Starting from Pirates and Burning the World

After I finished reading it, the first thing I read was not the original version, and the bad writing hurt me. But the author, you really wrote very, very well, a very good group portrait. Everyone grows and transforms. The gentle revolution of Big Bear, the revolution of burning promises, they are all working hard to stand up and live. When Bucky became king, it really confirmed the core idea of ​​this book, which is to not surrender to fate, but to break fate, everyone is equal, everyone is like a dragon, the most fearful person can also become the strongest king, the most ordinary human can also kill gods, and there are many, many more, proud Jiao Lao Sha Zui is tough, the empress finally breaks the shackles, Essaba Guina Kiddro and others have taken a different path. Kidd's part in the Kingdom on the Bridge really made me feel that he has changed a lot. He is no longer the gangster pirate of the evil era in the original book. But a righteous and unyielding revolutionary warrior I won't watch the rest of the world because I haven't seen the anime. I hope you can write a sequel to the world of pirates. Ahhhhh, your writing is so good that I'm starving for books😭

The existence of this Gate Fruit is really low. The protagonist in the Pirates Chapter feels that he has no idea about the development of this fruit. I feel that this is the biggest failure of this book.

How could a mere fanfiction author dare to write such a logically rigorous and clear topic that people have nowhere to complain.

I have something to say. First of all, I really, really like this book. However, the plot of Wano Country has been a bit off lately. The protagonist's current arrangement for Wano Country is to kill the culprits first, and retain the remaining samurai to slowly reform later. The political structure is also following the reform path of temporarily supporting the original nobles. However, based on the setting of One Piece and Wano Country, the original nobles who did not defect, the samurai who were loyal to the Kozuki family, and the common people were all oppressed by Kaido and his agent Black Carbon Orochi from outside, and the common people were the most oppressed. The first two also hated Kaido, but because they were not engaged in production, it was basically impossible for them to understand the lives of the common people. In this case, why not mobilize all the oppressed classes to start a revolution that will affect the entire country? The protagonist can use high-end force to destroy the culprit, but he cannot let the people of Wano wait for liberation, right? If it is not something they took away with their own hands, will they, who have been numb for a long time due to long-term oppression, cherish this freedom and consciously safeguard it? What's more, after Kaido's death, how can we ensure that the nobles, who have been an exploiting class since ancient times, will love the people? Use the power of the revolutionary army? According to the author's previous setting, the revolutionary army currently does not have enough talents, and it is impossible to divide some of them into the country of Wano for management. The revolutionary army is a "foreign" force, and the local noble warriors may not be obedient. The force value of the Wano warriors is not small. With the current manpower of the Revolutionary Army, it is unrealistic to station strong men to suppress the resistance of the nobles. The protagonist can't fly around the new world of Wano every once in a while, right? Revolution is not a dinner party, but a riot in which one class overthrows another class. It is better to fully mobilize the masses and let them fight the black charcoal snake together and let them seize the political power with their own hands. Then recruit advanced elements into the revolutionary army, establish a branch, and continue to lead the revolution in Wano. In this way, even if the new aristocracy represented by Hiyori later deteriorates, the common people will have the experience of successful revolutions in the past, so the seeds of struggle will be planted in their hearts, and they will inevitably start a new struggle to completely overthrow the oppressors by themselves again. (I don't know if it will be harmonious to write like this, it just depends on how the author handles the plot) In addition, Whitebeard's use of "Whitebeard is still in his own era, so he can't die" has a bit of a heroic view of history. It can be said that because Whitebeard is still young, because Whitebeard is the strongest man in the world at the moment, this is more painful, because Whitebeard cannot let go of his sons, because the sons will save their father, etc., Etc., So Whitebeard will not die. You can't show off for the sake of showing off. . . It's like the Great Pirate Age was kicked off by Roger, but it was essentially caused by the deformed system of this world. Without him, Roger would have had Zhang Jie and Li Jie. Roger would have been just a bigger pirate from the previous era. Finally, the revolutionary army's attitude towards pirates was a bit too radical. When dealing with pirates as a group, we should also look at them in two parts from a dialectical perspective. The revolutionary army wants to eliminate pirates, but in addition to eliminating pirates, it also wants to eliminate the soil where the profession of pirates exists. Moreover, under the historical conditions where the World Government has not been overthrown, on the one hand, the pirates are criminals and villains who massacre the people, but on the other hand, the pirates are also oppressed by the World Government and are the enemies of the World Government and the heirs of Roger, the libertarian propagandist who fights against the World Government. Pirates range from pure villains to "adventurers" who don't directly rob people (but don't do anything either). So for such a group that dares to go against the world government, total denial is not enough. We must win over some groups, use some groups, and attack some groups. Unite those who do not do evil (Luffy, etc.), Use those who are powerful (Kyuji and the Yonko, who mainly operate by collecting taxes in the territory), and attack those who seriously threaten the personal and property safety of the people (Aunt, Kaido, and other evildoers). Some opinions, I hope the author can see them.

