Konoha: Make Uchiha Great Again

This is where your dark Naruto lives. You can only eat expired food and instant noodles. You can't even see potted plants, refrigerators, milk and bread, right?

I hope the author understands Naruto. The Sharingan can control tailed beasts, but it cannot control people to help. The Eight-Tailed Kirabi once said that any illusion is useless to them. Illusion interferes with chakra. Kirabi and the Eight-Tails can interrupt each other. Earth can control the Kyuubi because he has a contract. The psychic contract that Ben gave him. I have read a book that is the same as this one. But the Sharingan is so awesome. The Jinchūriki can control the third Mizukage with just one glare. He almost leveled the Mist Ninja. I was speechless.

Itachi Uchiha has become too bad, and his eyes were gouged out by the protagonist. In the original work, Izanami can do it, but it makes no sense that Izanami can't, even if he has time to activate, he will not have his eyes gouged out.

It's not his fault that I found a character like Itachi very sad and helpless when I first watched Naruto when I was 20 years old. Now that I'm 32 and looking back at this character, I feel a shiver in my heart and a cold heart. This kind of person who seems to have great love is actually an extremely selfish and paranoid person who harms others without benefiting himself. What's even crazier is that he thinks what he does is Yes, he is extremely indifferent to his companions and relatives around him. He can be said to be a standard scumbag. In words that everyone can understand now, he is a double-standard religious extremist terrorist. It is a good idea to think about things from a Hokage perspective. If the leader of a group has such a thinking logic, the group is a terrorist group.

There is something wrong with the brain of the pig's trotters. A total of 100 pieces are needed. If you kill a jounin, you will get 25 fragments, chuunin will get 20, genin will get 10, and ordinary people will also get 1-5. If the protagonist is sick, he has to worry about the four jounin? ? Wouldn't it be enough to take on the mission of exterminating the bandits? I don't believe that the protagonist is so unlucky. I can only brush him fifty times at most. Killing ten genin without killing a single jounin is troublesome and thankless.

To be honest, I can't understand what Uchiha Itachi is thinking in his mind at all? His strength is exposed, and then Uchiha Fugaku is in a good position, how can he play the coward's game? It is impossible to fight. Both sides will suffer losses. It is impossible for Konoha to fight.

Kill Itachi, and don't clear Itachi's name.

25 Points for jounin, 20 points for chunin, 10 points for genin, 1-5 points for ordinary people. In order to get 100 points, the protagonist is going to kill 4 jounin&%@... I don't know what those who are watching are thinking, but I feel like my brain is hurting after watching the beginning...

If I activate the kaleidoscope, I will directly lead some people to Iwagakure Village or Kumogakure Village. If you are strong enough, create a village by yourself and then fight back again!

What kind of brain circuit does the author have? The Uchiha clan, which is bound by golden fingers, turns out to be bound to Konoha, which is absolutely impossible. As long as the strength is strong enough, there is no way to mess around, and you have to stay in the big mess of Konoha?

Let me briefly show you the size of the real thousand hands Hashirama is 1.85 Meters tall. This is a scale, not counting the height of the Buddha standing up. It can directly destroy the power of the complete Susan and Kyuubi {"TopicId":"730539477671411712","TopicName":"Naruto"}

It seems the author didn't pay attention. Obito deliberately refused to resurrect Lin. To a certain extent, he is only half in love with Lin, and the other half is in love with other things. They are just mixed together and collectively called Lin This is actually the second hell for Obito. Because what Obito wants to solve is the institutional problem of ninjas. Lin's resurrection can only prove that she is about to enter her second death. Obito will face the second hell. In other words, do you believe that Obito can kill you in the real world? Because the current world system is hell for Obito. What he wants to do is to abolish the entire ninja system. And all supporters of the ninja system are his enemies. In the original work, the core of him becoming the Ten-Tails to help him regain his self-awareness is based on Lin when he was a member of the small class. In other words, his heart was already full of love at that time. Instead of looking at the real world as hell. Because the core of his personality consciousness is the happiness, expectation, and brightness he had for the ninja system back then. As the core In other words, becoming the Ten-Tails Jinchuuriki did kill Obito to a certain extent.

