The Immortal King Has Retired

It is not about the daily life with the wife and children, but it is written around the female apprentice, and the apprentice inexplicably knows the protagonist's reclusive location, and inexplicably gets entangled with the protagonist (a whole princess disease). The same goes for the protagonist. When he was being pestered by a strange woman, his wife came back. Instead of explaining the situation, he lied to his wife that she was a new female employee 🤔

I haven't read it yet. Is it the version where the hidden aggrieved Immortal King and the gangsters fight back and forth?

Boy, why do I die miserably every time I read your new book (●—●) I occasionally look back at your Sharingan. Other books are not that interesting. The state you were in when you wrote that book was so interesting. Your aura seems to have decreased now.

The author is amazing. The male protagonist retires for love and can still have affairs everywhere. If you want to have a harem, don't write this kind of character

The opening chapter says that except for the protagonist, they are all supporting characters. Out of the fifty chapters, chapter thirty starts with the disciple, chapter ten is a passerby, and chapter ten is Bai Yu. May I ask the author, who is your protagonist? Dude, I came here to watch the retirement routine of the Invincible Immortal King, not the story of the master and apprentice of the funny Immortal King and the sinister Immortal King. Do you understand?

Speaking of which, are you the female protagonist in The Female Apprentice? You didn't see what the male protagonist was doing with his wife, but only saw the story of the male protagonist and his apprentice. This is a bit of a big problem, right?🤔

Isn't Douluo no longer updating? ? ?

Alas, it's this kind of pretentious slap in the face again╯╰A fairy king who dares to spit on his body. It's really frustrating to watch. He beats the younger one to the older one, and the older one to the older one. This kind of pretense and slap in the face plot is really boring. In short, I want to sleep while watching it. Goodbye!

If you come across a book you like, give it one 🌹

Do you still read and figure out the books you write now? Your standard has not dropped just a little bit. If you don't have the passion for writing, just stop persisting.

The writing is too poor, and the plot also looks bad. But I don't know if it's because of this writing problem that the author didn't write what you wanted to write, but it really doesn't work. Oh, forget it, author, please do your best.

You should go to the romance section, you went to the wrong title

Plus this female apprentice is superfluous

One thing to note, this name reminds me of the book The Daily Life of the Immortal King. If the author hadn't recommended it to his own old book, I feel like I wouldn't have read it because of this title.

I haven't read it yet, but is it the version where the Immortal King's angry punch can knock the leaves off a ten-year-old locust tree?

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Does any fellow Taoist know how to block a certain type of novel? Why is it that all the recent recommendations to me are this kind of dog food, harem, and stallion type? I can't grasp it once I'm single!

Currently, the even number is male and the odd number (1359) is female, so Bai Yu 7 is actually a girl

This is really quite sensible

The main problem is that the main object of the writing is not clear, that is, it does not mean the same as the name. The supporting characters must be written appropriately, otherwise the book will still be half-dead. I hope the author can see...