I Will Stand at the Top of the Food Chain

The story is written very carefully, and the various reactions and inner activities of all the people involved are very vivid. Even if the protagonist is in the limelight, he feels that it is right and natural. There is no superficial feeling that is blunt and off-putting~~ Come on~~ Author Keep writing, it will be fine.

Seeing that no enemy could level up faster than the protagonist, I suddenly created a Southeast Asian monkey that was born at level 6. You can guess the direction of the plot later. If there are no enemies, a new high-level enemy is born. You can't go back from this point.

I tried to test the waters and pushed it for a while. I originally thought that Little Transparent would not have many readers, but recently I have been asked a lot about the plot, so I set up a forum to try to discuss it. I am usually quite busy, so I usually write it at night and publish it on time the next day. There must be some omissions in the middle. I mentioned it in this chapter, answered the questions if there were any, and then corrected them. Some of the original paragraphs have been revised and this chapter is no longer included. There is nothing we can do about it. It was not deleted intentionally. Next, many comments mentioned issues about the plot. First, regarding the strength of the country in the book, many people say it is too weak. Explain it here. The country's strength must be very strong. However, when one is powerful, one must also take care of more things. The greater the ability, the greater the responsibility, right? Chapter 1 says that after the protagonist dreams of the white wolf, there is a buffer period of about a week, and then he enters the dream forest. Chapter 5 said that because one of the Yan family's children became dream-possessed, they started to think wrongly and wanted to seize the runway and take off early. They discovered that all the dream-possessed people were in Haishi, which was a medium-sized city. Chapter 10 said that the Yan family gathered a total of thirteen dream-possessed people. After exploring the map, they found that there were about twenty more people who were suspected of being dream-possessed. In summary, there were only about thirty people in the first round of dream possession. A medium-sized city has about two to three million people, and the probability that among thirty or so people can be possessed by someone with an official background is a bit low. Just imagine, if you are an official, in a country with billions of people, even if you see more than 30 people in a certain city posting messages on the Internet, complaining that they have strange dreams at night, without knowing the inside story, will you think of the dream forest? What's more, the Dream Forest happened very recently. The protagonist is considered a latecomer among the first group of dream-possessed people, but it's just a matter of time. After all, it may only take a few days. I think it's normal for the country not to react. Another point is that the state is not an individual with actual consciousness. It will make decisions and operate, and these will take time. If you are faced with a situation that you have anticipated, it is easy to understand that you will react quickly as soon as it occurs. But if we are faced with a situation that has never happened before, do we need to discuss, collect information, and make decisions? From this perspective, when the protagonist revealed the incident in the Dream Forest, the country's soft and hard power was actually exaggerated. Because it doesn't delay time without censorship! Since then, one day and one night, the Yan family has been ruined! In the icebreaking operation, the Cai family is not as efficient as it is, right? Another point is about the reaction of the security guards when they rounded up the Yan family. When facing a strange power for the first time, it is normal to be cautious. And I only dare to write about security guards. If it expands to a larger scale, then I won't write this book, because it will definitely be gone. Second, why does the protagonist seek official support? Many people ask this question, and many of them have strong emotions. To be honest, I didn't think this was a problem at first. Because it is normal to do this after taking on the perspective of the protagonist. From the Yan family's perspective, there were only about thirty people in the first batch of possessed people in the Dream Forest. But from the perspective of the protagonist, things are a little different. Since the protagonist became a dream-possessed person, he has encountered other dream-possessed people - Guo Wenbo, Black Panther, Guo Xiaojie, Yan Yixian, and twelve of his men. When meeting Guo Wenbo for the first time, the protagonist was still lucky and consciously concealed it. After that, he clearly realized that the Yan family gang was hunting predators of his level, and successfully fought against thirteen of them because of his resistance. In this case, it is necessary to find foreign aid both emotionally and rationally. After all, after the protagonist encounters so many dream-possessed people, he will not feel that he is the special one. The golden finger I gave to the protagonist is not from this identity. It's the potential power under this identity. From the perspective of the protagonist, he is not unique or special. There is no need to carefully guard this identity and passively wait to be hunted down by others. What can be exchanged for this identity is the key. The third question is about Chapter 2, where the protagonist discovers danger as soon as he enters. What I want to highlight here is the strangeness and danger of the dream forest. Some sheep have eaten grass all their lives and are snatched away by wolves at the end of their old age. This is quite sudden, right? Another thing is that this book is internally projected, so I need to create conflicts and contradictions in the first few chapters. If the protagonist adapts in various ways after entering the dream forest, looks here and there, and gives a psychological description... Then, this book will not be signed. After all, I am a newcomer, so I am not qualified to play the role of foreshadowing in the opening chapter, right? Fourth, the problem of the heroine. First of all, let me say that I am particularly not good at writing emotional dramas. It's not that I don't want to write, it's that I really can't write and don't understand. I've read other people's light novels and daily romance articles and received thousands of them. I've ordered hundreds of thousands of them for the first time. I'm envious and drooling, but I can't learn. Real writing would be embarrassing. Therefore, this book will not have a female protagonist, nor will it contain any emotional drama. But can't there be women in this world? Treat her as a colleague or a brother, the same thing. Anyway, that's what I plan to write. In the final ending, it is enough to give the protagonist a destination depending on the situation. Fifth, the lone wolf problem. Ah, this... I think the protagonist will have many dream-possessed people to communicate with in the future, so there is no need to bring a bunch of Beast Boys with him, right? Isn't it good to accept someone as your younger brother? In the end, I feel that there are still so many people questioning the plot even though the results are average, which means that what I wrote is not satisfying to people. It is normal for newcomers to be lacking in all aspects. After that, I will deliberately write some cool writing routines and practice them. I hope you will show mercy when the time comes. Thank you. If there is any plot discussion in the future, I will reply on this floor.