This kind of book is full of water, but it can be purchased as a high-quality product. If you don't have a limited number of free copies to read this kind of book, it is a complete waste of money.

I would like to share my opinion (personal opinion, not for reference) I have ordered more than a hundred chapters. The specific reason is that I feel that the author started to add water to the book in the later period, and the content is not nutritious. Considering the context, skipping to read will not affect the experience. Actually, I was very optimistic about this book at first. Because someone finally stood up and carried the flag of Uchiha. On the one hand, the combat power was improved, and on the other hand, political co-optation, the vertical and horizontal alliance forced the third generation and Danzo to fall. The system is very powerful, so it didn't make me feel weird to force an ordinary Uchiha protagonist to the level of Hashirama and Madara. In short, Golden Finger is very easy to understand. The words are very clean, there are no confusing settings, and the combat effectiveness is very objective and stable. I think this is the author's second advantage. But some of the following content is not satisfactory. The description of pretentiousness is too weak, and all the famous scenes in the original work were copied. It was embarrassing to watch, really embarrassing. It's not that you can't copy, it's that you can't copy blindly... I remember the author's explanation for this was that he wanted to pay tribute to the original work. This was a good starting point, but there were too many flaws and the author had very little of his own stuff, which led me to give up on fighting descriptions later on. To be honest, this would lose a lot of the fun. But I can't stand it anymore. The language description itself is not as intuitive as the animation picture, and the retelling of the original famous studio description is even more watery. The fighting in Naruto animation refers to many elements, including almost all martial arts schools in Asia. Bagua, Tai Chi, Drunken Boxing, Jeet Kune Do, Sanda... These things are very cool, but difficult to describe. It is better to focus more on combat wisdom. For example, how to use small ninjutsu in an understated manner to skillfully resolve greater risks, showing off the skill of being a short-cut. A master should take things lightly. Experts should be able to click on it at any time. Playing against waves is just a concept. Repeatedly playing against waves can easily make people lose the concept. Without concepts, we are far away from reality. How many people have faced bombshell explosions? Can you tell the difference between Susanoo's punch and his kick? Can you tell the subtle difference? No, because this power is too much beyond what we usually see. We can only vaguely feel it through the pictures in the animation, and we have no feeling at all when retelling it in words. In short, the protagonist's form of pretentiousness is still very low-level, and there is no better way to sublimate it. It makes people feel unnatural and a little stiff. Also, the restoration of the original characters is very poor. Not many things have changed in the early plot, so this problem will not be exposed yet. The politics in the later period were basically like children playing house, heading towards a child-like happy ending. To put it simply, the author simplified the thoughts and personalities of the original characters. The characters lose their contradictions and entanglements, and they become less fleshed out. Uchiha Madara is just strong and strong and strong. Only respect the strong and only like to fight. Empty in other respects. Uchiha Itachi is so brainwashed that he has a tough mouth. He can't fuck you or play with you. I just don't accept it. Uchiha Shisui, protagonist, whatever you say is right, I will listen to you. Jiraiya, protagonist, whatever you say is right, I will listen to you. Fugaku, protagonist, whatever you say is right, I will listen to you. Sasuke, Brother Hahara is very powerful, I listen to him. Naruto, Brother Habara is very powerful, I listen to him. Xiang Phosphorus, Brother Hahara saved me, I listen to him. As a group of Uchiha, Habara is very powerful and we listen to him. Do you think so? These characters are all single. What's the difference between one character and a group of characters? There is none left. So this book is starting to feel quite empty now. In addition, regarding the heroine, she was supposed to be a smart, sexy and happy enemy at the beginning, but the author seems not to be good at writing romance, so the heroine became a kind of soy sauce character: they are all buddies. She is female in the setting, but in fact, she is so empty that she does not even have any gender characteristics. This is a question of the author's ability to control the characters. You, Uchiha Hahara, will become the strongest immediately. After a few waves, you will defeat all the villains. Then get married, have children, and the finale. Is there a character in the past that resonates with the story? Really a no. In the early days, Shisui still had some interactions. No more later. What is Sasuke doing? What is Naruto doing? What are the other twelve Xiaoqiang doing? Jiraiya survived, what was he going to do? Everything is in service of the protagonist, but the protagonist is not ready yet. So many changes have happened, the impact on the characters, each character's experience, thoughts and influences, there is no explanation. I was busy upgrading all day long, compressing the realm, and the word count was low, which made this book fall behind in the later stage. At the beginning, it was said that there were many more in this chapter, but in the later stages, there was almost no one in the chapter. What does it mean? It means there is no topic. The content is empty, and everyone just glances at it and leaves without even thinking about the discussion. So, give up. I am not belittling the author, nor am I offering suggestions for you to change. I don't have this identity, but I was very optimistic about you in the early stage, so now that I want to unsubscribe, I just want to talk and communicate with the author. Perhaps in the eyes of many people this book is still very good, and the results are also good. There is no difference in everyone's taste. I hope Qidian is predestined and I can see the author's books again in the future.

