Traveling Through TV Series

There is nothing major in the running account, but there are a lot of minor flaws. The writing style is generally the most important thing, there is no sense of substitution, there is no main line, and there is no excitement. Identified as dead grass.

Add a world where I have a date with a zombie. I want to see Jiang Yi fight zombies.

I just came in after seeing the Lotus Lantern, The Monkey King and Journey to the West, but the results haven't been written yet 😤

I'm a little confused. The plot is not coherent at all. Changing the world is like changing a book. The writing is okay, but the continuity problem is too uncomfortable.

Overall, the novel is quite good. The shortcoming is that it has a beginning and no end. The author does not explain clearly how the protagonist travels through time. There must be a process to travel through the system or the soul. It just goes to the next chapter. It looks like a fan story with no beginning and no end. I also admire the author for writing to this point.

This section is finally over, and there is no sense of immersion at all.

The fight with the Bull Demon King felt so forced.

What are you doing, author? Chapters 63-64 can't be continued~ It's a bit confusing~ It's like a storybook~ There is no ending and the story goes straight to the next

Finally, the plot has reached a big collision.

The first volume is too watery, but the rest is okay

The sequel to Journey to the West... Hit that stick, hit that stick, hit that stick, keep hitting that stick

Write about Qin Shi Mingyue, my favorite martial arts world

It's a bit long-winded, not very exciting, and the main character has always been mediocre.

This book was really boring to me. Did an ordinary college student travel through time? Ordinary people don't think about power, wealth, and sex? He just knew how to practice martial arts, and he didn't say why he wanted to practice martial arts. Generally speaking, novels should have a goal, either a martial arts fanatic with a martial heart, or to survive. The protagonist in this book has no idea why he wants to practice martial arts, he just knows that practicing martial arts and killing people ends the plot. Is it interesting? There is no love, hate, intrigue, or excitement. It feels like the protagonist is just a wooden person who uses a God's perspective to defeat monsters, upgrade and change the map. I really don't feel that good. This is my first time posting a long comment. If you don't like it, don't comment 🥺

That's too much. I promised to update after giving birth to a baby. It's already been ten months. It's enough for you to take time off to make a baby.

After reading three chapters, I was a little speechless. A big-mouthed cook has a salary of 15 taels of silver for 6 years. Qixia Town is a small town with only two policemen in the town. The most expensive dish at Tongfu Inn is vinegar-based pork sausage. The daily turnover is only a few taels of silver, which shows that consumption is very cheap. Then the protagonist's operation shocked me. I thought it was too expensive to live in an inn, so I rented a house by myself, and bought a few ancient costumes, which cost a total of more than ten taels of silver. . . . You must know that excluding expenses, saving ten taels of silver in ten years is considered frugal.

Wulin Gaiden, as long as there is Wulin Gaiden, I won't watch it!

I hope the Magic Phone will end soon, but I haven't read a single chapter of The Magic Phone.

I just saw the second copy and have some suggestions 🙏 Shouldn't first-rate, second-rate, and third-rate be all adjectives? When did it become a class name? Or is it common to all worlds? Of course, I'm not arguing with the author about the setting, I just think it's very inconsistent to write it this way. . . Logically speaking, there is no clear hierarchy in various martial arts novels and TV series. At most, it is about the person's kung fu status in the world. In The Deer and the Cauldron, Chen Jinnan is a first-rate master; in the Eight Tribes of the Dragon, only Xiao Feng and his like can be considered first-rate masters; if first-rate, second-rate, and third-rate are regarded as rank names, then if Xiao Feng is a first-rate master, in the world of The Deer and the Cauldron, wouldn't it mean that even the best in the world would have to stupidly call himself "a third-rate "expert""? It feels so awkward. . . Moreover, how do levels compare in martial arts? The Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu has thirteen levels, and the Great Shift of the Universe has only seven levels. The martial arts have different levels. How can we accurately tell who is stronger and who is weaker? If we compare the internal strength by years, some people have practiced internal strength for two years, which is comparable to some people who have practiced internal strength for decades. According to the ratio of opened meridians, the Central Plains martial arts practice the eight extraordinary meridians, while the Western Region martial arts practice the three meridians and seven chakras. Even if they are all Central Plains martial arts, some require opening up the Ren and Du meridians at the beginning, and some martial arts (such as Xuanming Divine Palm) first open the heart meridians and then practice the cold energy. How to compare levels? Are those who have opened the Ren and Du meridians better than those who have not? I don't know since when, which novel took the lead, it became popular to gamify and hierarchize martial arts. . . But I have always felt that we don't know each other's depth before fighting. We can only know through reputation, experience and observation, verbal exchanges, and testing, and finally we have to fight. The so-called kung fu is two words, one horizontal and one vertical. The loser lies down, but the winner is qualified to talk about cultivation and realm. And then again, why do old Jianghu always have so much experience and rules? Something like [Don't mess with monks, women, and children who travel around the world]. . Isn't this all because of a person's depth? Isn't it so easy to see? And this is precisely the charm of Jianghu. If everyone has a first-rate, second-rate, or third-rate title marked on their head, why should the veteran players be better than the newcomers? The rules in the arena are definitely going to change. . .

Why do I feel that the author is not very good at writing novels? It looks so bland, the pig's feet are not pretentious, and the plot is not good, as if it is written based on the content of a TV series.

Magic Phone is a rubbish TV series, please don't write about this world

This book is better than Magic Phone... It's too niche

The author is here. I have been taking this leave for almost 3 years.

I jumped right into reading it. The author is really kind-hearted. Those who are capable of cultivating immortals will live there, and those who insult them will die. If you don't understand how to cultivate immortality, don't write anything. Do you think that cultivation of immortality means being harmonious and peaceful? If you practice a little, I will practice a little? There are fifty avenues, escape one of them. Does the author like to be insulted? Masochistic personality?

The chapters are written like copying from a script, and the world transitions are not there at all. Are you sure I didn't miss them?

I found that the protagonist is a bit nosy. How about Jiang Biehe? Does it have anything to do with you? Your balls hurt when you are idle

What kind of TV series is "Lianchengjue"? Have you never heard of it? The world chosen by the author is so unpopular! Have you ever heard of "Wulin Gaiden"? This young man Zhang Sanfeng has only watched a few episodes and still skipped to watch them. The others are almost skipped to watch.

The pace is too fast. Just like what Al wrote, the characters in each world are like strangers. Even the protagonist is also a stranger. His personality traits are not shown. After reading it, I have no impression at all. It looks very awkward.

In the future, I will apply for overseas heritage. I guess Qidian novel will be a big help. In the novel, all Chinese food culture has been imported from abroad.

Basically, all the TV series that have teenage sons are trash. And the TV series you chose, I think you all have the kind of two-parter, not the image of a middle-aged boy.