The original version of this novel was relatively complicated, with a lot of class antagonism. Later, Chapter 15 was blocked, and I revised it several times before passing it. I probably realized that I couldn't write it that way. Many design plots in the novel were arranged by the author for the continuation of the plot. The whole book is more centered on the protagonist's ideological struggle and future war layout. This is the first time the combat power system has been compiled, and there are many omissions. This is also related to the fact that the author did not pay too much attention to this aspect. The fighting scenes are very difficult to describe. There are always some shadows of traditional martial arts in it. This will gradually improve. Finally, thank you all for your support!

Come on, author

I don't understand. I've read several books about traveling to the world of pirates. Why do they force people to go to sea and train? They don't popularize giant steel ships, change the power of ships, and don't popularize containers. Isn't the transportation cost of these things lower than that of trains, and aren't the tracks of tracked trains easily destroyed by enemies or pirates? In terms of war, sea trains are even more useless. Offense cannot transport troops to places without tracks. Defense can only rely on a few islands to fight the decisive battle. In the decisive battle, it does not temporarily install large-scale weapons like ships. Such a useless thing always treats the attitude of maritime countries towards railways with the thinking of mainland countries. I am also drunk. Railways are a magical tool for a country like China with 9.6 Million square kilometers of land, because you can concentrate troops on any mountaintop, but it is really useless for these islands. You only have so many islands. The larger ones are inhabited, and the smaller troops cannot be deployed. It is cheaper to raise more armies than to raise a navy, but you also need warships to fight pirates. With the money to build trains, you can build many warships. The same can drive a large-scale industrial chain. You can also directly go to the world government to directly poach mature industrial workers, which can scale up faster.

I mean, Akainu seems to be doing nothing but bombarding civilians. There's no need to be so dark, right?

