Cultivation Through Attributes: Starting by Cutting Down the Chaotic World

Why is this level of writing still declining? Author, your last novel was good before the Corpse Gate was destroyed, but not so good from now on. What is the main plot of this novel? Upgrade and strengthen yourself. In the first three chapters, the adopted son wants to seduce the male protagonist. In the seventh and eighth chapters, Ji Sangong from several major families is disgusted. The male protagonist is not strong enough to defeat him, and he has no cunning and conspiracy, so he can only use force to fight. After writing "kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, etc." The description of the emotional and fighting scenes in front of the Corpse Gate is okay. At the beginning of this novel, the map does not say what it looks like. Mao Jiao writes about conflicts passionately. The level of conflict events written by the author is much worse than in the previous book after Corpse Gate was destroyed.

I endured the pain and read the entire book in one day. The main plot was fragmented and the branch plots were pieced together mechanically. I hardly saw a flesh-and-blood person in the supporting roles. Every woman had to be written, but I had no impression of every woman.

It's already twenty-eight chapters and there's still not a single enjoyable point. Most of the people watching the extra system stream just want to have fun, but the protagonist keeps holding back. Although the author's writing is okay, the plot may be unbearable. If I continue to endure it, I'll soon become a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle.

Abuse, it doesn't match the title of the book...

Momojiji deserves to be killed.

Too bad, the male protagonist is not likeable

Stop writing and find a job in a factory. What you wrote makes no sense. It's rubbish and a waste of my time.

It's really rare to add some golden fingers and abuse the master. I especially like Card Realm. . . Add some flow. . . Not Deep Blue, let me see your limits. . .

If you like being abused, go to the girls' channel and write about being abused. Don't come here to harass people.

The good author was criticized for being autistic