Scientific Beast Taming: Mech Battle Pets

Shen Nong is here, the comments contain no spoilers. As for the mechanical design, the mechanical combat plot is very well designed, and it feels very much like a cyberpunk beast novel. However, the description of the characters is awkward. The protagonist is a bit too arrogant. I feel that the author wants to show the indifference of a genius to foreign affairs. After reading it, I feel that he has used too much force. To give a simple example: the protagonist is walking on the road, and two little girls come to him to shoot a short video, but he refuses. The little girl admires him and asks him how to make a video. The protagonist says: "You are not worthy." The girl says: "How can you be worthy?" The protagonist says: "Just be better than me." Girls, just start Thirty Years in Hedong and Thirty Years in Hexi. Don't bully young people. Remember my name. My name is XXX I was so numb when I saw this person, but it's okay. A little poison resistance seems to be no problem. You can feel for yourself whether you can accept it or not. There is another small problem. The protagonist usually speaks in a dull manner and is a bit funny. Why is he so aggressive when talking to the school leader? After all, it is... Elders, just say "Don't train me, I don't like it" directly in the face of the school leader. Is this... The main shortcomings are definitely many, but there are definitely many advantages, but they are not explained bit by bit. Bad opinions are only for reference. You will know after you have crossed the river

It's a bit like Mr. Qi Peijia's vest.

I can't say that the writing is not good, the subject matter is good. But it's too boring. Not to mention the large amount of data description, the plot is seriously delayed. Abandoned

It's well written, but what's going on with this inexplicable watery feeling? If there are more updates from the author and there are no poisonous points, the results are expected to be similar to those of the next door "Unscientific Beast Control".

The author may want to make the protagonist feel a little arrogant due to his high talent. But when he gets along with his friends, he is not the same person as when he gets along with the principal and director. The former can buy a machine gun for his brother to mount on the Tyrannosaurus Rex, and he can ask his brother for his opinion on the Tyrannosaurus Rex. Some slightly excessive things are magnified, making the protagonist seem arrogant and arrogant. I feel that the protagonist is too torn. He is flesh and blood when he is with his brothers. When he is with other people, he becomes the kind of person who looks arrogant and only cares about chips, but in fact has no brains.

Why is it so watery? It's not a problem of few updates, it's just that the same thing is said over and over again. The theme setting is okay, the writing is okay, but the pace is too slow. Do the book friends at Qidian pay to watch you read? You spend real money to subscribe, and you're just going to watch this?

Other problems are not big. The protagonist's stubborn character makes people uncomfortable. The author wanted to describe the image of a genius with high IQ, but in terms of description, it feels like a failure. He is arrogant and has no emotional intelligence, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable.

The subject matter is quite good, but I don't know which era the author is from? The routine of showing off and slapping people in the face is really repeated endlessly. According to the understanding in the book, the protagonist's ability is beyond the scope and is suspected of being normal. Is it necessary to keep writing? Who wants to see being repeatedly questioned and ridiculed without proving his scientific research ability even a little bit? The word water? Masochist? We just had a fight, it was so funny, you were questioned again before you even finished pretending to be awesome. Did you sublimate the trick of showing off and getting slapped in the face, into a routine where you were questioned repeatedly before you finished pretending?

The writing is very good, but why do I have no sense of involvement? It feels like I am reading a text.

Brother, your novel must be very popular in Africa. Because you are their savior