This Female Star Seems to Have Been Spoiled by Me

The average person is really mentally retarded. A 23-year-old adopts an 18-year-old, and some people still believe it. He guides people to poison every day. Don't lie to me.

The writing so far is still at an average level, but I would like to make some suggestions. The biggest shortcomings of this book are two. The first is the pace. It is a constant high-intensity nonsense battle with each other. This is when I have already read hundreds of thousands of words and I am very tired. I have skipped large paragraphs. You must be careful. It will be ugly to continue to subscribe like this after it is released. The second is the lines. The whole story is undecided, rubbish words such as "Big Courage" and "Qu Daddy". The male and female protagonists also use the same words, which has a very negative effect on the character creation. It seems that they are just two semi-literate fans shouting "Mai Ci" chatting. If you tell me that they are a quasi-diva and a musical genius, I don't believe it. Then compared with the legendary lyrics of the year in a hurry, the credibility of the character is almost zero, and the sense of fragmentation is too serious. If it is written like this, readers will not be able to fall in love with the character and will abandon the book. I hope the author realizes this and makes some changes. At least the character should say and do things that are consistent with his identity.

They kept scolding each other, and I got tired of watching it too much.

There is no logic in this book, and the author writes it very casually. The joy of enemies is a highlight.

Originally the biggest poisonous point was that the protagonist did not have that level of strength, but he copied a song of that level. Now that the patch has been applied, I still want to complain. Is the setting that the original owner graduated from the music school just a decoration?

It might have been interesting at first, but now it's annoying if you argue again and again. . . Still like sweet love

I just want to know the author's last book, where he had the second female lead drugging the male protagonist towards the end of the book and forcibly getting pregnant. In this book, he plans to have the second male lead drugging the female protagonist, or if he plans to continue to have the second female lead drugging the male protagonist. Everyone is welcome to read it.

If you write about a female protagonist on a male channel, or a male protagonist licking a dog, who will read it?

Let's just ask, is the protagonist not a time traveler? The heroine and the original owner are childhood sweethearts. Why do you, a time traveler, have a grudge against the heroine?

Well, everyone, as follows, you can keep reading, but can you catch up on reading on Monday and Tuesday?

To be honest, I couldn't stand it after reading seven or eight chapters. Because in each picture there are two male and female protagonists who are constantly quarreling and bickering. The author enjoys the feeling of being a happy enemy, but to be honest, it is a failure. It feels like two people are quarreling just for the sake of quarreling. Since they don't like each other, shouldn't they just talk less? This is how normal people should react. I feel like two people can quarrel over everything, from a piece of meat they ate to a big quarrel when they said a word. I don't feel any feeling of being a happy enemy, I just feel like two perverts and retarded people.

What kind of IQ is this silly book written by? Don't disgust us.

This is the rhythm of scolding from beginning to end.

In five days, even if he studied a single piece of music with high intensity and concentration, he still had to be a genius with so many instruments. In addition, when a person is visible to people during the day, he has been playing games or doing other things that have nothing to do with music. He has not studied, and has no half-finished products. When he needs it, he will hit a masterpiece or even a golden song. Does everyone take it for granted?

Why is every drug introduction garbage?

It's a little bit poisonous. It's the first time a reporter interviewed Lin Zixuan as his mother? ? ? Or should we explain the protagonist's interpersonal relationships? ? ? Parental status? ? ?

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🤫 A good girl brother quickly evolves into a vixen? This change... Update soon. I only listened to it for 2 days and it's gone... Short

When did the system become standard equipment for time travellers?😰

Is the author being criticized for not writing a book?