I started watching it today and let me tell you my feelings. The front of this book is very toxic, and the viewing experience is very poor. The writing level is like that of a primary school student, with many typos and omissions. Another particularly bad thing is that I opened my eyes and only stared at the Jonin, which felt like a mental retard! Although it was later explained that it was to train myself, it was very confusing at the time! After passing the previous poisonous point, I felt better and better, the writing became smoother, and my IQ also went up, as if there was a different author! Now that I have seen the part about bewitching Kakashi, I feel that it is already a very good work! Go ahead and revise the previous chapters. Although the latter chapters are well written, Yoneda Kyo in the early chapters will scare away many readers.

Suddenly, I had an idea. If the Uchiha clan had always existed, wouldn't Black Zetsu have an escape route? If Madara didn't succeed this time, the worst he could do was wait for decades to find another Uchiha brother to re-synthesize the Rinnegan Eye. Anyway, Black Zetsu had been waiting for more than 1,000 years. As a result, the Uchiha were destroyed, which meant that Black Zetsu had no retreat. He could only succeed this time. Otherwise, if he failed this time, it would be over. He would have no eyes to re-synthesize the Rinnegan Eye. When the Uchiha clan was wiped out and Obito was involved, Black Zetsu didn't even have any objections. It was really a disaster.

The protagonist is a bit disgusting, the double standard is too arrogant and arrogant

Blanch, give Obito eyes specifically?

The previous Uchiha fanfic was pretty good, why is this one so toxic? If nothing else, do you have to imitate Uchiha Madara? Everything is like him, his moves, Susanoo, and pupil skills are better than those of his own son. He is a time traveler, so why should he imitate others? This is poisonous to me

In fact, regarding the caged bird, among the Naruto novels I have read so far, I personally think that the best solution is to cover the caged bird with a layer of sealing technology so that the members of the clan cannot execute the branch at will. Moreover, when the branch dies, the caged bird can be triggered normally to ensure that the supercilious eyes do not leak out. I forgot which one, but there is indeed a book where the protagonist does this. This solution feels really good.

I found that everyone said it was watery. The author may also feel that he is not watery. The plot is not watery and can be said to be very compact. But the author's choice of words and sentences is so bad and there are many typos. What can be said in one sentence has to be written in several paragraphs as watery as the world's best martial arts. It can obviously be more concise At least half a million words are made of water.

The rhythm is okay, but there are two fatal problems. First, connect logic and details. For example, 100 power fragments are required, 25 jounin, 20 chunin, 10 genin, and 1~5 ordinary people. It's very childish for the protagonist to insist on picking a Jonin, and then somehow his teammates' kills count. Second, typos and wrong sentences are the most disgusting thing, especially when readers remind them in the comments, but the author does not change them. This is not a problem of ability, but a problem of attitude.