I saw this on the forum. It turns out that I don't have much idea about pirates anymore, but this makes me think he is right With the latest chapter 1049, many seemingly unreasonable plots in the comics have been perfectly rounded, including the plots of Roger, Whitebeard, Oden, Kaido, and Red Hair, all of which are completely logical and self-consistent. Let's start with Kaido from Wano Country. In chapter 795 of the manga, Kaido appears for the first time, and the title is suicide. [Picture] Let's look at the comic's introduction to Kaido, who debuts for the first time. [Picture] [Picture] [Picture] [Picture] [Picture] [Picture] [Picture] [Picture] The most eye-catching thing is that the manga emphasizes that Kaido single-handedly challenged the Yonko and the navy to be captured eighteen times. When the comic came out, many netizens questioned that Kaido was just pretending to be X. But looking at it now, the reason why Kaido likes to commit suicide and dares to challenge the four emperors and the navy alone to survive eighteen times is really not pretending, but Kaido's fight against his own destiny. According to the latest chapter 1049, Kaido already knew that he would be defeated by Joey Boy. When did Kaido know about it? This is how Kaido found out after he defeated Oden and saw Oden's diary. In the previous manga, when Yamato and Momonosuke were reading the diary, a page was torn out, and that page should have been torn out by Kaido. So this latest episode will have Kaido telling Jhin that the person who defeats him will be Joey Boy. From that moment on, Kaido was bound by the shackles of fate. After Kaido learned about his fate from Oden's diary, of course he would not be willing to accept his fate, and began to try to resist this so-called fate. So in the next twenty years, Kaido tried to challenge the four emperors and the navy alone. On the one hand, it was to make himself stronger, and on the other hand, it was Kaido's struggle against his own destiny. Because in Kaido's understanding, if he single-handedly challenged the four emperors and the navy and died, then the so-called prophecy in Oden's diary would be nonsense, and he could be regarded as successfully resisting fate. But after Kaido tried to challenge the four emperors and the navy eighteen times, Kaido discovered that he could not die. So Kaido began to try to commit suicide. After all, if others couldn't kill him, then he would have to try to kill himself. In this way, Kaido became a suicidal lunatic monster in the eyes of the world. No one can understand Kaido, because no one can imagine that the fundamental purpose of Kaido's suicide was to fight against his own fate. But in the end Kaido discovered that even he couldn't kill himself, which was just like what the comic narration mentioned. In the end, Kaido was desperate. He could never die, which meant that he had never been able to get rid of the arrangement for his fate in Oden's diary. This also made Kaido subconsciously begin to hate the world. The reason is very simple. From Kaido's perspective, since everything is an arrangement of fate and personal efforts are completely reduced to a joke. Even as powerful as he is, he cannot escape the shackles of fate. What's the point of such a world? That's why Kaido, who debuted in the comics, made such a declaration that it would be best to destroy this boring world. [Picture] Kaido also expressed his envy of Whitebeard when he first appeared. [Picture] The reason why Kaido envies Whitebeard is also very simple, because Kaido feels that although Whitebeard died on the top, it was the fate decided by Whitebeard himself, and he lived his own life. On the other hand, Kaido cannot even decide his own destiny and can only wait to be defeated by Joey Boy. This is a complete tragedy. Unfortunately, what Kaido doesn't know is that Whitebeard is actually a poor man who was tricked by fate. Why do you say that? Because Whitebeard can be said to have died to save Ace. While Whitebeard can let go of Oden, why can't he let go of Ace? Because Whitebeard also knows the prophecy about the birth of Joyboy in Wano. The death of Oden and the prophecy left by Mrs. Toki of Wano to the Nine Heroes made Whitebeard even more convinced that all this was fate. Whitebeard knows that he is not Joey Boy, and naturally he also knows that if he rashly starts working with Kaido, he will end up like Oden. So Whitebeard chose to give up revenge. No one in the Nine Heroes blamed Whitebeard, because Madam Shi had already predicted that they would have to wait twenty years. The plot here about Whitebeard not avenging Oden is complete. In addition to being truly afraid of Kaido, Whitebeard also believes that fate cannot be violated. As for Ace, because in Whitebeard's understanding, Ace is Joeyboy who can bring light to the world in the future, so Whitebeard has to save him no matter what, even if he knows that he is not in good health. How Whitebeard knew that Ace was Joey Boy, of course Roger told him. But another question arises here. Joeyboy must be a person with the ability of the rubber fruit. Why can Whitebeard know about Joeyboy but not this? The reason is also very simple, because when Roger mentioned Joey Boy to Whitebeard, he probably told Whitebeard this, saying that his son would be Joey Boy. So Whitebeard decided that Ace, Roger's bloodline, was Joey Boy. In fact, this detail is also mentioned in the comics. [Picture] Roger believes that his son will be the next generation of Pirate King. Barrett's theatrical version also mentioned that Roger firmly believed that his son would become the new generation of Pirate King. It is not so much that Roger thinks that his child can become the Pirate King, but that he believes that his son will become Joey Boy. So Whitebeard was unintentionally tricked by Roger. It wasn't until Whitebeard saw Luffy that he began to think that Ace might not be the Joey Boy that Roger mentioned. And why did Roger have the confidence to think that his child could become Joey Boy. Here it comes to red hair. Roger went to the Final Island, and after learning the truth about the world, he told the red-haired man to find the rubber fruit and give it to his son to eat. Of course the red hair did as he was told, thus indirectly causing Fuzifu's tragic life. And this is why the red hair ran to Windmill Village, all to follow Roger's instructions and let Roger's son Ace eat the rubber fruit. But what Roger didn't expect was that although he had made arrangements for everything, his fate was not under his control. Even though the red hair did as Roger said and found the rubber fruit, by some mistake, the rubber fruit was eaten by Luffy. Everyone knows the final result. The red hair is no longer obsessed with finding Roger's bloodline Ace, but chooses to believe in Luffy. At this point, the plot about Red Hair, Roger, Kaido, and Whitebeard is basically complete. Finally, let's talk about Oden, who suffered from mental illness in the country of Wano. Oden's controversy lies in the fact that after returning to the country, he lost himself and the country of Wano due to a violent act. But if all this is based on the premise that Oden has already known that fate is inevitable, then it makes sense. At first, after returning to the country, Oden chose to swallow his anger and was even willing to dance naked for five years because he knew that it would take twenty-five years for Wano to be founded, so he could only wait. Putting it from Oden's point of view, what's wrong with dancing for five years? In twenty-five years, you can get through five years in one go. All you have to do is wait another twenty years. It's a pity that Oden miscalculated. As he tolerated like a coward, Orochi and Kaido's behavior became more and more rampant. In the end Oden couldn't bear it anymore, and he also began to try to resist the so-called fate. As a matter of course, Oden could not escape the control of fate. Even though he clearly had a chance to win, he still lost to Kaido. So after that, Oden completely accepted his fate. He no longer resisted. Kaido treated his injuries, left him the knife, and put inferior shackles on him. Oden still had no intention of fighting again, but willingly got into the pot. It was exactly what happened to Oden that made Kaido think more and more that his fate was unavoidable, and at the same time, he wanted to resist his own fate. Because Kaido only read Oden's diary after Oden's death and knew that he was destined to be defeated by Joyboy twenty years later. Putting yourself into Kaido's perspective and seeing what happened to Oden, would Kaido feel horrified and shuddered? After all, Oden did have a chance to kill him, but the ghost old woman appeared to disrupt the situation. From Kaido's point of view, didn't all this seem to be destiny? For Kaido, this is really terrible. There can be an invisible hand in this world, controlling the fate of everyone. It is as powerful as Oden, the invincible, and he cannot escape the shackles of fate. So, as of now, it is basically certain that the theme of the manga is fate, but it is probably also about resisting fate and fighting against fate.

