I, the Father-In-Law of the Empress, Turn a Deer into a Horse at the Beginning.

The work can be scored 80 points. Generally speaking, the writing is smooth, the characterization is good, and the pace is moderate and not procrastinating. It is an excellent work. The shortcomings are also obvious. This book is like writing a sweet article about a female protagonist. Almost all the text is about the sweet interaction between the male and female protagonists.

I like to read novels that can make people relax. The early stage of this novel is indeed interesting. However, the treatment of Li Yaoyue's character after amnesia in the later period is a disaster. In addition to promoting the development of the plot, it only adds to the reader's heart. If the plot of this character before amnesia can be read, If it continues, I will feel very depressed whenever this character appears after amnesia. Obviously this character is treated like that by the protagonist after losing his memory until the finale. So what is the meaning of the plot description of the protagonist Fang Xiu staying with her all night after she wakes up from amnesia? It just makes the future The interaction between this character and the protagonist seems to be even more uncomfortable. This character can be summed up in two words: lonely. From the appearance to the ending, he is just a chess piece. Li Yaoyue seems to be regarded as a trouble by everyone in the protagonist group but cannot be killed directly. She is really the protagonist. One sentence: "Li Yaoyue? Just live." As soon as the character appears, he is given to the protagonist by Emperor Zhou as a tool. The protagonist is even more awesome. He was imprisoned before amnesia, then imprisoned after amnesia, and then sent to Zhenbao Pavilion to work as a coolie tool to help the protagonist earn money. Later, he was supported by the protagonist and became the queen and a puppet. She is always under surveillance and has no freedom. The two maids who are the best to me in the whole novel are sad. In other novels, even if she is a villain, she can still be treated as a human being after being cleansed. Even if she cannot be cleansed, she might as well be written to death by the author to avoid disgusting the readers. In this novel, she has been It is no longer a person, it is just an object that is thrown away after being used by the protagonist. The most disgusting character is Yang Yuhuan in the author's works. Daji is a tool after all, helping the protagonist to do this and that, but it is of some use, but as for Yang Yuhuan, she is just a green tea, especially the protagonist The plot of the chapters where the protagonist sends Li Yaoyue home feels like the author simply disgusts the readers. Take me for example, those chapters made me feel a lot less favorable towards the protagonist, and I was even more disgusted with the author's Yang Yuhuan. Moreover, it was written so that she just wanted to keep up with her. The author also I have to mention that the empress sent her to spy on her, which also made my favorable impression of the heroine drop a bit. Since this chapter, the favorable impression I had cultivated on this novel in the early and mid-term has completely disappeared. After that, I skipped reading, and then I just watched the ending. The summary is my defense.

Romance novels that sell dog meat over sheep's heads

Hurry up and change the heroine. I really can't stand this heroine. She is arrogant and stupid. Please let the author make Li Yueyue the heroine. Moreover, the name Wukong Mingming is too bad. The first impression is not very good. She is really not as good as Li Yueyue.

Author, you don't want to be a factory owner either👻🤪

Except for one system, none of the labels are consistent. It's like watching a science fiction movie where you make people fall in love. There is also a half-male channel and half-female channel below. This thing is obviously an all-female channel, but it is not obvious at the front. It is normal. After it was released, it became very toxic. After only 20 chapters, it was already an all-female channel. The competition for supremacy in the back now seems to be just to make the female protagonist happy. When writing about female channels, go to the female channel area. Don't hang on to the system stream and the hegemony tag. It's disgusting in the male channel section.

Well written, keep up the good work, author!

What's written next is a piece of shit. Li Yaoyue's here is a piece of shit.

Brothers, I find that if this book is told from the perspective of a female broadcaster, a new continent will be discovered!

When reading this book, you must not take it seriously. This book can be regarded as a love history novel. If a love story is a little abnormal, it is normal. If there is no abnormality, it is abnormal.

Yes, the writing is a bit interesting, but the protagonist is the empress, and the supporting characters are Daji, Yang Yuhuan, and his nominal wife. However, the little empress is also willing to give up. I am very curious about what to do after getting married. I will wait and see. These few are enough, if there are more, it will be boring. This is a love story, and it would be boring to write it as a harem story. In the later stage, it should be possible to achieve a state where the world is unified and the people have no worries about food and clothing. The little empress is still the little empress, the prime minister is still the prime minister, holding the hand of his son and growing old together with him. {"TopicId":"794652058308575232","TopicName":""}

This ended too quickly. It feels like only 1/10 of the surrounding countries were updated. None of the surrounding countries were destroyed. They were gone as soon as Zhang Liang was summoned.

