Delivery Boy from All over the World

Traveling through Doraemon, you can exchange props with Dorayaki. Then I choose the simplest superpower training box [which can be trained for 5 years to control three superpowers such as teleportation, telekinesis, steel body, clairvoyance, laser eyes, extreme speed, frost power, etc. {Because there are various entities in Doraemon that interfere with the timeline, it would be nice to get a superpower training box. Of course, if you want to be more powerful, you may be afraid that the Time and Space Administration in Doraemon will catch you. After all, Doraemon is a parenting robot, not an adult version of the machine, a military version of the machine, etc. } Super black technology in Doraemon: 1. Superpower training box: {After 5 years of training, you can permanently control 3 superpowers, such as steel body, perspective, teleportation, telekinesis, extreme speed, Cyclops, ice power, lava body and other superpowers} 2. Unlimited copying of Doubling Liquid {can permanently solve the energy crisis, just drop a drop of any substance. It copies itself every 5 minutes. 1 Becomes 2, 2 becomes 4, multiplying by geometric times. The matter you drop could fill 13.7 Billion light-years of the known universe in a few years. } 3. If the phone booth {can make the impossible possible, turning the virtual into the real. } Temporary list:... [I forgot many props, I only know that these few are very powerful.

The subject matter is quite good, but I feel there is something wrong with the thinking. Your main world is the real world. What kind of martial arts is on your profile? All cities. Return to the Bamboo Dragonfly Swordsmanship, Seventy-two Transformations, do you want to be a superman in the real world? If you're not a superman, what's the point of being so awesome in the later stage? It's just so that when you go to deliver food, you can mind your own business and draw a sword to help, or whatever. Your tasks are short-lived. After delivering food, you get paid, and then return to the main world. The plot was very straightforward at the beginning. I read Chapter 30, and I feel more and more like a nanny, meddling in other people's business, having to worry about everything. How can I give more rewards for caring so much?

The author has to write some plots about gangsters in every world. Are you disgusting readers?

What can I say about this book... It's quite true. A little person suddenly gets a golden finger. He doesn't have any big ambitions. He just thinks about how to make money to make his life better! The method is also simple and crude without any technical content. What stands out is its realism and feasibility. The question is, do you have any deep thoughts or metaphors when you write this? Taking advantage of the situation, making steamed buns with human blood, stealing diamonds... The protagonist is so down-to-earth, but this is too much punishment! The title of Chapter 28 is very good, it briefly introduces the plot, and it also attracted comments in advance! Can't spray. In short, the protagonist has a normal IQ, strong purpose, and high efficiency, but the rest is scum.

It's really disgusting, this novel, 1, it's like I've never seen a woman before, it's all girls, 2, I get slapped in the face by gangsters every day, I'm really speechless

How can I put it this way? I feel like this takeaway subject is difficult to write about. If you don't pay attention, you'll jump.

The plot of this novel is too bad. Every time you travel, you will meet a gangster, and then he will slap you in the face. In the real world, if you have nothing to do, you will meet a gangster and beat the gangster. Then the gangster will find someone and beat the gangster. Then the gangster will find someone and beat the gangster. Doesn't the author know that China is a legal society? After so long of cracking down on gangs and evil, does anyone still dare to fight? The author has never heard of it, so he slapped him in the face and spent 300,000?

Doraemon World: Reward Bamboo Dragonfly, five minutes is enough time to fly to the second floor room of Nobita's house to get Doraemon's spare pocket. After returning to the original world, use the time controller in your pocket to freeze the time. Then use a duplicator to copy all the props as a backup. You can return the original if you have the chance. In this way, you get all the props of Doraemon. Doraemon is a child-rearing robot, and he will not be hunted down if found out afterwards. Dragon Ball World: Set the timer to set the time, then go to Wampa Planet to exchange Broly's body with props, and your own body can be saved. Author, you asked the protagonist to get one Bamboo Dragonfly and Cat Immortal that were rewarded by the system, and the ten that were rewarded by the system were only eleven Fairy Beans? Are you writing about beggars?

I've read over a hundred chapters, so I'd better give it up because there's a system reward of 200,000 to give someone else a car. After the end, the male protagonist can fuck her for seven days. I really vomited. I think the author is like the woman he likes in the drama can't get him. What's the point of writing a novel character to lust after? After One Piece, he is still an ordinary person. There is no chance.

After reading Chapter 3, it is not unreasonable for the protagonist to deliver food and get seriously ill.