😃There are thirteen villains at the beginning, 12 second-level little Karami, and one third-level young master. At this level, he can travel through the forest three to four times a day. Readers pointed out that your system is broken, so you must be stubborn. From the perspective of the protagonist, the map is a primeval forest, with thirty humans and countless animals. How many level 2 animals has the protagonist at level 3 eaten in two days? Two hundred rats are the starting point. You said in your article that if you eat more than 100 level 2 rats, you can gain about 15% of the experience to level up to level 4. Where is the villain? I fully support the eldest young master. When the young master reaches level 3, the other 12 people are still little Karami. In the article, a bird and a monkey appear as scouts. They rely on the scouts to locate the position and then other people go up and gain experience for the young master. ​Original forest, level three is the top level, but there are many, let alone level two. Otherwise, the prey must be chased and intercepted if they are not released. I wonder if each of a group of little pussy has teleportation and invincibility? Even if there are 4 people in each group (the young master can't go out at all, and there are two scouts), there are only four level 2s, looking for prey, rushing to the place where the prey is found (you have to run, right? There must be a lot of movement, and you know whether the process is dangerous or not), chasing the prey (the prey cannot be seen waiting to die in a 1vn ​​restoration, just running through the jungle is a chase), and bringing the prey to the young master. A level 2 prey counts as 5 minutes faster (in the animal world, the size of the prey basically corresponds to the combat power. Big ones may not be able to fight 1 against 1, and the smaller ones are more difficult to catch, but it is not too much. Just sneak into a corner cave and ask others of the same size if they dare to chase it in and fight for a real person), 12 animals in one hour. Even if the old thing at level 3 saves you half the time with 50% experience, it's still not enough for you in one day. What's wrong, F1 can kill monsters in full screen instantly? Not to mention eating only the heart or something like that. The protagonist can speed up digestion. It's pretty boring. The villain also has something to speed up digestion, right? Is there something wrong with what you wrote?