So that's it, it's Zhutianliu… Whose Zhutian's first copy has 2 million words? ? ?

Hahaha, I remember the idea in the novel I read before Red thoughts arm the soul to arm the color domineering! Bowing down and listening to the voices of the people is for the sake of seeing, hearing and being domineering! The red ideology and belief are firm, taking root in the masses and serving the public wholeheartedly, which is domineering and domineering! 😏

Naruto is far more desperate than the pirate: Because pirates can really change their fate. As long as they are lucky, a devil fruit may grow on the tree in front of their house. No matter how weak their physical talent is, they can make up for it with the animal system... Where is Naruto? Not counting the follow-up Boruto stories, I haven't seen a way that ordinary people can have access to, that can turn ordinary people into ninjas... No matter how miserable Xiao Li is, he is a genius who works hard, but without chakra, he will still be an ordinary person after practicing to death! How many people in the ninja world have chakra? 3%? I'll give you 5% if you're exhausted. Is there any way for ordinary people? It may have happened in ancient times. Let's see if we can meet the Sixth Teacher. Will anyone be able to give ordinary people "chakra seeds" in the future? Gone! The only hope left was Orochimaru's physical transformation, but he did not delve into this topic. His curse seal allows ordinary ninjas to control the power of nature. Can ordinary people have chakra? I can't see...

​ ​ In my opinion, a small drawback of this book is that I have a favorable impression of some kind-hearted pirates and dislike the hawkish navy. It's understandable considering the protagonist's background, but I don't think it's necessary. There is a passage in a novel that I remember, not all pirates are born pirates, some are saved by kind-hearted pirates and then inspired to go to sea, but pirates themselves are not productive, so where does the money for all their banquets and sailings come from? Eventually, those who were inspired by the kind pirates would gradually turn into pirates who burned, killed, and looted. Therefore, the liberation of the pirate world must not be participated by pirates, otherwise the liberation with the participation of pirates will eventually rationalize the pirates. Although it is said that the enemy of my enemy is my friend, revolution and pirates seem to be unable to do so. This position has been decided since they hung up the pirate flag and did not want to become adventurers. Generally speaking, it is still a very unremarkable novel.

Later, I feel like the author gave it something that doesn't exist in Japanese comics. It's too complicated to think about. Their comics are actually quite simple originally, they are just some simple young blood comics. . . The author just did a lot of work. . . Don't be dissatisfied. . . . . . Recently, One Piece has launched a new setting. Baqi can store inheritance. This is a patch for Wang Lufei to fill in the final shortcomings. Even the final island may have Joey Boy's domineering inheritance. In the end, Wang Luffy inherited his domineering power and beat the villain away. (Wang Lufei's current shortcoming is the amount and quality of his domineering power)

Noah awakening in the flames Picture source network

😐Having two nodes is disgusting. 1. In the world of pirates, go back to the time when O'Hara fought with CP9. The protagonist fell ill and went back to O'Hara to die. He turned on the cheat code before the battle. The fight started without any prelude after receiving the cheat code. He even lowered CP9's head to prevent him from calling the police first when he fell ill. 2. In the world of Naruto, Night of the Nine Tails forcibly restores the plot. When Minato came back from beating Obito, he saw that Kyuubi had been knocked down by a third party, who claimed that Kyuubi was his trophy. Minato dared to snatch the Nine-Tails and run away when he came up. What was Minato going to do? Cut off the Kyuubi, half the ghoul, and half Naruto. Then he waited for death, and Kushina also waited for death. What should we do if a third party comes over and finds that the loot is gone? Isn't Naruto waiting to die? It wasn't enough for Naruto to die, the nine tails were cut in half, and the Ninja Village would suffer.