Why is it said that everything in "A Good Show" is Huang Bo's fantasy? 1. In the end, the deserted island became a tourist attraction. The tour guide said that this was the big boat chartered by Mr. Zhang at that time. But the boat they travel on in the film is a small yellow car. Can a small yellow car go out to sea? How far can it go? Was it the idea of ​​Huang Bo, a mentally ill person who went crazy after the shipwreck? 2. In the mental hospital at the end of the Easter egg, the clothes worn by the patients are exactly the same as the striped clothes worn by the people on the island. The mental patients dance in circles, and the people on the island also like to dance in circles. 3. Therefore, all the people wearing striped clothes on the island were splintered by Huang Bo alone, and those people have died long ago. So Huang Bo was eating instant noodles, and everyone was eating them, and Huang Bo was dancing, and everyone was dancing, and Huang Bo and Zhang Yixing performed an impromptu double act, but Zhang Yixing's lip syncs all matched up, because Zhang Yixing was spawned from Huang Bo himself, and Zhang Yixing was Huang Bo. And in that double act, Huang Bo kept saying that everything was false. 4. Why did everyone die? A huge wave came over and even a heavy ship was split into two. Why was the little yellow car not damaged at all? Because this was the fantasy of the mentally ill Huang Bo, so everyone did not need to die, and his goddess Shanshan did not need to die either. 5. The lottery may be real, and the desert island is also real, but only Huang Bo stayed. 90 Days after the lottery expired, he went crazy, and fish began to rain from the sky. 6. The day after the little yellow car was driven to the desert island, Huang Bo and others came out and opened a dead man covered with a white cloth. The man came back to life and said that he only had an injured foot, so why did he cover him with a white cloth. It implies that the dead are "resurrected" in the spiritual world constructed by Huang Bo. 7. Huang Bo and Zhang Yixing kayaked out to sea to seek help and met a dead polar bear. He won the lottery in September and expired in December. It should be winter, but the island has always been like spring all year round and there are always fish. If he was on a tropical island, why did he meet a polar bear? If it wasn't a tropical island? Why is there no winter? Everything is illogical and can only mean that this is all what the mentally ill Huang Bo thought about. 8. Finally, he led everyone to the other side of the mountain to see the big ship. As a result, he couldn't stop the car and jumped off the cliff. Why didn't anyone follow him? Why did he do difficult diver moves when jumping off the cliff? He looked at the world upside down before the big ship appeared. Did everyone die and he only saw these fantasies when he went crazy and committed suicide? The ship may really come, or the ship may never come. 9. So Shu Qi finally said: The ship can't wait. Everyone is gone. 10. The big ship found on the island was turned over. The world in the ship was upside down. What kind of world is the only one that is upside down? The world of mental patients.​

In fact, the only thing I don't understand is that you don't need a gun when you fight Ouyang Feng! You don't have to use it when you fight those cannon fodders who want the Nine Yin Scriptures. One shot and one is good (; 一_一) The author didn't think of it! Or are you deliberately trying to lower your IQ?

It's only chapter 26 and there are already three waves of gangsters. Author, you really don't want to make money😓

The writing is so bad that I don't even know the meaning of what you wrote in terms of reality. Skipping all the chapters in reality has no impact on the overall plot of the book. Even removing the bad points in reality you wrote will not cause trouble for the readers. And what's even more bizarre is that all the plots in the copy of the Beijing love story Charlotte's Troubles were skipped, and actually had no impact on the plot of the entire book. Then I realized that your book has no main plot! It's just about writing whatever comes to mind, with no purpose and no main line. Even the copy is very rubbish. The rubbish point is that the description of the characters is lackluster, just like a few decorations on the background board, and the addition of the protagonist does not have a big impact on each copy. It has nothing to do with the supporting characters. As for the actual plot, haha, there is nothing to say except that it sucks. So what did you write in this book? Writing about a food delivery person's life can't impress anyone, it makes people watch bad things that have no emotional fluctuations except disgust, and some slap-in-the-face plots that make people feel nothing but think they are good, and some copy worlds that are the same with or without you? Listen to my advice, if it doesn't work, just find a class. Stop writing. Delivering food is also good.

It's very well written. You won't be allowed to write it next time.

Is Qin Yumian your sister or your mother actually letting the protagonist lick like this?

It's amazing. I'm convinced. Go read chapter 69 for yourselves and see how the protagonist tells his parents that he is rich. I really thought it was in the last century.

This novel would have been okay a few years ago, but now, it can only be said to be too rubbish and too poisonous.

Those who say that Ip Man is Bruce Lee's master, and how awesome Ip Man is, but in reality, his name is Ip Jiye, he is a traitor, and he has been a traitor in Foshan for almost ten years. After liberation, because of being a traitor, in order to survive, he abandoned his wife and children and fled to Hong Kong. These can be found. Now there are records in Foshan that the traitor Ye was a traitor from 1939 to 1949. He was just one of Bruce Lee's dozen masters and a traitor. Bruce Lee didn't kill him because he was out of nostalgia for his past.

I don't want to see anything like One Piece, Naruto, or Death. Moreover, there are too many real chapters in the world of heavens, which really dissuades me. It's better to just write about the city

What the hell! They are all boring plots, and the author is suspected of insulting the profession of delivery workers

If you delete the bloody plot, the results will be much better. If you delete it, it won't affect the rhythm of the novel. I don't know why the author always adds those disgusting contents. Let's do it every few chapters. You have to adapt to the times. It's not five or six years ago. No one likes to read this kind of disgusting content.

Did you say before that you don't like women trying their best to make money? Does Qin Yumian love licking so much when she is cooking and celebrating her birthday?

Seeing the mutant world feels a bit broken

The writing is getting more and more retarded. After doing so many things, I discovered that Apocalypse and the surveillance are all fake.

To be honest, when I read the first dozen or so chapters on the shelves, I was tortured. The plot was a bit disgusting. Anyway, I felt more and more like a stallion. I can't say it's dirty, but it's really not clean! The writing is just passable, but it's much better than most anyway, and I like the style of writing.

It's not interesting The protagonist Zhutian Stallion has never seen a woman like that I originally thought that the milk tea girl was the heroine, but now it seems that the male protagonist is not worthy of anyone else

Is this the stallion of the heavens? Have you never seen a woman? See the previous one 😅

No, just get married and leave? ? ?

The creativity is good. The author's idea of ​​shaping the protagonist is good, but the writing style is not enough and the excitement is not enough.