I Want It All in the Red Mansion

Although I have only written one chapter, it looks pretty good and makes me want to read on. Come on, author!

I feel that I have over-interpreted the Jia family... Although the heads of the Jia family are not necessarily losers, but you have gone too far to write them as people who keep a low profile and hide their talents... It doesn't matter if you strengthen it a little, but in the end you have become "not talking about the number one scholar, it is not difficult for Jia Zhengjiao to succeed". Isn't it too much? Over-interpretation and various conspiracy theories will make the reading boring and depressing.

About the choice of hostess. The protagonist is also the third wife. The author first chooses Qin Keqing, and you choose the rest. You can have concubines. The protagonist does not just fall in love with everyone. Even if you ask me to turn Jia Yuanchun into the heroine, any other three springs will be fine. As long as there are enough likes, I will rationalize her and make sure you can't make a mistake. This is what some book friends said when I wrote about Yuanchun recently. Updated every day, no contributions are saved. Write down the heroine you want below, and the one with the most likes will be given priority. Write down the heroine you want below, and the one with the most likes will be given priority. Write down the heroine you want below, and the one with the most likes will be given priority. The protagonist is still young, and there should be many chapters to consider about the heroine later. There is enough time for everyone to make a choice. The author only has a rough outline, not a detailed outline, and can adjust it at any time. In the following article, the author strives to create a character that everyone likes.

I have read a lot of Red Mansions novels and I will share my thoughts. 1. There are some mysterious events in Red Mansions. However, in Red Mansions novels, it is best to eliminate them directly and write about fictional history. After all, there are gods and the like, which are really poisonous. People are here to read fictional history, not to see immortality or fantasy! 2. It is best to take the military exam. The imperial examination is a bit unsuitable for the "Eight Gong" noble family who started their career with military merit. Moreover, the civil service group will also suppress Xungui. Even if the protagonist is just a branch of Xungui, they will still suppress it. After all, the concept of family was deeply rooted in the people at that time. Don't say that the civil service group doesn't know who you are and it's hard to suppress you. Examiners who come from the civil service group know most of the candidates. At least they know which college they came from and which college's style they have. Even if you are allowed to pass the imperial examination, you will still be suppressed and excluded. As for the emperor, you nobles have military power and you still have to interfere in civil affairs. What do you think he thinks? The greatest possibility is that if you want to be a high official, you must take action against other nobles, so that your family cannot gain a foothold in the nobles, and other civil servants will not like you. In the end, you can only be a lonely minister. 3. The villain forces should be more normal. A certain novel was quite good at the beginning, but it became more and more wrong later on. A dead and useless prince could still have a lot of influence left behind! It's really no brainer to give the villain more power. Personally, I think it can strengthen the grassland forces. After all, the Red Mansion didn't say much about the grassland forces. 4. It doesn't matter if you have a golden finger or not. After all, it's still peaceful and the whole family is okay. It doesn't matter if you have a harem or not. It's good to have a harem in the Red Mansion, and it's also good to take a scoop. After all, it's modern people traveling through ancient times.

The author just wants to kill Jia Zhu and write him to death The previous chapter wrote that Jia pardoned and Jia Zheng kept a low profile and concealed their stupidity. The latest chapter writes that Jia Jing is also very powerful, but when it is written that Jia Zhu's face was clearly drugged when he was involved in the accident, there are many loopholes in the reason why the incident was discovered, so shallow The three shrewd elders could not discover the obvious conspiracy. Jia Zhu was also beaten and seriously injured by his shrewd and capable father, leading to his eventual death. A genius and legitimate nephew was vaguely explained. Now he has to focus on cultivating a side descendant. The logic is confusing and difficult to justify.

It's not good if the conspiracy is too dense. Don't hide the hidden clues too much so that we readers can't see them. You can turn around and write "A little yellow door entered the palace at night when you couldn't see anything. Write a few words about the conspirators and name them." For example, in the new The first chapter is that Jia Zhu's maid changed the medicine. You can just write that this maid appeared at a certain palace gate, and then say a few words, "Okay, okay, the secrets that I have buried for many years have finally been harvested." Explain that this is a lurker who has been lurking for many years.

