that the military world in the author's previous world is a copy. The writing is just okay and I can read it. I just felt that the things I gave to Lao Li were a bit uncomfortable, but considering that Pig's Feet had no money at the beginning, it is understandable that it started to feel better after Monk Wei appeared. The characters of Liang Jian were well portrayed, and the author came with some original copies. Now I look at Liangjian's military articles, which are always about dimensionality reduction and strikes It doesn't taste like the hardships during the Anti-Japanese War at all.

It's not rigorous. The protagonist has many strange operations. For example, he bought cotton-padded clothes for Liang Jian. The protagonist bought a down jacket and said that the heavy military coat affected the battle. Then he said that he could put another military coat on top of the down, and so on.

1. The author feels that there is no outline, or it is unclear. It can be seen from the identity setting of the protagonist that it changes from one thing to another. This cannot be written well without seriousness, and it is impossible to write a good novel. 2. When writing novels, I don't check basic things. I just rely on my feelings. Whatever I feel is right, I read the comments from book friends and my rebuttal is very harsh and self-righteous.

Many people complained about the author's setting It is clearly written that living creatures cannot leave the TV But the war horse of Xun Qin Ji can run into the bright sword In fact, the author's writing is very clear. The resources of the TV series can be used universally. I think this point I feel very good, otherwise it would be more and more boring to write a sword with only pig's feet thrown into it. Looking forward to Li Yunlong in a magical costume, leading Cao Cao, Xiang Shaolong, Sun Wukong, and Nezha to form the Chinese version of the Avengers to fight Thanos together! Who says we in China can't produce some superheroes! 🤫

The author doesn't know much about military and weapons knowledge, and the writing is very exaggerated and not interesting.

Those who like Anti-Japanese War literature are generally patriotic, hoping to be funny along the way, while giving each world a better and more pretentious development for the motherland. In reality, if it cannot be changed, just like YY. The motherland during the Anti-Japanese War was too bitter, so they all hope to change this bitterness. The author has managed this well so far. , I can just expand my thinking. After all, the protagonist is a policeman in reality, so many of the resources he has access to are inaccessible to ordinary people. However, it is better to use less of the black market. After all, there are no secrets in modern society. This may be a surprise to the protagonist's real identity. I hope it can be filled in later. Furthermore, the number of updates is too small, maybe because I like it, my requirements will be higher.

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