Pokemon Farmer

Vine monsters The vines on their bodies can regenerate, so the cut vines can be used to make Pokémon food Sleeping mushrooms The mushrooms on their bodies can also be used to make food Meili sheep, braided poplar Their hair is useful (it was mentioned in the anime, but I forgot the function) Three bees and cute flies They can pollinate tree fruits and other economic crops, and can also make honey Sun coral Their horns will fall off periodically and can be used as ornaments Forest Turtles and Tropical Dragons The fruits on their bodies are edible and can be used to make Pokémon food Pylas The mushrooms on its body have medicinal value Lily Root Doll The three leaves on its head also have medicinal value Slowpoke Their tails will automatically fall off after a certain period of time (Slowpoke tails can be used for cooking, as seen in the anime) Big milk cans Their milk has extremely high nutritional value Sakura Treasure The fruits on their heads also have nutritional value, but the fruits on their heads are a manifestation of their evolution. When they are mature, they are not far from evolution. The energy used for evolution is stored in the fruits, so they are highly nutritious (this is how it used to be in the illustrated book) Aroma essence, sweet dance, and flame queen lizard will produce fragrance and can be used to make perfume Pearl oysters can produce pearls Small diamonds It will drop diamonds, but the quality is not very good (if you raise a group, there may be a Dianxi, this depends on gambling to see your face) Duoduobing, Frosty Milk Fairy The cream on their bodies can be used to make ice cream, and taking the cream will not harm the Pokémon

If it is a farm theme, it is best for the protagonist to be a training trainer, not a simple trainer or breeder. When you have nothing to do, you can train your own main Pokémon. The farm must have a tree orchard, a grass type with weather skills, Pokémon that can cultivate the land, three bees of the insect type that can pollinate and make honey, and then build a breeding house to make money to support the main force. After all, there are too many Pokémon in the farm, and there may be all kinds of unnecessary friction.

It's well written, but the paragraphs are too dense.

. This first-person perspective is unacceptable, and first of all, there is no sense of immersion. If you read it in the third person, this type of novel is still good, but the first-person perspective does not feel immersive, and most novels now are in the third person. If you read it in the third person, it is like reading a diary, and in the first person, it is like reading a running account. The difference is immediately apparent.

It's a good subject matter, but it's a pity it's in the first person

Author, your paragraphs are too dense, and the first person is not used to it!

There are only two issues in this book, first person and paragraphing. I really wanted to read this book.

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The first person is acceptable, and the writing style is acceptable, but the problem of paragraphing is intolerable 😆😆😆

It doesn't look like a novel, like a diary

Your subject matter is really to my liking. The first person is also acceptable, but let's divide it into sections.