Wizard: I Can Predict Danger

Break the belly to get the ring, destroy the brain. . . Is there a problem with the protagonist's IQ or is there a problem with the reader's IQ? I really can't stand it

The author wanted to write about the protagonist's madness, but the writing style was poor and the protagonist's image was a bit dull.

I couldn't stand it after reading one. I knew there was a problem but didn't solve it, just waiting for trouble. Even though he knew he was being framed, he still waited for the guards to come to his door.

It is acceptable not to explain some unimportant things clearly, but important things still need to be explained. The atmosphere can be created quite well. What's the reason for those weird behaviors? It's painful to watch, and it hurts to see it all from God's perspective. Moreover, judging from the author's intention, he is not very prepared to tell the readers as soon as possible. . . There are too many questions and it's boring to watch.

I can't see how the protagonist is evil at all. Isn't everything he's doing now just a passive counterattack by someone else's evil protagonist? It's okay to describe other people as stupid to make them feel better.

The protagonist's IQ is basically equal to 0! The mentally retarded are not worthy of time travel

It's pretty good. It feels very good when you look at it. Come on

The writing style is a bit young and the subject matter is not new. Looking at the name, I thought it was a traditional wizard-style book, but it turned out to be something extraordinary.

After reading more than twenty chapters, please comment. There is a serious sense of separation, and the plot is well controlled, but there is a lack of detailed foreshadowing, especially for the protagonist. Many of the actions the protagonist does are very incomprehensible, such as cutting open his own stomach, beating his brain with nails, and the detective and teacher who met the protagonist. It can be understood that the protagonist's behavior is contaminated, or that the protagonist's personality is ferocious and extreme. Both of these can be explained in the text, but there is no explanation. The interaction between the detective and the protagonist has no relevant logic, or there is very little logic, especially the setting and background are not explained clearly during the interaction between the two. How does the detective know that there is something wrong with the protagonist? There is a lack of smooth foreshadowing in the extraordinary interaction between the detective and the protagonist. What is the purpose of the detective? He is obviously an extraordinary person, but he is busy with the murder of a mortal, and for this reason he gives precious extraordinary knowledge to help the protagonist. The setting of the extraordinary is obviously hidden behind the normal world, but the development of the extraordinary is very random. The protagonist can understand the extraordinary knowledge by just finding someone, and it even makes people feel that there is no barrier between the extraordinary and the normal world. In addition, the level of extraordinary is also very vague and puzzling. In more than 20 chapters, the protagonist explains that he is a first-level extraordinary, equivalent to a formal wizard, but his own abilities are only a certain physical fitness and a tentacle ability on the chest, and he still uses a pistol, giving people a feeling that he is too weak to understand.

It's so well written, don't write it again

If you don't have talent, go do something else. Writing books will cost you money.

I feel like this book is very cold-blooded, I will definitely read it. Seems like it heals too much, now change it

The atmosphere description is okay, but what the hell is the plot shaping?

The first chapter is indeed a bit disgusting and cruel. You might as well put that thing in your shoe, and you should have reacted to it in the first scene of the illusion. When you time travel, you should officially show up in the situation.

When I read it, I felt that the protagonist's sanity has always been low.