I Can See the Book of Life and Death

I'm speechless. The author doesn't have the writing style of a master, but he has a young heart. The awkward plot was thankless to write. Any attempt to reform the system in the last years of the dynasty was in vain. A normal time traveler would have been obsessed with rebellion long ago after going through so much. However, the protagonist is still a dumbass with no independent opinion. He is just the author's puppet. It's really disgusting to watch.

As a modern protagonist who travels back in time, he clearly knows that this is the scene of the last years of the dynasty, he clearly knows that the paper framer will only die, and he should not have any illusions about feudal society, but he still follows the path of loyalty to the emperor and reforms. If it is really going to succeed, how did the end of the Ming Dynasty and the late Qing Dynasty fail? You clearly have the dragon-slaying skill in your heart but you don't dare to use it, and you don't even try once. I think it's not the protagonist who is afraid, but you, the author, who is afraid! So if you're afraid, don't write this kind of novel. Upgraded novels are waiting for you. If you want to write this kind of article, then don't be timid and just write about revolution and rebuilding a new world. I don't know how much better it is than the current writing style that is like a resentful woman!

The writing is so depressing, it feels like everyone in the world is the enemy. The protagonist has a grievance, but he also happens to be a happy-go-lucky character. If you want to take care of it, then work hard to cultivate and develop your power! Wait until you have enough cultivation and power to kill directly! If you don't want to take care of it but can't control it, just use the function of your golden finger to climb up and take control!      ,,,,…🔨? The girl's moaning smells so youthful and unpleasant!

The protagonist or the author is too paranoid. The family and the restaurant were picked on several times, and the protagonist only said that the world was dark and there was no way for people to survive. How did those small characters in history get rich? Examples include eunuchs, cronies of traitorous ministers, and distant relatives of corrupt officials. You only know how to make money, but don't know how to find a backer? Also, if you complain about floods and granary shortages in a county every day, do you expect the government to deal with it? You make so much money and bribe a corrupt official so cruelly that you can even have the county magistrate's house confiscated. Even worse than the natives, the world is still dark and blaming.

After reading 150 pictures, the author keeps poisoning me. It is a fantasy martial arts world that is written to be close to reality. Da Xia competes with the Qing Dynasty, and the Land of the Rising Sun competes with Little Japan. Then Little Japan invades and massacres Da Xia. There is also a main character who rebels but does not rebel. Zizhen Zhen can predict the future, but it is so useless. It should be abandoned.

The more I read this book, the more regretful I feel. The position of the protagonist and the problems he views are too high and too big. He is always concerned about the country and the people from a high position. It cannot be said that the protagonist is not a good person, but there have never been good people in ancient and modern times, at home and abroad, who can achieve things. They are just too cold when things happen.

It's hard to watch. I can only say that you, the author, are really a person with an advanced literary illness. I read 150 chapters and it was very uncomfortable. I know that I can change, I know that it is the end of the dynasty, I know that I have this ability, and the plug-ins are already awesome. I just want to improve the word count. Take a look at other good simulation novels. There is no need for online fantasy novels to be written like this. It is very depressing. Please take a good look at my simulation of the road to immortality. It is extremely poisonous.

Why do most people say that the protagonist, Our Lady, has no brains, and it still doesn't feel good enough after all? I have read Chapter 44. The protagonist has been practicing for forty or fifty years in total. It feels like he has not practiced at all. The whole map is dark because of the high altitude. It can be said that it is to control the map and the protagonist, but after three or four lifetimes, the protagonist and the protagonist's family suffer the result, so why bother? There is no trouble, but most of the huge country is the enemy, what the hell Explain the behavior of the protagonist, but in a novel about cultivating immortals, I really don't know what the meaning of this is. According to this way of writing, is it necessary to solve the corruption of the entire country? What if you can remove all the corrupt officials? You are not the emperor. We can still understand if you want to rebel. After all, you can be the emperor. After you kill him, there will still be corrupt officials, and the people will still be the same. They will still squeeze the people for tax revenue. So what is the point of this kind of thing The setting is outrageous, there are not many good people in the whole Jiangnan

The whole Jiangnan, not the whole country. Looking back, it is written from top to bottom. The writing is selfish and the theme is unclear. The time-travelers have no basic foresight. It is better to write about the indigenous people. And as a time-traveler, he is like a fool. The plot is a routine that has happened countless times in history and countless literary works have borrowed countless times. If you are an indigenous person, it is okay to express it like this. You are a time-traveler who has been baptized by Mao's concepts. Writing these obvious things in the whole space is disgusting and a waste of time.

I stopped reading after seeing 200 of them. I felt like there was something wrong with the protagonist's mentality. Why is he still so childish after going through so much?