Dragon Game

The description of the dragon is also low. The characters of the players don't look like they have jobs, but more like primary and secondary school students. The dwarves are just like a bunch of gangsters 😅

After reading the introduction, there are angels and demons whose magic cannot transform? The magic was eaten?

Ham Sausage

Seeing this is like a patient with cerebral thrombosis, unable to tell the difference between the game and reality

I haven't started watching it yet, but will the main character change later? If you change into a human, will you always become a human or is it just temporary? Looking at novels where the protagonist is a non-human being, most of them change into human beings later on. If it is just for the plot, it doesn't matter if you temporarily change people, but if you keep changing, it will be a little bit like that. (This novel should be regarded as a strange beast style. Although it is not labeled as a strange beast style, judging from the title and introduction, it should be regarded as a strange beast style... Right?)

What I wrote at the beginning was quite good, but I started to feel a bit uneasy at the end The two people named Mi are not benevolent and immoral. They only want to trick players. Of course, when we play games normally, it is indeed a kind of thinking Then you are writing a novel, increase revenue and reduce expenditure, and cannot be specialized. You want to expand the overall interests of the dragon and make it more enjoyable The uncomfortable thing is that the part where humans and dwarves go to chop off the dragon's teeth and cut off the dragon's horns feels a bit watery, but the side highlights the dragon's defense The greed of other species, It is also very realistic and reasonable, but it just makes me feel frustrated It also makes me realize that I have always underestimated the player's strength. After all, the dragon's performance in the Novice Village is really awkward, so that paragraph is definitely necessary to write, but it just feels a bit watery One more point, where are you going to position this Mi Ren? It's not that the good guys, bad guys, villains are decent, but you're not very clear about his positioning. From what I've seen so far, a lot of the content is related to him, but I just can't understand its positioning You're not a human being! Don't do human affairs! Is it used to disgust people, or is it used to make the audience feel better? Then there is the economic system. The dragon gold is pulled out from the protagonist, and the protagonist's strength is currently at least first-class in that world. How can I say this? I use my scales as currency. This currency is very valuable in the outside world. I don't know its value. I gave it to the players, and the players don't know its value. Although the players think it is very valuable, they still use it if they want. The exchange in the player mall is completely a blank check. It is not yet certain whether the scales are immortal gold, but the only way to produce them is to pull out the protagonist's scales The scales are regenerable and are immortal gold when placed in the outside world, and then exchanged for the protagonist's blank check mall, ten scales are one water of life How do you say it? The entire economic system looked at me stupid, even if the scales were not immortal gold, I felt a little unhappy Everyone underestimated the value of this currency, or everyone was taking advantage of the protagonist and the players. The moment the skeleton bridge guard collected the gold, I felt unhappy Overall, there is nothing wrong with this book Many details are very realistic, the characters' IQs are online, and basically there is no poison. For example, it is no problem that the power of the magic cannon can kill a dragon, it is no problem to let the Chimera negotiate forward, it is no problem to spray flames to create conflicts, and the greed of the dwarves is no problem The only drawback is that it is not clear whether it is exciting or not. Many times it is frustrating to watch, not exciting! It was a mess, and I didn't know what I was talking about, so I just talked nonsense Finally, I wish this book would get better and better. If it doesn't feel good, I won't be able to hold it anymore, so I'll take care of it for a while.

Does the author play Dragon Ranch? Or Yulong Island. There are many varieties of dragons here that can give you a lot of inspiration.

Keep track of the progress. If you can't control it, it's easy to be inconsistent.

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Happy New Year, when will I update?

GKD needs more work. After writing it for so long, it's still a dwarf GKD.

When will it be updated? I'm so eager to wait.

Author, it's already 2025, do you still remember this book?