If the Disciple Is Too Shabby

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After a few days of raising it, I couldn't help but show it to me. It only took ten minutes. Oh, it was very painful.

The plot should not only have an outline, but also have details. The scene description and character description are not good enough. For example, I have written about the character Morgana in the previous chapters, but I don't know whether this character is male or female? The talent you gave him was that of a beauty and a bad luck. Logically speaking, this should be the talent of a girl, but you also described him as a boy who would be killed by the boss for thousands of years. After reading the first few chapters, I feel like you're going to collapse in the later chapters because they don't match up? Details determine success or failure.

The previous reading was very silly, and I was willing to subscribe, but when the main character pretended to be a succubus, the book fell apart.

It poisoned me to death Chapter 9 directly persuaded me to quit, the data collapse was ridiculous. A bandit king is only at level 9, but then a Black Tiger Hall with more than 100 levels of strength suddenly appears. How did the protagonist persist for so many days without being directly destroyed? Outrageous

This one has poor grades and is probably about to be cut off, just like the previous one.

Infinite resurrection is just one-sided, there is no punishment at all, and there is no need for a plot. What's the point of just rushing through it?

The nc author explains how the basic Taoism of the Five Elements came to be used by the Japanese.

The writing of the fourth test is so disgusting. In order for the fourth test to keep up with the big team, they were forced to cheat and change jobs. It was simply disgusting. In order to develop in the early stage, the protagonist was developed almost from scratch, and the subsequent ones were just taken off the shelf? The great inventor jumped ship directly, and he still had an immortal weapon in his hand. This was a bit harsh for the players in the fourth test. The players in front of them all relied on their own talents except for their initial talents. The players in the fourth test directly cheated and forced themselves to keep up with the big army. What was this writing? There was a moment when I really didn't want to read it. I asked the author to write it well in the later stage. There is no need for them to keep up with the big army. It would be good to have the first three tests to open the way, and let them be the tool people for the later ones. You don't have the ability to write everyone well. The more you read, the more you focus. I really feel that the later writing It's so weak, the master just rowed. Except for a few players in the internal beta test, almost all of them are useless. It was originally a novel that got better and better as it was written. If you write it like this, there is really no way to write it well. It is still a fledgling and has not reached the second level. I could have gone to the second level, but it's a pity that I can't do it myself.

It's starting to add real-world strength to players again, and it's starting to cause trouble again, it's so poisonous

Let's change it. The group portrait became a special show for shit beetles. It also provoked state departments and directly endangered public safety and order. I suspected you of being a spy and arrested you.

Don't be fooled when reading this book. Golden elixir players can defeat tribulations by opening eight gates of Dunjia 🤫🤫🤫. After crossing n major realms, the combat power system collapses.

I don't know what the author thinks? It is written in the rules of any sect that you are not allowed to teach any of the sect's techniques to others without permission! Isn't this the biggest loophole in teaching martial arts skills to a female NPC who doesn't like players?

I glanced around and saw no one. . . . . I am a sand sculpture

Can you practice cultivating immortality in the real world? It's too poisonous.

Why did it become a complete book? It's a scam. I ordered it all the way. Now I'm updating the Six Doors book every day. Author, you don't have the heart.

What a mess! What the hell? Composition for primary school students

The details are too poor, it smells like a noob, and the realistic plot is even more toxic.

Can I ask the authors of Shen Nong's book how they deal with infinite resurrection? It feels like I was killed today and saw the same person again tomorrow, which is a bit forced.

I asked if the author has an outline. The demon sect swallows the settings, and the blood banshee becomes the leader. In the world of cultivation, there is another set of settings. Morgana and Sister Zhou are talented in defeating the opposite sex. If you let them act as Taoist couples, who will be the top? Why didn't the dung beetle have a "hard" man? Why didn't Taoist monk Morgana get struck to death by lightning?

Books that have been suspended for 8 days are free? Don't even look at it for free

Not until chapter 18. Too poisonous

What happened? Did you send it? This book

How can the eunuch's book be exempt from the upper limit...

There is a recent book shortage. Do you have any good novels to recommend? In addition to this book on my bookshelf now, I also read "The Mortal's Story of Immortality" and "The Monk's Family". As everyone knows, "The Monk's Family" is almost 3 million words, and I feel it's okay. The author's writing is very exciting, and the adventures are one after another. Looking at the later stages, the articles are not messy, and there are more than a thousand chapters now, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the map is getting bigger and bigger. I just like this kind of grand world view setting. What is commendable is that as the map becomes larger and larger, the author has also made the various supporting characters very fleshed out. It tells a family story, probably a novel about a group of cultivators. I think this is more difficult to grasp than a novel with a single protagonist. It is not easy to get all the way to this point. I thought it would be a trap at first, but so far, the plot constructed by the author is very rich and the reading is very smooth. The character descriptions are just right, including demeanor, dialogue, appearance, etc. The copy tasks of the article and the main tasks switch naturally. A small problem is that in some chapters, the family ranks are inconsistent. The author can make these basic settings a dynamic item, so that there will be no differences as the context goes. In short, the writing is very good, the setting is grand, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are full, and the reading is smooth and natural. I recommend it.

Boss, I'm better at several books at the same time. Can I focus on this one?

It's broken. Although there is no logic in the front, I can still read it, but I can't stand the back part

This book is well written and worth recommending! ! !

I can't stand it for more than 20 chapters. Slipped away

This book is very imaginative, the plot is very fast-paced, and it sets a precedent in that it gets rid of many traditional shackles. The key is that it is a light-hearted article, and I feel very happy when reading this book. In short, this is a different book.