Even Homelander Has to Pay for His Duck-Leg Rice

Writing the protagonist as a fool is the biggest sin of this book

Saitama in the original work has always been aware of how powerful he is, but why does the protagonist seem to have no clear understanding of his own strength? And Saitama is not stupid, okay? Many details in the original work clearly show that Saitama's ideological level is very high, but because it exceeds a certain range, it just looks dull. When reading the original work, the author probably did not understand Saitama as an invincible fool.

Brothers, I didn't pay much attention to it at first, but more and more people are paying attention to the surname "Mitarai", and it is really necessary to explain it. Mitarai is really two different things from the bathroom. Stop instilling wrong perceptions into others, please🙏.

Is this written as a punch or as a black robe? It would be nice if the One Punch character had a protagonist. With the addition of other characters, Hustle takes over. From the moment Fubuki appeared, it suddenly dropped several levels.

Well, those who watch The Black Robe will definitely like to see a protagonist like yours? And is there still a market for Saitama's character now? Ever since I saw the reset version, where Hungry Wolf and Saitama were fighting indistinguishably, I instantly felt like Saitama was like a clown🤔

The author should start a new book. After reading the first few chapters of this book, I feel that I have no interest in it. Your plot is too similar to One Punch Man. The key points are just used, but you have failed.

It's a hodgepodge, it's boring to stew. IQ is not online. At first I thought there was only one protagonist in the world of the Motherland, but it turned out to be a fusion monster.

Saitama's character is okay in anime, but it's really not suitable for writing in a novel.

Mitarashi: refers to the bathroom in Japanese, which means toilet hahahahahaha

After thinking about it, I decided to post a comment from the writer, giving a supplementary explanation on the relevant settings of the work. First of all, as the introduction says, this is a story about the One Punch Man universe invading the main world of the Black Robe Picket. Those who cannot accept this setting can avoid it on their own. So as not to waste your time and affect my mood. The relevant characters and fate of the characters will not remain unchanged, but the character will remain consistent with the original work in general. Don't complain about why the protagonist has so few scenes. Invincible will definitely follow the group portrait route and use various branch lines to highlight the strength of the protagonist. The protagonist will not be the kind of person who is decisive in killing (not being good at killing does not mean he is indecisive) and has clear pursuits and goals. Because there is no goal that he cannot achieve, if the protagonist sweeps all the way, the plot will not progress at all. Therefore, the protagonist's character has two outstanding points: he is very nervous and does whatever he wants. As for the supporting roles, the metal bat will be the male supporting role in a lot of scenes. I personally like this character very much, and other characters will appear later. As for the female supporting characters, there will be three. Fubuki and Tatsumaki have already appeared. Visually, the last one will take a long time to appear (the Monster Association Chapter). The characters are respectively Yujie, Loli and Mengmei. The character abilities in the black robe world will be strengthened to a certain extent (otherwise it would not be enough to fight). According to the author's current thinking, Starlight's strength is Gui Dian (slightly stronger than Deep Sea King without sea water), Motherland and Black, at least above Dragon level.