All Heavens: It Starts with the Zhu Family Devouring Soul Beasts

I don't know what the 200,000-year-old soul power is afraid of. He can actually shoot a pistol with a tank, but Tang San doesn't give him any advice? It's ridiculous to care about this. A super Douluo with 200,000 years of soul power equals level 95 or above. This strength can already crush anyone except Bibi Dong Qiandaoliu. Okay, are you still afraid of the disabled Tang Hao who is missing two soul bones, arms and legs? Can you think about it before writing?

The subject matter is good, but some of the plots are a bit incomprehensible. For example, many people complained that if you don't devour the butler, you will kill him, and it is still pretentious. There are also some typos or direct typos along the way, but overall it is still good, but it is a bit watery.

If you don't eat people, energy is really wasted. A skill that devours soul power will reduce the bonus by half if it does not devour flesh and blood. But still not too wasteful. It's not like it's eating people, it's just eating energy

To summarize the contents of the first thirty chapters: the protagonist falls into danger, then wants to become stronger, then commits suicide, and then falls into the next danger, forming a perfect closed loop. The plot just goes on in a repetitive cycle. It is a boring plot and there are many bugs. Is there really a person named Fengjian Sect in the next four sects? I only know diamond mammoths and white armored earth dragons

He couldn't tell his own position and talked about morality. Zhu Zhuyun knew that the world is dominated by the jungle. Everyone knows that making money under the law is not shameful no matter how dirty it is. You pig's feet are kidnapped by morality in order to survive. They're not the same species, so what's the use of them? Anyway, I saw that the Soul King bought a chapter to complain about when he was not eating┐('~`;)┌You are not suitable for this type of writing. . . .

If you don't devour people, if you persuade them to retreat, they will come to kill you. If you lose them, you would rather devour small fishes. If you are swallowed by the system, you don't just eat it directly. You just need to make a setting similar to the star-absorbing method.

It doesn't matter whether you eat or not. If you don't want to eat, then you will eat. If you want to eat, just eat. But don't write in such a pretentious way. If you make it so pretentious, you will immediately become awesome.

Let me talk about my feelings after reading it First of all, Tam is a greedy original demon. The author can completely use this setting to promote the development of the plot. People's greed is endless. Let them exchange their lifespan or body parts for power. In the end, the male protagonist will swallow all the scum left. I think it is at least more readable than a single soul-devouring beast that increases its power. Secondly, I think the character of the male protagonist is really awkward. As the messenger of the devil, the male protagonist has to have the consciousness of being a devil, and he has to grind and moan to swallow anyone. As we all know, the devil has no bottom line. Those kinds of holy scriptures are all over the streets. To put it bluntly, everyone grew up under the red flag, and their outlook on life will not be distorted just because of a novel. Isn't it just fun to read novels? In short, since the idea of ​​​​the devil is used, it must be consistent with it, otherwise it will make people feel weird. Finally, the strength has grown too fast, and now it has reached the ceiling of Douluo's combat power. There is not much to write about. If there are no novel settings in the back, it will make people feel boring. This is also the shortcoming of many cool and invincible novels. The growth in the front is too fast, and the plot in the back is single and not exciting. I hope it will not collapse later. In general, this subject matter is actually very excavating, but the author's writing is a bit unsatisfactory. I hope the author can consider some of my suggestions.

Don't eat people? The six paths of reincarnation and all things rotate, there is essentially no difference between humans and animals, and the wisdom of ten thousand year soul beasts is no different from humans Douluo's people are even darker. Soul masters don't like it and kill civilians without even paying for it. Soul kings want to kill you to take bones. If you don't eat him, I advise you not to eat soul beasts either. …………Ten chapters ago………… Seeing Chapter 80, poison, water, disgusting and cliché, do you risk your life? Restart after writing collapse? If you know you're being targeted, why don't you transfer it to the sea? There's no one in the sea to write the original work, so you can write freely. You have to put poison. After reading the introduction, I thought it was about hammering Tang San. I thought he was a good brother. After doing it for a long time, he just bought insurance. Hahaha Shennong is dead. If something happens, he will burn the paper.

Don't kill Xiao Wu and keep it for Tang San? The protagonist is very skilled, be careful if you are saved by other soul beasts, you will get nothing, and you will be killed again.

When I was drunk, I thought it was good food and grass. After all, it was Tamu, the God of Food, who could slowly develop. However, it turned out that he had various poisonous points and turned into a human and ran away from above? Since the sluice gate is held down by stones, why not turn into a human under the water and lift it up? Or maybe he becomes Tahm and runs away directly, or that Tam, who is so smart, can dig holes for all kinds of fish, can't he even dig a hole? The poison took hold.

Stop worrying about Qian Renxue, it would be more interesting if you ate Xiao Wu😪

Let me tell you one thing: This book is generally well written, although not eating people is a bit inconsistent with my concept. However, the author also feels that he has no opinion of his own, and later actually writes that cannibalism is only about plundering attributes, etc., Not cannibalism. But it doesn't matter. In the whole book, I couldn't stand it until chapter 76, because as soon as the protagonist became 100,000 years old, two powerful enemies were arranged to beat him back to 0. For us readers, what if the first 76 chapters are all prefaces to this book? If you like the writing style and subject matter of this book, you can start reading directly from Chapter 76. Personally, I don't think it will have any impact on reading. The protagonist's interpersonal relationship has basically not developed, and the previous part is just devouring and upgrading. And then, you know, start over! ! ! I was convinced. It was the first time I met such a talented writer, and I didn't even call him an author. There is a small problem with the setting of the protagonist swallowing the upgrade, and the writing is biased toward an independent environment. I mean the upgrade is only on one line. Without taking into account changes in the surrounding environment and the impact of the social environment. That's it, I hope you, the readers, and I will find some good books. We are destined to meet!

Brothers, does anyone understand what these two sentences mean? I was really confused when I saw it, and 22 people liked it

I said a few dozen chapters ago that this book had the potential to become a small hit, but now I retract the preface. 🙂

I don't know why, I can't sum it up, but this novel made me personally hate the character Zhu Zhuqing.

I usually don't comment casually But you first wrote about the skill of sacrificing life, and then started to develop it again. I read the previous 70 chapters🈶What does it mean It's better to just write an invincible article If you don't know how to write, just don't write it (; 1_1)

When you go to Douluo Continent, you don't eat rice bowls. Everyone will despise you😁😁😁

The plot of saving Qian Renxue is really inexplicable. I can't stand it anymore. Alas, I have lost another book I could read.

You almost die together with a five-ring soul king, but you can't die. It should be said that the protagonist is worthy of being the protagonist, and he is also pretentious. Why don't you eat people? If you don't want to write about cannibalism, you can just brush it off. Why bother to write more?

Damn, you read the preface to Chapter 70 with me, right? 😅

Looking at this rhythm, it seems like you are going to fuck a rabbit? Speechless

I don't know why I added Rabbit to the heroine routine as soon as I wrote it🤮🤮🤮

Not bad (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

When I saw Chapter 76, I couldn't help it. It was too damn poisonous. It was already a hundred thousand-year-old soul beast, but suddenly I used a skill and started all over again. I didn't write anything at the beginning, just the ambiguity between Qian Renxue, and everything else was about how to devour the soul beast, bonuses and so on. Then I want to ask you, what is the meaning of the previous 76 chapters? Pure hydrology? If you want to read the reviews first before reading the book, I recommend you start reading directly from Chapter 76, because it's not in the way at all. I really can't bear it anymore, so I came here to complain, otherwise I wouldn't have spoken much.

I watched it, but I don't think I watched it again.

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