Although the author is extremely talented, he is unwilling to make progress and is addicted to wine and sex, which gradually leads to readers complaining and asking for updates but not being able to do so. I hope the author will take updates as his basis, and he will punish himself and inflict the anger of the readers.

Since ancient times, Shennong has tasted hundreds of herbs and benefited the world. Today I was doing Shen Nong's move and tried this poison for everyone, but at this time I was already poisoned and died.

There is no relationship to talk about without going to the emperor, even if the whole job of punching the emperor three times is fine

How about this

Teasing the Empress

Daqian Chunhua eight years. Jinluan Palace. The empress wears a crown, her face is covered by a bead curtain, and she sits high in the palace. Over the years, with the help of her father-in-law, her reputation has grown, and the court has long become her voice. "So, the emperor of the Great Zhou Kingdom ran away?" After a long time, the empress said. "Your Majesty..." Before Lin Tianxiang, Minister of the Ministry of Education, could finish his words, the empress waved her hand to interrupt, and scolded in a cold voice: "I can't even catch a mere lord of subjugation, so what use do I want you to do!" "Since three thousand people can't be caught, then 30,000, three hundred thousand!" ......... "Mingkong, you are becoming more and more like an emperor now." Fang Xiu came to the empress and said with a slight smile. "You can call Mingkong too?" The empress leaned forward and said coldly. Fang Xiu was slightly startled. The empress has held a high position in recent years. It is said that the moving energy nourishes the moving body. When she is angry, she has an awe-inspiring and inviolable aura. The two have been together for many years, and they can tell what the other is thinking with just one look. Fang Xiu rolled his eyes, knelt down on one knee and said: "I have my own merits, and I have spoken indiscriminately for a moment, please punish me!" Seeing his cooperation, the empress curled her lips slightly and said: "My father is serious, today is bright It's all thanks to the former prime minister. How can there be any punishment? " "The ancients said, 'There is no rule.' If you behave badly before the emperor, you should be punished." Fang Xiu raised his head and looked like a generous sacrifice. "That's right!" The empress sneered, lowered her head and took off her shoes and socks, raised her right foot and stepped on his face. "Telling you to bully me all day long!" "Telling you to mistake a deer for a horse!" "Telling you to find so many women!" "Telling you to..." While venting her displeasure, the empress stepped hard with her right foot, as if she wanted to vent all the anger she had suffered in the past. ………… After a stick of incense. "Your Majesty, I'm a little thirsty." Fang Xiu said. Wu Mingkong smiled sweetly, pulled him in front of him, gently pressed his head and said, "I'll ask my father-in-law to drink some water." ………… Half an hour later. Wu Mingkong was the only one left in the Jinluan Palace. She was twisting her body while crying and cursing: "You are a plagued little thief. I asked you to bully me all day long. Do you dare to bully me in the future?" After saying that, she seemed to press hard somewhere with her right hand. "Yeah!" Shaoqing, the empress of Daqian seemed to have been hit by an arrow, her neck was raised high and her body was arched. "Good sister, my brother will never bully you again. From now on, you will be my heart and my liver. Even if you want the moon in the sky, I will pluck it for you!" Fang Xiu appeared next to the dragon chair and wiped the sweat from his face.

The writing is actually okay. There are some minor flaws, but they don't affect the reading. It's just that this system can summon characters and legions, which makes me feel bad. Of course, it's just my personal feeling.

Isn't it really bad to bring disaster to the country and the people?

This is a book that the author has played himself to death. My personal opinion is that the whole book has been on a downward spiral since I got married to Li Yaoyue. I feel like I want to have too many heroines but dare not write about it. The country's military level also fluctuates up and down based on my feelings. It's just because I have too many ideas and I can't control them. But I just want to watch the plot of falling in love with the heroine. Alas.

