I Can Steal the Fruits of Cultivation

Actually, the book title is wrong. Stealing implies that you have something others don't, but that's not the case at all; it's more like "getting something for free."

He has a lower likability for women who specialize in groping, or he has an advantage over Erwu. His words are not disgusting enough, and he has a tendency to lower his intelligence. No matter how hard his fists are, they are not as hard as divine weapons. He can carry a halberd even if he has a storage bag.

I've read over ten chapters. The author's premise is alright, but the writing is terrible. First, you're writing about demonic cultivators, yet you call a resource war a life-or-death battle—it's just a friendly spar. Second, why not use the available pills instead of taking them and getting them for free?

This setup feels like it might have some flaws. What if one day you become the best in the world? Who will you take advantage of for free?

If a character goes on a training expedition and a saintess or beautiful sect leader falls from the sky, how can the story become popular? A light novel about a character who fights her way through trials and tribulations, picks up a sect leader, breaks through to a demon woman, or encounters a female dragon king at the academy—it may be cliché, but it's still a hit.

Author, this won't do! This is too weak. At first, it felt novel and interesting, but later... Oh dear, your current state is terrible. I think you've completely fallen into a trap you set for yourself. You're just trying to stick to the book's theme and steal others' insights. But recent events seem rather inexplicable, or rather, not logically sound.

The subject matter is good, and the plot is also good. This kind of writing style is what makes a fast-paced, action-packed story. It would be even better if it were a little more rigorous.

The protagonist's earlier challenge of deliberately offering her pills wasn't perfect. If I were her, I'd just slap her across the face, throw the pills in front of her, and then admit defeat. That would draw so much hatred; why would I need to think about the dialogue?

The "golden finger" (cheat code) isn't very good! The "friendliness +1" (friendliness bonus) setting isn't great either. The protagonist kills an entire family, and then each time he gets something for free, his friendliness increases by one, eventually becoming his best buddy. The friend tells the protagonist, "It's okay, kill as much as you want. If you haven't killed enough, I'll let you continue killing after I get married and have kids." Is this really that funny?

With fate intervened, I'm probably doomed! He's gone, fellow Daoist, take care!