Yiren's Non-Human Chat Group

This post is some of my personal opinions and journey. As for the reason why I want to post it, it is just that I have not been able to make a more complete summary before and I also want to express my love for this book in a more weighty way than leaving silently. When posting, there are still 29 chapters left to read. It is good to continue writing down the normal chat group ideas at the starting point. After all, the books on the starting point are far from saturated. When you want to create a new path by yourself, it is not that innovation is not allowed, but the lack of experience. This book can actually be said to be a good example. Then in the second stage, when should Guan Yu officially enter this stage? I don't have much memory. The later ones are too fast-food and water-filled, so my memory of the early days is no longer too clear. But if you want to say where it is bad, it must be when the author chooses to create a private setting in the Harry Potter world view. This is an already saturated market, and there are a lot of bad settings in it. The author's self-designed world view has caused the world view to start to deviate from the original world view, and at this time, the plot has begun to be seriously watered. At first glance, it feels like having read too many invincible and low-minded Harry Potter fanfiction, because the Harry Potter world view is not a fairy tale world in the traditional sense. , It has the author's personal political tendency. Although Voldemort said that he did not kill many people, in fact he could not kill many people, and he did not need to kill. What he wanted to do was to rule, not to destroy. Many bad Harry Potter fan authors think that Voldemort Voldemort is very weak, but in fact, no matter how desperate a tiger is, it is still a tiger. If it can be done by a first-year student who can't even defeat a 34-year senior with hard strength, then why didn't Lao Deng just kill Voldemort? In fact, it is easy to see what Lao Deng thinks. He does not want to fight Voldemort himself. He probably thinks that he is too old to fight Voldemort. According to the author's view of the world, the God of Death is also the foundation of the world and the god who really anchors the world. Coupled with the identity of the protagonist, it is said that he is awesome. This wizard can fight at the level, but he is not particularly good at fighting, let alone God, especially after beating his own masters, and then there are a bunch of gods that should not exist at all. Even if you insist on talking about anthropology, what is the psychological component of it to study human beings? Are you too lazy to resist even if you're being killed like this? If you really want to say it, it can only be to connect the multiverse, to raise the charisma of this single universe to make the protagonist have a charisma, and it was made up. However, there is a lot of uncertainty about whether the charisma is self-pleasure, so it should be said that this book is already terrible at the starting point, let alone this book. When I look through it carefully, it seems that every world is like this. Back to the subject first, there is a very important issue that should be mentioned in this book. First of all, as the title shows, this book is a chat group novel, but it is obvious that it has completely broken away from the scope of the chat group and developed into the world. But the problem is that the foundation of his chat group is not only not well laid out, it can even be said to be worse than a bunch of unfinished ultimate bad books, because those piles of ultimate bad books may still be able to write a world view. The most fundamental thing is that he knows As for the plot, these authors can't think of anything else, but this is a chat group. In several worldviews, they use each other's things to solve their current crisis and get better improvements. The author has almost given up on the worldview of the group members who joined the chat group, and is eager to finish a story line. This story line may not even fit the timeline. This is the case with the Harry Potter world view, so as to abandon the essence of the chat group. Not to mention, at least there is the aspect of the turning heavens, but the problem is that this aspect is worse than the chat group. The author did not seriously understand the world view inside, and rashly took out the things in it to compare with other worlds. Take the Lord of Mysteries as an example. In fact, Klein's world can be said to be a relatively standard world view of the Ke system. There is only one universe, that is, a single universe. Even if this single universe is very It is strong, but it is far from being compared with the standard multiverse of Puella Magi Madoka Magica. Moreover, the power system inside is all the power of God and Tianzun, the two fragments that have defeated themselves and scattered them. The pollution is the remaining consciousness of these two existences in these two fragments. Author, how dare you compare this completely imperfect power with other perfect worlds? Even if you beat him violently, even if you study the rules, it's a bit weird, but other worlds also have their own characteristics! If you tell those true fans that the particularly awesome being in your favorite works was beaten up by the fragments of an existence in other worlds that may not be as high as him or not much higher in terms of personality, the other party may be so angry that they will throw their mobile phones on the spot, and Tianzun and the others are not the only gods that exist in the world of the Lord of Mysteries. There are a lot of outsiders. As for God, there are other planets and other ways, so it is obvious that you, the author, have not even checked out the information before you dare to write this thing. Not to mention that I am just giving an example. As far as I can see, most of the worldviews you write have this problem. The early worldviews that join the chat group may be better, but they are not much better. Then there is the female protagonist. Author, do you think it's not outrageous to collect one or two of each of the protagonist's many soul fragments, right? The key, in our opinion, and the way you describe it, the author, is that the protagonist is just an O-worm that has entered the brain. While losing all his strength, it also drags the character we originally liked into the quagmire. Unless the reader does not have much pure love and affection for this character in the first place, no one will accept their favorite character and be taken over by a brainless character who has no idea of ​​self and likes to show off. The harem, and it seems to be the opposite, there is no good result. Don't think that letting this character escape from the original bad ending is a good outcome. The reason why we love this character is the touch that this character brings to us or something else, not just because this character has a bad ending. The author completely reversed the two, and made the character escape from the original bad ending. It's a bad ending on another level. If I really want to see it, it's really not as good as the death of this character because of an accident. Well, there is nothing more to say. Let's summarize the bad aspects 1. The character is not good. The lack of deeper thoughts leads to the complete failure of this character portrayal. If you really want to say it, you can only take it one by one (an exaggeration, but in fact it is not that exaggerated) ), like to show off, but in fact the author forcibly raised some levels of power and deleted many very important settings and existences, resulting in the existence that could have punished the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist can seem to be successful in pretending every time, but in fact he can only enjoy himself, without any emotions at all 2. The world view is not good, this world view is about the author Almost every world view is written, but there are actually slightly better world views, such as the world view of Shenbing Xiaojun and Carp Adventure. Although the combat power of these two world views is actually a bit broken at the setting level, for example, Shenlong has not appeared for a long time, but it has a fixed inheritance and can actually appear again in time, but it is about 90%. There is nothing good (this result is because the author's later writing is so bad that I have no impression of the previous part, so I can barely estimate it) 3. The plot is not good. The author's plot in each world is like doing a mission. This not only blasphemes our love for this world (games, animations, or anything else), but also directly leads to other problems. His problem 4. The essence is not good. The author has broken away from the essence of the type of novel he wrote, but has not developed a new path. If this attempt is really enlightening, it can indeed be called a pioneer. But the problem is that this writing method is just a forced gluing of two genres that have some essential similarities but are completely different in writing methods. Together, I can only say that it is hopeless Last mention, I actually liked this book very much. I can still remember the surprise I saw by accident before going to school. Later, every time I came back many times, I got my phone and opened the starting point, and the first thing I read was this book, but now I think I still have to recognize it a little more clearly, ugh~ (sigh)