Okay, first of all, congratulations to the author Shang Sanjiang. As a follow-up reader, I would like to give you some suggestions: 1. Problems with characterization. The empress' character is well created. A cute empress who is cute but strong and arrogant appears on the page. However, there are some problems with the portrayal of the male protagonist. The previous chapter is fine. The main reason is that the career line of the male protagonist has been too little described recently. Although the daily writing is It's good, but I feel that I still need to write some of the things the male protagonist does. To be honest, I still don't understand the character of the male protagonist, and there are other things to write that are both serious and upright. I think the male protagonist should take the initiative and have a bigger picture 2. Plot, to be honest, some plots are a bit unreasonable. Whether it is embarrassing or not is another matter. Let's take the spy plot as some readers said, I think who reads it? The author said it very well. There must be resistance under high pressure. It is easy to rebel or simply become a double agent if controlled purely by poison. The best thing is to use both kindness and power. Of course, if you say that the male protagonist is invincible, he can defeat all enemies in the world, then say something else 3. Female protagonists, the author writes very well in daily life, so how many female protagonists or female supporting characters (especially those who know how to accept them) are there, currently on a business trip Will those few be accepted (ಡωಡ)? My suggestion is to write more female protagonists or female supporting characters, and write about history. Then you must not open a harem To sum up, the author generally writes well. After all, the data does not lie. Just take a look at these suggestions of mine. The portrayal of the female protagonist in the male harem is very important, but the portrayal of the male protagonist is also very important. Finally, I wish the author better and better results in this book

Has anyone tried poison? Is this book okay?

A treacherous Prime Minister who has no military power and still dares to call a deer a horse, you are really awesome.

Black Silk Picture

Your Majesty shed tears today. Since the last court session, His Majesty always seemed to have tears in his eyes after sitting for a while, but they never came out. But I didn't expect that the traitorous prime minister came today. He submitted a list of corrupt officials, saying that he was willing to sell his property to help the victims, and that he was loyal to His Majesty and did not want His Majesty to overwork. But everyone in the army did not know that the biggest corrupt official was the traitor, and that His Majesty's overworking was also the reason for the traitor. When the traitor handed the medicine to your majesty, your majesty still cried. If only, if I could kill the traitor for your majesty, I would prepare a knife next time. No, it can't be a knife. The traitor will definitely find out, but you must be prepared. Although it is not poison this time, but what if, what if it is poison next time? I want to make the traitor regret poisoning Your Majesty. Your Majesty is so pitiful. In his prime years, he has to work day and night reviewing memorials and at the same time, he has to be bullied by the traitor. But why does the medicine given to His Majesty by the traitorous Prime Minister seem to be very effective today? It must be because he is afraid that His Majesty will not be able to manage the country legitimately after his death. The traitorous Prime Minister is really hateful.

What to do, today when His Majesty Yi Renju was drunk, I personally pushed him into an adulterous position. I didn't mean it, I really didn't mean it. I hope your Majesty won't remember anything when he wakes up. Hmm - how could you have thought at that time that the traitor and His Majesty would be a good match? Your Majesty is as beautiful as a fairy, but your traitorous person is at best similar to Pan An. Your Majesty is the Nine-Five Supreme Being, and your traitorous person is inferior to ten thousand people. No, it seems that your traitorous person still wants to be above you. It's so abominable, ah Σ(°Д°;, what am I thinking about.  But why does it feel like the traitor is different from before? In the past, the traitor has been bullying your majesty, and now the traitor is still bullying your majesty. What is the difference? Oh, by the way, your majesty today seems to be... Molested by the traitor. Could it be that the traitor is not only coveting the throne, but also... Even your majesty can't let it go Σ(っ °Д °;)っ Wow, Your Majesty, you are so miserable. You have to get up at five o'clock every day and deal with government affairs until noon. Sometimes you even have to read memorials while eating. Hey, will the traitor be kinder to Your Majesty in the future?

Little empress, hehehe

The part about the black armor cavalry was a little weird. I feel like the author underestimated the role of cavalry. Only 20,000 black armor cavalry can withstand the enemy's 50,000 tiger and benign troops? The Xuanjia cavalry were the elite among the elite selected by Li Shimin. "Zi Zhi Tongjian" records that Li Shimin led more than a thousand Xuanjia cavalry to rescue Qu Tutong. Facing Wang Shichong's 100,000 troops, six thousand people were captured and killed. The consumption of a heavy cavalry is very huge. The protagonist summons two thousand mysterious soldiers at will. Under normal circumstances, these soldiers guarantee at least one person and two horses. Plus the auxiliary soldiers, the consumption of these people is equivalent to 50,000 ordinary infantry. I can't imagine the scene in the future when the protagonist summons 20,000 mysterious soldiers. Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty's expedition to Mobei exhausted the legacy of Wenjing's rule and only supported hundreds of thousands of cavalry. Note that most of them are light cavalry. In ancient times, it was no exaggeration to say that one heavy cavalry was equivalent to a hundred. I suggest the author revise this part of the content, either to light cavalry, such as the light cavalry with cavalry and archery such as Baima Yicong; or to directly remove a zero.

It's so good, I sent it to my wife to read, and now we're watching it together.