I Loaded the Villain Lines System

Introduction to Made in Paradise According to the design of the official panel, the speed of the substitute panel made by Heaven is infinite (∞), but this speed is not fixed, but an increasing acceleration. After the ability is activated, as time changes, the speed of Made by Heaven will become faster and faster, increasing exponentially, and eventually it can even lead to the destruction of the universe. Expansion and contraction, the universe changes into a brand new universe under the acceleration created by heaven, thereby realizing the change of the world, which is the cycle in the readers' mouth. After experiencing the change of the world, those who survive will also personally feel their own future. This is the happiness of all human beings that Pucci has always pursued. (The essence is to control the gravity of the entire universe, restart the world, and accelerate time. By the way, the growth made in heaven is a). In the new universe, the priest has the ability to predict the future, change destiny, and accelerate time.

When I saw Chapter 13, I couldn't stand it anymore. This was too much of a hang-up, but the protagonist only opened up a little bit and said a line to gain permanent abilities. Those with a little bit of brains would just say a lot of lines for explosive single-universe-level multiverse-level villains, making them invincible at the beginning, instead of talking about a few JOJO's stand-in abilities like the protagonist did. It's not that I look down on JOJO, I also like to watch JOJO. But to protect yourself, you need to be physically strong enough to dodge bullets. If you don't have the ability to save your life, how can you kick someone at the speed of light? Don't you have the power of lightning fruit? Then, just like what Pluto said in the chapter, even if it is one ten thousandth of the ability, it will kill all the enemies directly. How about giving the protagonist a full set of limits so that the protagonist doesn't act like an idiot and doesn't know how to use it?

... Author, there is something wrong with your setting. The protagonist is a time traveler. He was not powerless before and was very strong, but how did he get so messed up that he was tricked by the so-called powerful people to the point of being sentenced to death? A time traveler, being played by the rich and powerful in the midst of applause? The organization you founded is bullshit, right? ? Why are you alive?

It is recommended that if you don't know how to write invincible articles, don't write them.

It looks so strange. Is the protagonist in a serious situation? It's serious but it doesn't feel serious, and I don't feel anything when I take out various high-standard settings. . .

Let's come up with a classic quote from a villain and give the author some suggestions.

Have you only read Jojo? You might as well add Jojo before the villain in the title of the book -_-||

To be honest, I just couldn't hold it in anymore after reading about chapter 20. You said that your predecessor established the largest salvation organization, and then there were some like-minded comrades in it. Let's not say that they are all people with the same ambition. Just saying that some people agree does not mean that the protagonist just lost his ability. He was forced to be publicly executed for a year and the dog didn't even care. If you say this is the truth, then your world is hopeless. Just because the protagonist's background is a villain system, everyone must be a bad person with pus. When you raise a dog, you just need to feed it for a longer time. Even if you hit and scold him or haven't seen you for several years, the dog will go out to greet you the moment it sees you. It will not bite you to death or watch you being beaten because you are old and refuse to feed the dog. The author does not require the background story to be perfect, but the most basic rules must be harmonious. If they are all evil, then what's the point of making you a bigger villain? All stories are based on contradictory points. They are all good or all evil. So what difference does it make if you have read this story or not? They are all evil, and then the protagonist becomes the most evil one. Is it interesting?

I am a middle school student or a college student. I am very young. All I can say is

I don't understand a question. The protagonist's origin is the leader and founder of a supernatural organization, so where will these people go if the protagonist loses his superpowers? Do they all want the protagonist to die? No one is willing to protect the protagonist? But I read the author's comments and it seems that the protagonist still wants to develop a native organization. To be honest, this kind of white-eyed wolf is simply wiped out.

It's too outrageous, the background setting and the opening treatment are completely inconsistent. Even a rich man is considered a superior person. The founder of the largest extraordinary organization was founded in a crisis. Just because he lost his power, he was pushed to the gallows in less than a year, with a pile of sewage on his back. If you become a lone ranger and you don't understand human kindness, then forget about this treatment. With your background setting, not to mention becoming one of the top rich people (with a little support from the power of the past and the companions behind you), it's okay to be an ordinary person who doesn't have to worry about food and clothing. Even if there are internal conflicts and fights, it's enough to knock down the reputation and then hide it. Do you really have to make it public to the point of death?

Is it wrong to say that I don't have the ability to feel okay? For example, the ability Made in Heaven makes everything except creatures accelerate.

There are too many things that are too messy. The ability is being streamlined and no longer complicated.

The ability to feel is quite interesting, but it's a bit boring to watch. If you pretend to be cool, the scene at the time will always feel a bit awkward...

My name is Deathwing, the Destroyer of Destiny, the end of all things. Unstoppable and irresistible, I am a catastrophe!"

Alas, because I still want to complain a lot, but seeing that the tree is so cold, I forget it. I can only say that the author should work hard.

The other world line that I wrote blindly at the beginning of the execution—— Russell's lips couldn't help but tremble, and his sad phoenix eyes looked at the crowd with confusion, sarcasm, and pity. Crystal tears rolled in his eyes, drawing an ice line on his white face like thousand-year-old cold jade. His emotions after being betrayed turned into a sigh, and he recited in a low voice the final back-up that cost his life and did not require any magic power, the irreversible death. The final death curse is based on the ancient language of the dead: carry, lead, revive, open up, reverse, recover, come back, build, summon, flower of the other shore, death stone, death dedication, ultimate reversal, Su Xing, my former enemies, I will resurrect you with blood and spirit, death will be imposed on me, you, in this world, will be immortal... (Can't write anymore)

What is the reason why the protagonist loses his power? The first one to awaken his power loses it for no reason.

If the protagonist traveled to such a sad world in the 21st century, wouldn't he have any ideas to put the world back on track?

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The saint's heart is impermanent, and he takes the hearts of the people as his heart. I also have an impermanent heart, and I take the hearts of the people as my heart - Mo Bo Xun

I don't know if this book is good or bad, but I think it's really enjoyable

Third eh hey

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