The Swordsman Begins in The Outcast

Most of the protagonists in Qidian's novels lack strong character. No matter how awesome the protagonist's setting is, as soon as he opens his mouth, he will be stunned.

Why do so many colleagues want to save Chen Duo? Everyone in the world is suffering. Everyone has their own way of living, life or death, so why bother.

Chen Duo is very pitiful, but there is no need for it. If one person is alone, the same person will have trouble with Chen Duo, right? She felt sorry for the protagonist of every fan novel, so she had to touch it, right? What was the difference between this and Huang Rong a few years ago?

Does Zhutianliu write about the heroine? I hope the author can write it well. Originally, the protagonist is a wandering prodigal in a sense, and if he has to bring someone with him, it will be difficult to write it well. It will either become a burden or double the protagonist. In reality, as people who have no fixed abode, our general concept is that it is best not to get married, so as not to delay the other half. Even if we get married, it will not last long.

A strong person should look like a strong person You can already compete with those who are like tigers, and you are still participating in some elementary school competition. The one who participated was inexplicable The one who played the first game was there, but after the game, the one who was inexplicable bowed his hands and said some nonsense. Look at what you wrote like this, and the follow-up below is poor. In every game, Pigfoot is alone, doing some inexplicable things. In other words, if someone has nothing to do with you, but you still get involved in it for no reason, is this your way of writing? You can even change it and write that you have had contact with me, the relationship is not bad, or you have been entrusted by others. Instead of this kind of blunt confrontation, it is simply speechless Where is the pig's trotters on the stage, bowing and handing over, talking nonsense for a long time, and you didn't write a follow-up? For example, the shock of others, the speculations of everyone on the scene, and psychological activities, such as: Lu Jin said hey: Lao Zhang, take a look, you still have enough face. I have heard about this kid. Even Xiao Na can't hold him down. To praise you like this, I thought Zhang Chulan was hanging! Hearing this, the old Heavenly Master on the side rolled his eyes and said calmly: Xiao Lu, this is not because of my pride. I see that young people nowadays rarely respect the old and love the young. If this kid retires for another twenty years, I guess he will have to squat in the delivery room and accept a disciple. Such as this Writing should create connections, rather than writing rigidly. I think a lot of what you write is very blunt. It is speechless to transfer pressure from the company and deliberately transfer responsibility to pig's feet. This kind of alien abduction and trafficking of children has caused the destruction of countless families. It is the responsibility of everyone. But the pig's feet are left here without even mentioning them? Why do you think others are fools? There should be a linkage between characters, instead of just looking for someone out of nowhere and what to write about? A strong person should behave like a strong person Only the weak can grovel This has nothing to do with politeness. If a really strong person still grovels, this is a psychological problem and it is purely artificial. You said you were asking for advice, but you gave up the question mark. This is a matter of putting experts first and specializing in the art. Then you participated in the competition inexplicably, bowed inexplicably, and talked a lot of nonsense. Why is that? The most important thing is, after you finish speaking, will you step down? Then it changes to something else, and there's no follow-up scene or anything? What do you mean by this kind of writing? Having said so much, I still hope to write better and better!

So the protagonist will also be picked up by aliens in unparalleled form?

The protagonist's name looks like the name of a supporting cast

Flying with a sword is when the flying sword turns into sword light and takes people flying away. Both the man and the sword turned into sword light, escaping extremely fast. Stepping on the flying sword is really unsightly and unpleasant😐

The water is real water. It's a simple battle. The four crazy ones can be easily solved according to the settings. I wrote 5 chapters and it's not over yet 🙂

Author, are you unable to get over Chen Duo?