After reading about 800 chapters, I suddenly remembered that this was Zhu Tianwen

To put it bluntly, just taking out the "Pirates" chapter can be regarded as a pretty good Pirates fanfic. I never thought that you are really a god.

My evaluation is rubbish. Wasn't it the first time CP Chief Weapon ate Devil Fruit that the protagonist found out about it on clay? Just show your sadness and kill people, right?

​ ​ First of all, I also like pirates, and the world view of pirates is also very suitable for fan creation. When I first read this book, I thought it was amazing. The corresponding ideas are beyond the level of similar ones. It is very good from a macro perspective. However, as I read later, I also found some shortcomings. I can feel that the author has been working hard, and it is very convincing that such a large-scale work can be completed, so I would like to talk about some of my thoughts here: 1. Fan creation must be based on the original work, but it will definitely be different, otherwise everyone can just read the original work. Therefore, you must have a corresponding understanding of the original work, and at the same time, you should also reflect your own secondary creation, as long as it can be logically self-consistent; 2. Writing style: This is also an obvious problem during the reading process, that is, the so-called dry article. It might be a good thing if it's other types of works, but it's a more fatal problem for web articles that are obviously entertainment and leisure. At this stage, the author should be groping, hoping to find a style that suits the author and express some of his own opinions, such as profile descriptions. The situation in this book is very suitable for expressing some of the protagonist's situations through some opinions of the people at the bottom, such as the attitude of the people towards the protagonist's decision-making, the corresponding effects, gratitude and respect, etc., Or the growth of the original supporting characters in the animation under the leadership of the protagonist. It can be seen that the author has considered this aspect, but most of it is fragmentary and fragmented; 3. Facialization of characters: Whether it is the protagonist or the original characters in animation, most of them are too monotonous, that is to say, there is only one side. The characters can be pure, but not monotonous. Whether they are positive or negative characters, they can be made fuller. For example, why do bad people do evil and what is their purpose? What is the appeal? In addition, most of the characters who appear lack foreshadowing, that is, if they need to appear, they just use them without knowing the logic of the corresponding attitude or behavior. Even if there is foreshadowing, it is a hasty description of the appearance. If you want him to appear in the next chapter to promote the plot, you should be prepared at least three or five chapters ago. The above are just some personal thoughts. For the author who has completed a full-length novel, it may be a bit superficial. It is just a casual chat with everyone who likes this work. I also hope that the author can create more wonderful works.

I watched Naruto at the beginning and then stopped following it. My head hurts when I looked at each name. I wanted to jump but there were so many of them. I asked if I could jump. 😢 I haven't watched the Holy Grail War either, but there were only a few characters that I could understand after turning over and over again.

I feel that the zombie apocalypse in movies and novels is very suitable for revolution. The power of the government is greatly reduced, and the remaining resources are abundant. There are still zombies for training. It can also be written in other countries, such as Japan and the United States.

I haven't read such a burning novel in a long time I'm looking forward to the story of Death and Aizen in the extra chapter And the Magic Forbidden There are also characters who appear at the end

This is the second novel that I insisted on fully ordering. I would like to thank the author for fulfilling my long-awaited desire to read a novel with red flags all over the world. I didn't read it later, but I re-ordered it. By the way, in the new world, should we consider the Xianxia style? In a world where humans and demons fight, the protagonist finally breaks down the barriers, establishes an alliance, and forms a new order. Or a cyberpunk world? Humans, robots, genetically modified humans, animal-evolved humanoids, and various alien races. The entire world is actually an experiment on the planet. The planet is actually a kind of living thing. The protagonist eventually leads all the intelligent species on the planet to rebel against the planet itself and build a new home. I have seen a conceptual idea about time before. If all living things understand and accept time differently, is it possible that the planet, galaxy, or universe is also a kind of life? It's just that the time is different and cannot be detected or communicated, so it becomes what is called another dimension.

Why haven't we finished it yet? I thought I was a eunuch.

After reading One Piece and Xingetsu, I actually feel that the One Piece chapter and the One Piece extra chapter are a complete book. For the subsequent Naruto chapters, I only read the first few chapters. From the beginning, Noah becomes a boy, so there is no problem in counting it as another book. After all, Infinite Flow is about the collision of various power systems. This Infinite Flow novel does not have the main line of Infinite Flow, neither the main god space nor the main world, and there is basically no connection with each world. Like a collection of novels with Noah as the protagonist.

It's not too much to ask for more details when ordering everything.

It's been a few days. Is there any new book? If you don't plan to write it, you can just say it.