🥀It's really poisonous to add the power of other systems to fan fiction. System literature is popular because they don't like to read boring training. The system of getting results quickly is to better advance the plot. However, this novel has a system on the one hand and a word count of cultivation water on the other. 🥀The main character Mangekyou's ability is really low. It reduces the Susano front position, reduces the consumption, increases the power, strengthens the mastery of Chakra and Jutsu, and increases the chakra output. Is it the same effect, and the chakra can be restored? What about the early pupil power, reducing the Susanoo? In the later stages of the game, the Sakai is more of a decoration. This kaleidoscope does get stronger as the later stages progress, but the protagonist of the fanfic does not need this consumption reduction increase in the later stage. Not to mention the other gods that everyone is afraid of, how much Kamui enhances Obito's combat power when he first awakens, and Kamui has always been useful from beginning to end. 🥀The fights are protracted and not exciting. In order to highlight the character of the protagonist, they often make embarrassing speeches during the fights. The writing is not so good but the writing is very good. The plot of the patriarch is actually good for so many chapters. 🥀A common problem in humanities is that one's wits are lost on one's wits. A few words made Shisui worship him as his younger brother without any brains. In order to create a conflict with Itachi, Itachi was written in such a way that Itachi couldn't even understand a few of Shisui's words.

There are so many typos and the writing is so lame, how can so many people read it?

As for the title, I just want to complain. The Uchiha are a clan that was destroyed when they were too great. You still want to be great? The reason why the Uchiha rebelled in the original work is because as a member of the clan-union ninja village, the Senju clan, the only one that can restrain them, has become lonely. The Uchiha clan alone is too strong, which means that in this small court, Uchiha has become a powerful minister with great achievements. If he goes one step further, he will either usurp the throne or establish his own clan! The smarter ones should be insulting themselves now, pretending to be grandsons to accumulate strength, and finally pushing everything aside. As a result, Uchiha became more arrogant and high-profile. Therefore, the grassroots forces naturally push Uchiha from behind and force everyone else to jointly target Uchiha for the fundamental interests of their own survival. Uchiha is not the opponent of other people in the coalition. Naturally, like the original Sasuke's father, he smiles bitterly and waits to be destroyed.

It's great. It's free for a limited time and I don't even want to read it. It's actually pretty good if it's limited to about one million words.

Uchiha Fugaku and Shisui have two pairs of kaleidoscopes. Konoha is just an old third generation. When he was young, he was a Ninja and now he is a Ninja. It is not certain whether Danzo's old coin will be used. Maybe he will directly inherit the position of the third generation after the third generation dies. Whether Jiraiya can be called back, it is not necessarily that he will keep his hands on Uchiha. After all, they are all in Konoha. Tsunade is afraid of blood and cannot use it. Susanoo is a jounin. With just one sword, even Jonin is just a fish. In the later stage, the elite Jonin Saiki Kakashi was instantly killed by Uchiha Itachi with a look. Not to mention that Itachi is not as strong as in the later stage. It consumes too much pupil power in the later stage. Now it doesn't consume much. Uchiha is so strong. The Mangekyou pupil power is the strongest at that stage when he first arrived. Konoha's peak combat power is not enough. What can he do to stop the two Susana giants? With the Inoka Butterfly clan and ANBU roots? No matter how many fish there are, they are still fish. What's more, there are so many elite jounin in Uchiha with three magatama. They are basically invincible in single combat. The Sharingan is so buggy. I have to admit that those old guys saw the kaleidoscope and were frightened to death. After all, they all understand the terror of Uchiha Madara. If it weren't for Uchiha Itachi, Uchiha Fugaku would also beg for death. The elderly third generation, Ninja bear dares to start a war with Uchiha? Will Danzo be killed or injured in Konoha? He only cares about the position of Hokage.

Am I too drunk to read the original novel? The First Family is just xenophobic and good to the clan members, right? The Second Konoha Guard was used by the second generation to deceive Uchiha. It was originally used as compensation for rights, but it was not seen at the time that it was a trap. Later I found out that I couldn't throw it away. Sometimes it doesn't mean that you can do whatever you want and you have to be responsible. As for recruiting foreigners? Is it because the Uchiha are not being monitored seriously enough? What's more, it's impossible for the Hokage to agree. The civilian Hokage must be completely in his hands. In addition to joining the ANBU, what is the difference between letting the clan come to you and going to the root? Who would be willing to come here if the benefits didn't come with a lot of disadvantages?

Did you change your number? It's still not open at all.

I don't understand why I gave Obito eyes because I thought he was too weak?