Speaking of which, there are people who wear items and people who wear non-human beings, so whenever someone comes, they will all be girly characters🐶

The writing is okay, keep up the good work. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

By the way, can we add Remo and Simpson?

Here is a record of the world that the author has written about, so you don't need to comment on it.

Open a building. If you have any worlds and characters you want to see, write them down below.

In fact, there is no need to be non-human, you can change your gender hahahaha

I feel like I'm going to panic. 80% Of it is Harry Potter. It can be renamed "I joined the chat group when I traveled through Harry Potter", and all other worlds are added in order to explain how to contribute to the protagonist of the Harry Potter world. Moreover, the only Harry Potter written has turned into a human, and the inhuman elements are gone. Moreover, all the worlds are too niche, and it is impossible to imagine how it would be fun even if the power is developed.

The first picture is so poisonous. A person who has lived for twenty years is reborn as a cat for one year and his thoughts become that of a cat? Look at the pig's feet like sb 🤔

The subject matter is very good, but I gave up on it when I saw Harry Potter. It was inexplicably annoying to Harry Potter. If you thought Harry Potter was too much, it ended up being a super hit at the beginning. It mainly focused on describing the world. It was too early to persuade me to quit.

It stands to reason that with Feng Chaohuang's popular Tongchuan Jiujiu, there is already a predecessor that can be used as a reference, so why are there still so many poisonous points?

Don't look at it when you see someone massacring an entire planet's population. There is no cause and effect. It's just because the spaceship arrived there and then killed everyone. Your protagonist can be an alien, but the person reading the book can only be a human being, and aliens are also aliens with adult human souls, so don't be too outrageous!

It's an old problem, it's too messy. You can look at the successful ones. You switch characters and worlds in just a few pictures. It's too fast. Who can keep up with you and enjoy yourself? Duke Next Door is a world where there is no progress for the time being or the plot is dull. If you switch to another world, you really want to play one world at a time.

