The Blasphemous Wizard of the Mysterious World

The player base in the game is already invincible. Why don't you show off in reality? Is it interesting to keep writing about games? Continuing to be strong in the game is like an arranged plot. Anyone who has played the game knows that it is usually skipped. If you write too much, the word count will be low.

Personally, I think there are several major problems with this book. 1. The protagonist is probably not a fool. If he can't turn back, he might be sold and have to count the money to others. (Actually, even if it is turned back, the protagonist's IQ may not have been betrayed by others, and he still counts money for others) 2. The appearance of the saint in front of others is too deliberate, and I was so embarrassed that I even cut out the five rooms and one living room. 3. Emotional dramas are sparse. If you don't know how to write emotional dramas, don't write them! 4. The protagonist is like a ruffian, always doing shit. To be honest, can we not just do shit when nothing happens? I really don't like this little ruffian's character. 5. Didn't think about it well. If you ignore the above poisonous points, this book is still good, but for someone like me who pursues both rationality and interestingness, the above poisonous points are enough for me to pass this book.

Alas, I have read Chapter 179. Can the protagonist be less pretentious? A prop that is useless except for the prop is so shameless that he brags about it. I am really speechless. It is the most annoying to see this kind of plot. Lian Na, Xiao Qi, the secret cultivator, and those from the administration. I have seen enough of the pretense.

So far, it's good to watch. I hope I won't be like the protagonist in the Kitchen God book next door, who behaves like a greasy scumbag out of nowhere.

In fact, many people in this book have the same point of view, that is, if everyone else is extraordinary, it doesn't matter if the protagonist is an ordinary person. It is so difficult to be a wizard. If you are not the protagonist, you will never be able to enter the wizard stage. And after spending such a high price, if you still have ordinary extraordinary strength after entering, it will be very meaningless. In fact, the author wants to control the rhythm and can use apprentice wizards to separate stages. It would be very unpleasant for an ordinary person to show off his strength by relying on equipment with huge side effects. Now that monthly tickets are so low, many people may have lost their patience. But now if the author suddenly speeds up and enters the wizard stage, it will feel very abrupt and like an assembly line. This requires a good grasp of the rhythm. I hope that after the author adjusts, he can write better and better.

But the character of the little ruffian...? ? Ruffian is not a complimentary word in the first place, so why do you have to emphasize that you are a ruffian? I hope the author avoids lightning.

Both the protagonist and the supporting character have poor IQ and EQ The Secret Cultivator is portrayed as a wealthy lady from a diaosi's imagination. She is stupid but not stupid, but when it is known that the protagonist is extremely awesome in a game that will affect reality, getting along with the protagonist is not even as good as playing in a workers' camp. Business model, emotional intelligence is not high no matter how you look at it, and the protagonist is asked to say that children from wealthy families are not that simple. This level of emotional intelligence is not as good as that of any worker who still wants to work The same thing with the beauty of the goddess, you don't really think it is so fun to play "single dog" memes all the time, right? Oh, the latest chapters of Secret Cultivator also talk about being single. I remember correctly that the author is married. I really don't understand the mentality behind repeated use of this joke. Do you think it will resonate with people? 😅It just makes people think why they insist on emphasizing being single and making it seem like being single will accomplish nothing. With the ability of the protagonist, he actually arranged for a secret cultivator to say that he is still single. The supporting character should not have the brains

When selecting talents, I thought that there would be a bug. I would choose the Profaned Crow first, then activate the ability and select again. Then I could choose one of the three again, and then set a hidden content (repeated selection of the Profaned Crow can make this talent upgrade and evolve, so that I can go back to the last two selections and choose one of the two; or even the first three selections, choose one of the three), then this trick is good 😁😁😁

It is recommended that the author speed up the pace and make the protagonist a wizard or an author as soon as possible. If you want to say that the pace is too fast, that his ignoring system is awesome or something, and then say that the male protagonist has obtained a lot of good things, then in fact, ask yourself, are those things really good things? Except for the clothes you are wearing now, what other functions do you have? Apart from showing off, it is just showing off, and having a nice name is of no use. Moreover, these are all foreign objects. The patience of us readers is limited. You always think that these foreign objects are the protagonist's abilities, and then let us see that this is simply a fart. Apart from the awesome-looking equipment he obtained, the protagonist himself is nothing. He has no ability at all. Apart from those equipment, the protagonist is nothing. Even if you gain a little extraordinary ability in the early stage, we readers may still have the patience to read on. As a result, you rely on equipment to support you in the early stage, and the equipment effect looks very stretched, and the positioning seems to be very awesome. You say you have epic equipment, but it turns out that it is not even as good as other people's green equipment. What's the use? Equipment also has a bunch of negative effects.

The character of the protagonist is so weird, what the hell.