The protagonist's growth is going to accelerate! At present, the mind, ability, power... Have not yet started! If you don't grow up, it will be over

The writing is quite good. Come on, the author, write according to your own ideas. The current writing style and conception are quite good, and the logic is self-consistent. I will definitely support it when it is released, come on. (It's rare to find a book that can be read, please don't be a jerk, come on)

I patiently read nearly 100 chapters of the public chapter, and I really couldn't stand it anymore! First of all, the setting is unreasonable. A kid who came out of the fifth server unexpectedly competed with the main room and enjoyed the same treatment as the main room's young master! Secondly, for men and women of that era, it was impossible for men and women at the age of 7 to meet any woman they wanted! Do you think it's Jia Baobao who won't grow up? ! Just meet whichever girl you want to see? ! What's more, you, who was born in the fifth server, actually met in public with the woman from your maternal family, and even had a passionate fight with the lady in the main house. It was completely ridiculous! Give up early

To summarize my personal views on accepting the four springs: 1. The most important series of accepting the four springs is that non-marriage with the same surname began in the Western Zhou Dynasty and was not abolished until the late Qing Dynasty. According to modern law, we know that collateral blood relatives of three generations can get married. With genetic diseases, the chance of giving birth to a person with dementia and disability is very small. People with the same surname may not necessarily be of the same ethnicity, but are relatives. But this involves Mendel's laws of inheritance and deeper knowledge of genetics. A Dream of Red Mansions is a fictional novel written in the era of Kang Mazi's Cao family. At that time, this theory had not yet emerged in the West, let alone spread to the East. However, there are always exceptions to everything. Since it is a fictional dynasty, it depends on how the protagonist plays. 1. You can use it as an excuse to write that the royal family also has intermarriages with collateral members of the same surname. This is one of the well-founded persuasion methods. 2. The protagonist and Sichun are distant relatives, and their blood relationship is very weak. 3. It violates the law of "no marriage with the same surname". In peacetime, everyone is watching, so it is naturally difficult to operate. But if the protagonist is in troubled times, for example, the prince's rebellion is successful, the prince is dissatisfied, the internal strife continues, there are Jurchen and Mongolian invasions, troubled times are about to begin, and Sichuan is displaced due to war, pretending to be an unknown woman and living in the protagonist's house. In ancient times, if the surname of a concubine was not known, it was determined by divination to avoid marriage with the same surname. This gave room for maneuver. If Yuanchun was too old to wait for the war, and then needed to be the main wife, we can find another way. 4. The year background of the troubled times is determined. Chapter 95 of Dream of Red Mansions writes, "It was the beginning of spring on December 18th of the year Jiayin. The death day of Concubine Yuan was December 19th. It was already the Yin month of the year mao, and she was forty-three years old." I personally think that the time of the year Jiayin can be chosen. It is the time period of the late Ming and early Qing dynasties in 1614 or 1674, which is in line with the third point of the background of taking concubines in troubled times. Personally, I think it is better to place Yuanchun 43 in 1674. Pushing forward 30 years is 1644, 13 years old. In the official history of the Yuan Dynasty, Chongzhen also went to the Meishan Crooked Neck Tree in 1644, and the 1640s happened to be the time when the Qinhuai Eight Beauties were just blooming in the 28th year of the 28th century. The country was hated by the family, talented people and beautiful women were in conflict with each other in the north, and they were intoxicated in the south. It can be written that the dynasty was the Ming Dynasty. On the surface, it was the establishment of the new dynasty. In fact, due to the inheritance of the Ming Dynasty, the internal power was decayed and it was already on the verge of collapse. Then, there was chaos, and they made some false plans to kidnap Yuan Chun and become Mrs. Yazhai. You must know that since the Southern Song Dynasty, the Chinese people's requirements for women's honors and honors have become distorted. Living in the mountains for a few days, let alone entering the palace, the Wang family and the historians who are related to the Jia family will not want it. So you can be discouraged and become a Taoist nun. Doesn't this give you room for maneuver?

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Yuanchun

I don't know why Jia Zhu had to die. Wouldn't he be able to write if he didn't die?

