Huashan Academy

You can delete the first four pictures! Dissuade most people

I love reading novels with this concept. The previous Huashan novels were always about killing people. Huashan sect originally had Taoist traditions, but it was not monastic at all, and was no different from ordinary martial arts gangs. I remember reading a novel similar to Huashan Changsheng before. It was later renamed Taihuajiao, which is very good. It is not like many novels that always call this real person or that Taoist priest, but they have not read any Taoist classics, they have no morals, they are always murderous, and they don't have the demeanor of a Taoist master.

It's really not good to write about the relationship with Lin Qingshao. She is about to become the heroine for no reason. I haven't seen the protagonist being attracted to her before. She is also very vague about the protagonist. There is too little description of the relationship between the two. Anyway, it feels very strange. The attitude between the two is too casual, but they don't seem to be that close, dry. Yes, forced flirting is the case. From the beginning of the game, Lin Qingshao was changed to the Qing generation, and the nephew was changed to the junior sister. What are you doing now? Now that I see the word Lin Qingshao, I want to skip it... Forget it, 95% of the emotional scenes written by Qidian have not been watched anyway, so just ignore it.

Nonsense, Feng Qingyang is over 80 years old when he appears with a smile! Yue Buqun is more than thirty years older.

Well, after reading it, the progress is a bit slow and there are too many narratives. Too bland and not attractive enough.

I don't recognize it without the Huashan Red Cross duo.

Dude, your punctuation marks make me uncomfortable. You always use two periods instead of ellipses. The same goes for paragraphs. One sentence only lasts one paragraph, and you have to leave half in front and half in the back.

Say it three times, not cut the book, cut the book, cut the book. I just stopped updating. As a novice, this is my first book. There is something wrong with my brain when I cut books. Xiaozuo has been really busy with work recently. . I'm not asking for sympathy, I'm just explaining this to everyone. 🙏

I just read the first chapter, and I think there's something wrong with your sentence segmentation and paragraphing. Don't break what one person says into several paragraphs. It's hard to read.

The number of words is too small, but the writing is quite interesting and slow-burning. Come on.

To be honest, I have put in too much effort to write this book. Now due to various reasons, I can no longer write it. I can only say sorry to all my book friends: I am a eunuch.

I read it in one go. It is a good book about time travel and martial arts. The author updated it quickly.

When the Dharma ends, the Dharma ends. Don't suddenly revive the spiritual energy. It looks like you can't practice without spiritual energy. How boring. Why can't you practice solar energy and electric energy to achieve immortality?

But the plot is very good. It's very comfortable to watch. Liang Cao

Set a chapter and make a statement, and the book will be settled.

Work is important, and so is the body. There is no time code to understand it. I hope the author can straighten out his work and life as soon as possible, and then continue to write well.

Lin Qingshao is not his junior nephew, why is he turned into a junior sister in such a way, it makes him laugh when he sees this!

In the previous chapters, some of the characters' speech segments were even missing the quotation marks. It's a matter of detail.

It's very well written. Please write slowly and don't panic.

You seem to be cutting... So that we all have to withdraw.

I feel that the pace of dialogue and description is a bit fast, the sentences are concise enough, and I feel that the level of Fengdu could be more mellow.

Huashan's cute little junior sister

The amount of updates is a bit embarrassing to put on the shelves. Anyway, it's fascinating to watch and listen to.

The writing is good, I look forward to the exciting story behind it! ! ! !