I feel that the protagonist is a bit unnatural, like an ancient novel from decades ago. The author probably thinks that a child actually finds a gangster very attractive. His outlook is also abnormal. The protagonist is a gangster who has no job, no money, and no house. He is single. It can be said that he is a homeless man and is taken in by the landlord. The landlord is a beautiful young woman with a seven-year-old daughter, and she is very comfortable with her daughter playing with the protagonist. The landlady's daughter thinks the protagonist is attractive. The protagonist gives me the feeling that he is no different from a rapist. He drools and stares at women when he sees them and always pretends to be cool. In reality, that woman has a daughter and dares to take in a guy like the protagonist.

The protagonist's character has no sense of empathy. What does it mean to be naughty and play well with a seven-year-old girl? Then he wrote that without the landlady to take care of the protagonist, he might not be able to survive🤔I don't know because the protagonist is yellow-haired

You have to understand that what attracts readers to your book is the game part, not the pretense of reality. These recent pictures are too watery.

It's too mentally retarded. Should we forcibly kill it from the script? In order to highlight the skills, it is unclear and speechless.

At the beginning of the scene to the Fire Stealing Village, it is emphasized that the protagonist is in heat 24 hours a day. This is completely unnecessary and does not make the article more brilliant. Those who do not like this will be immediately poisoned. It is completely meaningless and of course it is just a personal opinion, but the author and the readers are mutually screened. If you, the author, position yourself as a novice, then it will not matter.

I also deleted the comment. I saw this after spending more than 8 yuan. It's too poisonous. I finally became a wizard, but my strength has not improved. I'm still disgusted. Chapter 140 is like this. I'm really speechless.

After seeing the plot before it was put on the shelves, the drug test is over Highlights: The text flow plot is well written, and this part of the plot can be increased appropriately Poison points: 1. The protagonist is a little ruffian, his behavior is a bit brainless, and his growth depends entirely on cheating 2. The realistic plot is sparse, and the plot of showing saints in front of people is blunt 3. The beauty plot is too awkward. It's not that readers nowadays don't read articles with female protagonists, but many authors write plots about female protagonists that highlight a greasy one. His food is my poison. Reasonable discussion is welcome. If you don't like it, don't spray it.

If you don't want to see future development, this novel should be abandoned. Delete the relevant settings and it will be a proper white text, still from a few years ago. Is there any master who can copy this thing and write a new book?

The plot is very interesting, but the biggest drawback is the character of the protagonist. I know that the author wanted to write a sinister protagonist who was always trying to deceive others, but the degree of sinisterness was not well grasped. The actual character was a bit... Well, wretched? Also, the part where the protagonist tricked Dark Star and almost killed him is actually very reasonable, because the protagonist holds and uses the Skull of Envy, and the jealous personality has grown, but the author did not write this out. It turns out that the protagonist is single, so he can't stand hearing about other people having a harem. Even if someone asks him for help, it sounds like he is about to die, and he still wants to play tricks on him... It's a bit jarring.

The protagonist, whose brain is not very bright, is not even as good as an ordinary person without cheats.

I really hate the secret cultivator. I feel like she will ruin this book. Don't be the heroine.

You can set it yourself. It's such a big world and it won't move around if you're not around. It's even more outrageous than brushing materials and props

I regret it, I support single heroine and no heroine, harem and so on! I am afraid when I see some signs of harem Others, does the author want the protagonist to establish an organization by himself? After all, this is a very good point, and it is also a point of sustainable development, but if it is not written well, it will become a poisonous point Compared Such as the excessive trembling of the security team, etc., And it can be poisonous if you are not careful By the way, it is mainly because I don't like female secret cultivators (don't worry, I am also a female) The author can write what he wants, I just want to recommend less descriptions with prominent female characteristics ( ❝̆ ·̫̮ ❝̆ )✧

The weird stuff is okay, but the writing is a mess, and the protagonist has some brain problems. Wearing the God's Clothes has huge side effects, but in reality this person wears it just to join a group and expose all his information. When you wear it, you have the authority to hide it, but when you take it off, your true identity is revealed. Then you can still take it off. If you don't take it off, there will always be side effects of erasing surrounding things. This group of people must add it.       ，，，，， If you hadn't failed, you would have been tricked to death.

Seeing that Chapter 44 is gone, the game part is still good, but the reality is too drawn. I save this one and that one. The two themes of lust and mystery are not suitable to be mixed together.

I just saw a novel with the exact same setting in the daily guide, and it received more than 1,400 votes... Goldfinger is the same as this one, going back in time... This book is really a pity, too many people left after trying it for the first time.

We all know this is true, why not load the file again when choosing bloodline to avoid the bug?

Wow wow wow, Daily Guide recommended a complete book to me. This is the first time I have ever seen it! Is this an advertising fee? I haven't read the book or read the comments, but I guess it must be a hit-and-miss book 😁

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To be honest, this novel is quite novel. The quality is okay, but the results are not good. Later, it collapsed and turned into a completely useless book. Some places are too big, and some of the effects of some items cannot be edited. Oh, what a pity.