It comes from Wan Tianqing. It has been on the bookshelf for a long time. Today it is already 300,000 yuan. Come on, author 😁

After reading a few chapters, I really can't stand the author's logic. He simply implements the idea of ​​valuing the past over the present to the end. Does the author really have no idea at all how awesome modern civilization is? All civilizations are based on information, matter and energy, and these two are affected by productivity. Which of these aspects has not been crushed by modern times in ancient times? Let's talk about information first. Tens of thousands of years of human history, all ancient and modern Chinese and foreign literature, classics, poetry, and scientific and technological knowledge. Except for some sensitive technologies, what are some of them that are not open to the public today? Twelve years of compulsory education, four years of university education, three years of postgraduate studies, and three years of doctoral studies. Which dynasty or generation can provide 22 years of formal education to the general public as it does now? Then there is the Internet that is exclusive to modern civilization, where the world looks, global news, heroic deeds, unique visions, and various ideologies all intersect here. As long as a modern person has had normal learning and growth experiences, how can he be impressed by a young man from a down-and-out ancient family? But the protagonist is almost like a flute-playing boy who serves under Jia Zhu. Really, I don't understand it. Then there is matter and energy. In the modern world, there are super cities such as Shanghai, New York, and Tokyo, super buildings such as the Burj Khalifa, the Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macao Cross-Sea Bridge, and the Three Gorges Dam. Then there are various luxury manors, high-tech villas, various luxury hotels, and super large flat floors on the buildings. Then the protagonist is shocked by the luxury of the Ningrong Palace in the ancient capital in the first chapter? Come on, they don't even have public toilets or squatting pits. Just walk by a corner and you might encounter a pile of poop!                                                            Tap water, various electrical appliances, 24-hour hot water on hand, air conditioning and floor heating, and a variety of food from all over the world are readily available. These are not the privileges of the wealthy class in modern times, but if you look for any emperor from ancient times, which one would have such treatment? In the first chapter of the novel, the protagonist ran away to envy the life of ancient wealthy families? Cow's cow's.

I've read about thirty chapters, which is about a third of the time. Overall, the writing style of this book is okay, and the pace is not too rushed or exaggerated. But the problem is that the entry point is too early, or too early is not bad in itself. But for thirty chapters, the vision basically focuses on the protagonist and Jia Zhu, who has only a few strokes in the original book. This is very strange. A child can do too much. Secondly, this is a fanfic in itself. The reader's attention must be on Twelve Hairpins instead of watching Journey to the West. I have read dozens of chapters of Sanxingdong Cultivation. I have read more than half of Three Kingdoms and The Second Emperor Huanling. It's just that I have good writing skills and can write new ideas. But the daily start of the two children who are not yet 18 years old together is so lengthy, which is a bit of a waste of patience.

Because the protagonist is too young to directly participate in the struggle, otherwise it would not be in line with the age and temperament before time travel. At least you have to help the protagonist, otherwise you just deliver food and maintain stability. This is what you should do in this age and family. You can only decipher some of the inside stories of the Jia family from the perspective of a bystander. After 2-5 chapters at most, you will start to enter the struggle mode, from small to large. I hope dear readers will wait for a moment, otherwise it will look unreasonable and easy to be criticized.

After reading about ten chapters, I feel that the author is quite thoughtful, which is different from many red mansion novels produced by the assembly line. I think the most important thing about online writing is to have ideas. Routines and writing styles can be gradually developed over time. Don't be discouraged, come on, author!

It's very well written. It's obvious from the author's wording that he puts a lot of thought into it. It's not a streamlined article. Writing about The Red Mansion has very high literary requirements for the author. Otherwise, it will not be able to convey the flavor of the Red Mansion and it will become an ordinary historical article. I have a small suggestion that the author should not take the chapter reviews so seriously and reply to each one. This is not to say that this behavior is bad. I am really afraid that one day a troll will come and say that this is not good or that is not good and the author will be angry.

At the starting point of impetuousness, this book is a breath of fresh air and needs to be read with patience. The writing is good and the storyline is also very good. The garden drama is smooth and not embarrassing and interesting. However, the protagonist is too young to do anything big. It feels like there is still a long way to lay the groundwork. I hope to grow up quickly (more more) and I will continue to support you.

It's rare to find a good book, and the author's literary level is very high. It's a pity that the new book has to be raised and has been finished. In addition, I am still gathering strength, and I can accept it. I will get tired of it after a while. Everyone in this book is not stupid, and it doesn't look poisonous.