Wulin Myth: Starting from Marrying Jiang Yuyan

It's not very good, the writing is too complicated, this case and that case seems very boring and there is nothing new, it feels like it is copied from others, and it doesn't make people have the slightest desire to continue reading. The protagonist's abilities are too limited. Those skills that can make all the difference in the hands of others can only be bullied in his hands.

What to say about this book? You crammed too many books into one book, which makes readers who have not read those books have a bad impression. There are other similar books, but they are not as confusing to read. It's not that the subject matter is bad, it just feels like the author didn't control it well.

I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter, the writing is touching! Doesn't the author himself read the articles he has written?

It's not well written and has no content of its own. The whole text is simply a mixture of the contents of the book. The most disgusting thing is that the protagonist has no skills. He always smiles and is confident. Otherwise, he is just confused and confident.

Beauty

When will we go back to see Jiang Yuyan?

The writing is the same as 🐶. She is afraid of this and that. Jiang Yuyan is only like that because of her special experience. You know the plot and someone with strong martial arts skills is so afraid of her. I am also fucking drunk.

Embroidered spring knife

You need 500 followers to post. Also drunk. I don't complain about the shortcomings of this book, so I didn't deserve a reward in the first place, so I gave it a reward just for posting. I have never read your book before. I read this book because of the title. I thought it was quite interesting to have Jiang Yuyan as the heroine. As a result, it was offline after Chapter 10. It has become an existence that only lives in the title of the book. And looking at your posture, he won't be able to come back online for a while. But based on the title of your book and your introduction, I guess Jiang Yuyan is a character who plays a very important role and is crucial to the plot. As a result, the protagonist sent him a golden finger and then disappeared. And the worldview of this book is relatively complex, mixing too many backgrounds from film and television dramas. Although many characters are familiar, few people have read them all. The background of the characters is not clearly introduced, and they are directly mixed together. When unfamiliar characters appear, readers have to look them up by themselves and think about the causes and consequences of their appearance here. In other words, readers need to figure it out for themselves. It is estimated that many people saw this in confusion. Generally speaking, this book is not much different from other pj mixed martial arts novels. It relies on the plot to go all the way, and it can be seen that it wants to write something of its own, but there are too many elements mixed together, and the original plot is really insignificant compared with the mixed martial arts elements. I suggest the author return to Jiang Yuyan, I quite like this heroine. But this book is not without its highlights. At least the golden finger is not a system lottery, which makes this book look relatively comfortable. (PS: That evil busty witch is the author's trumpet, right?)

The protagonist is really ruthless. He kills people without giving a glance and buries a leaf alive. He has already developed into a pervert.

Although Jiang Yuyan was able to kill the peerless duo in the show's title, the protagonist is not weak at all. Wu Yazi has a lifetime of skills, and he has practiced Shaolin Yi Jing Jing and other Shaolin secrets. Is he still not convinced? And now Jiang Yuyan does not have blackening skills and has not reached its peak.

Books that say something like that in the introduction but end up being like that usually end up falling apart.

There is a cause rather than an effect. Even though Wu Yazi has spent his whole life, he still wants to avenge others. He takes care of his wife and daughter so that they all die violently like in the original work. Li Qiushui and the Tianshan Child Lao died together, and Mrs. Wang was killed by Murong Fu.

The author is writing a book that collapses

The protagonist's golden finger has too many side effects, right? The protagonist cannot control his murderous intention at all, and may become a demon if he does not control it.

Can't you write about Jiang Yuyan? After all, they are all here for the three characters Jiang Yuyan. . . Also, if you write about martial arts, you should write it well. Don't imitate the large group of people before you who jumped on the street. If you write about martial arts well, you must write a dynasty for hegemony.

The protagonist is a bit murderous, hoping to change the fact that the living are more valuable than the dead.

It's a pity that Ding Baiying was killed by the protagonist's murderous ghost personality, so she could have been subdued as his subordinate. The protagonist creates his own power

These fucking fans buy everything, right? The writing makes no sense, and the people who read it are so verbose that even a pig is smarter than the protagonist.

Stop writing this rubbish

It's a big stew in one pot, but it's a pity that the chef is not good at it

Jiang Yuyan is still a mortal now. The protagonist has Wu Yazi's seventy years of skills. He doesn't know what he is doing, and he is like a cowardly dog.

There's no need to say what shit I wrote. Watching it makes me think

This is the first time I have seen a novel with so many flaws, so I only read a few chapters. It was too blunt, and the plot had holes that could not be explained. The protagonist's brain circuit is strange, and his emotional intelligence is touching. The author talks to himself there, and forcefully explains to the readers the SB thoughts and practices of the unlikable protagonist he has created. In fact, it seems that there is a problem with the author's writing perspective, the logic is confusing, and I can't stand it. Goodbye.

It's a mess, with characters from various movies and TV dramas thrown in without a main line. I was attracted by the name and lost sight of the title of the book.

This is not a fun novel, it is incomprehensible to read. The main plot in the novel is about something, it seems to be saying everything, and it seems to be saying nothing. I can't see what the protagonist's character is, nor can I see the protagonist's purpose. I still don't understand the protagonist's golden finger.

You are forcing everyone to make up their mind. Jiang Yuyan and Ji Yaohua have the same face, and Tang Bohu and Ling Lingfa bump into each other again. How can this be seen? You are making a mess.

Do you guys have any recommendations for mixed martial arts novels in the world of ancient dragons? Those who don't want to travel fast but want mixed martial arts, please.

If your level is not good enough, go back and practice more. I wasted half an hour. If everyone who writes books wastes my time like you, how can I read the book?

The creativity is quite good, and the writing is okay, but some poisonous points pop up from time to time (since the role of the heroine is given to someone like Jiang Yuyan, the handling of the relationship between the protagonist and Jiang Yuyan will be a test for the author. The treatment in the article is rather awkward, and the plot falls into a cliche). There are also some typos that pop up, and the plot advancement is also more deliberate. I can see through the rest of the article at a glance, and there is no sense of expectation. I hope you can work hard.