First of all, I want to declare that I really like this book. For an old book fan who has been reading for more than ten years. The setting, shaping and rhythm of this book are very good so far. There is no doubt that it is a new book with extraordinary potential. I have already voted for it. But there is one thing that I always feel a little awkward about. That is: the official organization of this article shows some unreasonable abilities. The world background of this book is a fusion of different worlds that has changed significantly. This is a very, very important change related to the destiny of mankind across the country and around the world. There is no doubt that it will have a huge impact on human society. It is a crisis but also an opportunity. As a state machine that controls huge energy. Faced with Haishi, the only fusion vanguard who has ever been possessed by a dream possessor, and the only fourth-level dream possessor, Li Yin showed the greatest importance and the most cautious treatment. Let's not talk about the performance of the current leader, let's just talk about the brainless young man who appears next to the protagonist and is suspected of using the back door. It gives people a completely unreliable and unprofessional feeling. As a big country, even in an imaginary world, it is reasonable for a big country to respond. For example, it immediately mobilizes top talents from all over the country to form a team of experts to avoid the shortage of talents in sea markets and the situation where local law enforcement officers work crazy overtime and cause fatigue driving. Another example is to immediately provide necessary psychological counseling and professional training to dream-possessed people, so as to avoid unnecessary damage to the number of dream-possessed people in the world. These things are completely possible for a big country with a huge talent reserve, and it is not just a simple organization like in the article, which does not even have a professional logistics team. Even the leadership of the dream-possessed people appears to be quite weak and incompetent. It completely fails to reflect the capabilities that a big country should have. In my opinion, this is quite unreasonable. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. I believe the author also has his own considerations. I am looking forward to the subsequent development of the plot. Of course, if the author can adopt my opinions a little bit, I will also be very happy. ps: The author can actually refer to the official settings of the book "Players Are Fierce". I think the book is relatively rigorous and professional in its settings in this regard (personal feeling, don't criticize if you don't like it)

The idea of ​​this book is very good, but the world view described is too small. The world is turned upside down. There should be panic, armies, wars, death, etc., But hundreds of chapters are devoted to gang fights and reasoning to solve crimes in a small city. The article is not on topic and I am very disappointed.

How can I put it, it's not bad, it's just like the comment below said, it's like a world where spiritual energy is revived, where the power belongs to oneself. If you don't want to upgrade, you have to take care of some fancy things. It's just a waste of time. How did you get your current status? Because you are level four, but this is a world of spiritual energy recovery. One step is the first, and the other is the first. What happened to the pig's feet? After reaching level 4, maybe you feel that you are so powerful that you can't see him going to upgrade. Why don't you cooperate with others to upgrade and wait for you to upgrade them? Others won't do it if you just stand still, but Pig's Feet doesn't understand this. After level four, he won't upgrade.

I spent two coins to talk about it specifically. I read the first five chapters and died from poison. In the beginning, I wrote about adventures and then forcibly downgraded the level for the sake of plot. The villain can be upgraded with a level 3 pig. In the later part, it is infinitely devouring without the limitation of the protagonist's satiety. Some people are brainless and say that there is too little egg liquid to eat creatures of the same level and cannot be upgraded. Then how can the villain reach the late level 3 in one day? Is the co-protagonist not as talented as the villain? Eat high-grade egg liquid with dozens of Level 3 eggs, and suppress the villain as soon as you meet them. How about fun? Moreover, the author didn't tell me how much egg liquid was missing. I just relied on my imagination to make up for the monsters and get excited. I'm convinced🤮🤮

To be honest, the subject matter is very new. But there are too many bugs in the settings. Regarding the issue of saber-tooth tiger upgrading faster than the protagonist; although the author has been explaining it, in my opinion, it has not achieved any logical self-consistency. First of all, a tiger who barely managed to reach level three by eating a level three animal (a tiger that had been living by eating rabbits before) has what qualifications does he have to fight against a beast that is also level three? Does he have confrontation experience? Even if those 13 level 1 and 2 people have experience fighting in beast form, can they fight against level 3? If I read it right, all level 3 tigers start to have special abilities... At the very least, in my opinion, the tiger lineup is not capable of hunting level 3 beasts in one day. The most reluctant excuse is to give level 3 tigers 24 hours to familiarize themselves with the fighting skills in beast form, right? The protagonist was promoted to level 3 one day earlier than the tiger. The next day, he also picked up a big missed egg and added three level 3 and a group of level 2 people. And then Tiger overtakes the protagonist in just one night just after reaching level three? The author also sets the consciousness to return to reality, and the possessed beast in the dream forest will act according to the instinct of the beast. Then I want to ask, Sabretooth Tiger and his friends are not offline? Doesn't the saber-toothed tiger have to kill other beasts in the same group first?

There is nothing unreasonable about the upgrade of the saber-toothed tiger to level four. The plot is too slow and it suffers from a very serious disease. The protagonist fights to survive and only upgrades after a bunch of adventures, while the supporting characters are upgraded casually. There is also a protagonist who doesn't want to level up quickly after level 4, but instead works as a nanny for some rice bugs, for fear that others won't be able to catch up with him.