Red Moon: I Can See the Upgrade Panel

It's a rough start, but it's understandable if you're weak. If you are still stubborn after joining a force, just read the post. People have said that you are suitable for the invincible cross-pushing flow. You have become invincible and you are convinced by adding some old sixth flow. You are afraid of this or that breathing method and you don't dare to move up. 😵🔨

So what, sister, the system of your book is very good. If it doesn't have those plots of pretending to slap someone in the face and someone blocking the road, it will definitely be the best. This kind of plot is no longer popular. This book can follow two systems, or the invincible flow. The plot can appear monsters like water, add some radiation to intensify, the world's energy system continues to improve, or the wretched development flow, leaning against a big tree to enjoy the shade. These can catch a wave of readers, and make some jokes. Of course, it's just a little suggestion.

Don't you even read what the author writes? There are a lot of inconsistencies. People who have clearly met each other write like strangers.

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, so they got up quickly and updated 🤫

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After the high school entrance examination, I can still be the first. . . Are there so few people following it?

It's too poisonous. The opponent's strength gap is too big for the protagonist. President Yao is too powerful. Pig's feet is always scared and even trembles. Acting like a dead dog. Your situation of being criticized may have been popular in the past, or it could be done in TV series.                                                                                                                                 Reading novels is for relieving stress, not for being angry. It is better to break out on the spot and be beaten and injured, and to take revenge in the wild, than to write it like this. In all your novels, the protagonist is too stubborn and the opponent is too powerful, which is very annoying. If you do it directly in front of your face, it will be very exciting. TV dramas are different from novels. Novels have a sense of immersion, and it is not good to be too accepting. Pretending to be obscene and developing does not mean being criticized. Also, you like to write about pig's feet, doubles, and disguises. That was the way novels were written more than ten years ago. Now it's just a sideways push. If you are too cowardly, no one will read it, so you will be a eunuch. Even if he is stubborn, he is trying to kill him behind his back, rather than making the readers angry.

It used to be a sluggish one, but it was suitable for development. After being sluggish for so long, it's time to explode in strength. Now it's entering the exciting battle phase. The protagonist's strength has been greatly improved, but it's time to vent his dissatisfaction.

This profile... Makes me feel next door

The new chapter is quite funny. I didn't expect that the villain would cause trouble when the protagonist went to the toilet and the protagonist peed all over him. The villain became numb on the spot.

It feels a little wrong. After a hundred pictures, the various characters are a little bit broken, and the darkness returns to darkness, but I feel a little disgusted. If you continue to do this later, you will probably retreat.

The writing is quite good, but as you get to the back, there are always some arrangements, and the plot is pretentious, and the protagonist always looks stupid. I am convinced and can't stand it anymore. The pretense is not enough, and I look stupidb

Like it very much 💕! Very interesting and interesting

I was looking through the bookshelf recently and found a book called Master Shishi Eunuch at the bottom of the bookshelf. I found it from there hehe 🙂

So why can't I join this group? What about group management?

This introduction makes me laugh, I'd better change it 😁

After the revision, there are almost no poisonous points, and the plot progresses much faster. Come on!

It's cloudy and foggy, and I can't understand anything.

Is this considered a picture? Author sister

Haven't been contacted yet? What's wrong? Isolated?

Hahaha, I guess it's being revised again. Otherwise there will be no further content.

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It feels like the protagonist has no brains and no sense of crisis. This setting is very painful. He has to rely on the author's gift to survive... His panel clearly shows: develop a digestion-aiding technique, develop high-energy food, and upgrade quickly... As long as these three are required, what is he doing?

Well written, keep it up! Come on! Come on!

Appraisal by an eleven-year-old bookworm. It is very well written and has very few poisonous points. It is worth collecting.