The Wronged Queen and Her Sixth Assistant

My rating for this book is 6/10, three stars/five stars Advantages: The writing is very good, the characters are beautifully created, the characters are three-dimensional, and the use of various descriptive techniques is very good. It can be said that there are few entertainment starting points with better writing than this book. Disadvantages: The plot development is immature, and many logical flaws and unreasonable story developments make people feel uncomfortable. The plot is too monotonous, has no foreshadowing, and makes no sense to engage the readers. It is strange. I feel that such a writing style should not make these mistakes. The entire plot has lost its vitality and color because of these. There is also a lack of balance between excitement and tears. These points still need to be weighed. What makes me stand out: There are a lot of private tasks, such as song analysis and TV drama plots. Not many people can understand the song analysis, and in my opinion, the explanations are unclear. As a music major, some small mistakes are fatal to me. Summary: This book does not feel as coherent as other well-written romance entertainments. The main plot and branch plots are not well intertwined. It is recommended to return to the main plot of falling in love with the heroine, and reduce the text of the side plots (songs, TV series, etc.) And the private life in them. There is still room for redemption, and there is still potential to be explored.

It's quite interesting to read so far, but this one costs 1.2 Million and the other costs 55 million, so the future is worrying.

I saw Chapter 142, how can I put it, the writing is quite interesting, but I hope the author will let the male protagonist give the female protagonist an answer sooner, even a hint, or the system will be upgraded after the two of them are together, not to collect resentment points, but to collect emotional points or something. The current protagonist feels too utilitarian to me. He ignores the heroine's feelings in order to collect resentment points. It's not that I don't understand. Some things are a bit too much, because sincerity and true feelings should not be played off like this. No matter what you do, you should not make the person who is sincere to you sad. And looking at it now, I feel that the author is a little restricted by the title and the system. Sometimes the atmosphere is set up, and the male protagonist has to pretend not to understand, or do things to ruin the atmosphere, because the female protagonist cannot collect resentment points when she is in a good mood. Again, don't let the people who are sincere to you get hurt. The above is just my personal opinion.

At least after reading it, my face is smiling

The first three chapters are almost the same as the other book, and the plot is also the same, with a nutritionist as an assistant.

How can I put it this way? I have seen three or four books with this theme, and they don't have many words. I don't know who copied whom.

How come he looks so much like his fake girlfriend is a big star?

Let's put it this way, I can still read this book after disabling the system.

I saw at least five copies of the wrong diva.

Why don't you do the work of an assistant? Is this considered an injustice? After spending money, the assistant will be the boss? That's really an injustice

Happy Valentine's Day? Happiness is cuckolding, right? Do you have the ability to let the heroine know? He has the ability to let the heroine be drugged by others. Author, you have written like this, why not just have two heroines and multiple heroines in the harem? Single heroine will not accept cuckolding

Isn't this a copy of another book? It also brings people into the family group.

Which author has such screen coding?

That's it, the diaphragm has arrived. I wish the author good fortune!

Is it free for just two days after ordering? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Isn't it the same as the other one?

(/ω＼)Shy

You can watch it without using your brain, but you can't watch it with your brain.

I've seen this plot before. The starting point is tomatoes. The one is a nutritionist and this one is also an assistant.

Well, if you have any opinions, you can raise them, such as why the tempo is too slow, what songs do you want the male protagonist to sing in... You can do that. But if you think of some things that are not there, don't mention them. For example, my writing is terrible. Don't mention it because I am too lazy to reply to you.

Author, you have the ability to write this kind of plot. You have the ability to let the heroine know! It depends on whether you dare to let the heroine know. It depends on whether the heroine can accept it.

Is there a bug in this? They are already engaged and the woman still doesn't know about the company? Is it necessary to hide it?

So what happened to the protagonist? It won't be a double heroine, right? That woman won't get pregnant again, right?

One by one, I don't want to read anymore.

To be honest, it's really good-looking and can definitely be entered into Sanjiang. I hope the author will work hard to code the words.

Chapter 5, in the driving scene, it seems that the male protagonist is not a new recruit. How did he drive before? Now he says he doesn't have a driver's license. I don't understand.

Who is disgusting? This ending, he was drugged

🙂 Faster, faster and more

This does not allow Ye Mengjie to sing "Dark Forest" or something 😚

It is recommended to skip Chapter 64. I don't know about others. I was poisoned.