The following are all my personal opinions: I will roughly explain why I look tired. It is not a problem of rhythm. The rhythm is normal. First, let's take the game next door, All Worlds, where all the members are my own. The rhythm of the two books is similar Xia Yu's process is basically: get the relief → go through the plot, save those who deserve to be saved, kill those who deserve to be killed, join the group members who cannot be beaten → give back to the group chat It's very simple, right, each Xia Yu's character is clear at a glance Then compare After reading this book, let's think about how much information a Xiao Yiren needs to remember First of all, when a Xiao Yiren joins a group, he must first remember the basic information of the corresponding world, species and system Then, receiving relief funds is not a simple matter of getting invincible, but there are systems that cannot be used. You have to screen them and remember them. Every Xiao Yiren is different The plot will follow, there is nothing much to say, but after the plot, you become the Lord of the World, which is another big one After the Lord of the World, there are two new sections, exploring the world and LAN Exploring the world means that there is a high probability of one more system, not to mention, and the system will have to be screened again LAN, one more person and one more base Basic information In other words, every time Xiao Yiren writes, he has to roughly recall all the above information In addition, there are some rules summarized in the group chat, and conjectures about the world system Putting the above together, I haven't recalled the previous ones, but later introduced a new system, new roles, and new concepts. Doesn't this look chaotic?

This, hiss... It's not that refreshing. There are too many poisonous points to mention. It's okay to tolerate it, but what about the pleasure...?

90% Of them are Harry Potter, licking the protagonist group and becoming human

It is rare to find a book with this kind of subject. I hope the author can grasp the content he wants to write. It is not like a certain novel with the same subject. It was originally a good book but the protagonist ended up being a bitch for a woman, which made a lot of readers very unhappy. Nowadays, there are many novels that were written quite interestingly at the beginning, but then a female character appeared in the novel, but the author couldn't write the plot of love well, and couldn't grasp the degree. It is obvious that the male and female protagonists have only met a few times, but the heroine looks confident and has already convinced the male protagonist, and the male protagonist is written like a licking dog by the author. So I would like to say here that you can have a heroine, but if you are not sure about it, don't write too much, or simply treat the heroine as a vase and don't give too many roles, so that everyone will be better off.

The story is short and I changed characters within two chapters. For example, Alien Xiao Yiren was changed after a few chapters. Most of them talked in the chat group. Alien Xiao Yiren's story line is a bit embarrassing. For example, I am the insect swarm, and the insect swarm is me. After this, I should write a climax and write a few chapters. This is boring, and then change people. But you suddenly changed. It gives people a feeling of being stuck there, which is really uncomfortable. Look, he has traveled through 99 worlds at the same time. He just changes a story when it becomes boring. This way it is very memorable

It's okay to see that the main character in the front is always super swimming. When it comes to Carp, there's a villain who was let go because of the author's will 😰. I'd like to know what Shennong said after watching it. Will there be some kind of forceful deus ex machina at the end because of the author's will?

If you don't have the writing skills, don't write about the author, destiny, time, etc. Why not just write about causing trouble in various worlds? Without adding these things...

Can you write as little as possible about the author's plot? It's a bit of a drama.

It's too common to change into a human, it's better to be a pure cat

How should I put it? I can only say that this book is okay. The content of jokes is quite high. The protagonist is not a fun person, but there is still a lot of fun in the novel. Of course, some setting descriptions, such as Harry Potter, are not complete. They only write to a stage, and then the subsequent story ends with a chat. If you like to be more serious and insist on seeing the ending of the story, I do not recommend it. Comprehensive evaluation, the individual story is still well written, but many worlds do not have the ending of the world line, so I give it the title of a unit drama novel.

JOJO has always been very annoying. Can't the author write about a world that is not controversial? I have always either hated or liked JOJO. If you don't have the writing power of Phoenix, don't write about this kind of world. It's very discouraging.

How can I put it, it's not fun at all, it's really not at all. Although it's a chat group, we can't just chat

I can only say that there are too few novels related to horror houses. But what the author wrote is too short.

Can you write about the world of full-time mage?

Author, can you write about the fox demon matchmaker from ancient times to modern times, Game of Life The Movie, and One Punch Man.

That's right, that's it. More interesting niche worlds. Everything in Naruto and One Piece is badly written.

I have read more than 30 chapters, and I still feel quite happy. I hope that the combat power will not be ruined later. I can temporarily suppress the combat power later, and then explode when I can't beat it, otherwise it will be really boring.