Emulator? No! It's a Clone Stream

It's too chaotic, there is no main body, there are hammers here and there.

These first two chapters are like a primary school student writing a short composition.

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There is no Gu in the Gu world. You have to reach the supreme master of this sect to use extraordinary methods without the help of Gu insects Using the essence of human Gu to finally produce a semi-finished dragon man. It cannot be slowly refined with low-level materials or weather and earth energy like cultivation. After completion, there will be no Gu-like abilities You said that you can create a technique in the Gu world that does not require Gu insects. Even Lin Jianxing cannot practice his own technique. You can practice it. You are more powerful than Ancestor. The ghosts of the great masters of all schools have to give you water to wash your feet.

I'm also convinced by Zhetian's teaching of fighting spirit.

I just finished following the latest chapter 49, and I would like to briefly share my personal feelings. To be honest, as a variant of 99 style, I felt a little uncomfortable reading this book. The core of 99-style is sharing and unique arrogance, but the setting of the simulator basically suppresses the element of 'sharing' in disguise. To put it bluntly, the author controls the pace and is afraid of sharing too fast, too many worlds, and accidental writing. It's okay to control the rhythm, why did I say suppress it? Due to the limitations of sharing capabilities, the original full sharing except for items has been divided into talents, items, etc. I estimate that the classification will continue to be refined in the future. The restrictions in this area are actually not bad. The main problem is that the author has blurred the acquisition of simulation times. There are no specific rules, so the improvement of the protagonist is approximately equivalent to the author's "I Xunsi" that the protagonist should strengthen. However, if you can accept this type of variant, you can continue reading it. After all, the above is just a setting. But to be honest, I don't think the story is interesting. The first few chapters are full of the protagonist's thoughts about Goldfinger. In other words, the author is throwing away the setting, so forget it. After all, the setting needs to be introduced, and the protagonist is not omniscient. What I can't stand the most is that as the main world-focused Dragon Ball, so far, the protagonist's escape has completely followed the original plot of Dragon Ball. Bush Gomen, if the plot of the fan fiction is not changed, it will make me feel bad? Don't tell me anything for fear of affecting the subsequent plot, or fear of the butterfly effect. I've already read the same book as Gomen! If you really don't know how to change Dragon Ball, then write it in another world! Inhuman Zai is not easy to write about the daily world. Douluo can also be written about it, but it is really not possible to open other worlds. You write fan fiction and follow the original plot, so what else should I watch? The above is moist.

I don't know what the reality is like. I feel that when writing Douluo Continent copies in several novels, the data dropped very quickly. I don't know who the author is, but I don't really like Douluo Dalu.

It was even more uncomfortable to read than the previous one. The perspectives were too confusing, there were too few plots in each world, and there were too many boring descriptions. It seemed that the novel was too watery, and I felt that the author's writing power could not be controlled┐(´-｀)┌

It's so tiring to watch. It's all about planning and plotting. There's not much serious plot. It doesn't feel like I'm reading a story, it feels like I'm reading a plan.

There are too many worlds, and there are always other perspectives inserted. The look and feel is too bad.

How to say it? Why is this kind of Zhutianliu not as attractive as the plot of Wenzhaogong? The frame is too small, and the entire universe seems to be written like a light novel adventure, especially the protagonist who is constantly tortured internally.

What kind of world do you want to see? Let's collect your opinions here.

I have no idea what I'm looking at, it's just water.

But looking at it as a whole, my evaluation of this book can only be described as a mess. One dungeon is well written, and suddenly a plot from another dungeon is inserted for you, and then you come back to continue writing this dungeon.

The worlds switch too quickly. I haven't seen enough of one world before moving on to the next. There is a feeling of not being able to go up or down. Some of the world-switching passages are too riddle-like, and even though they are said, it seems like they are not said, and some inexplicable emotions are expressed like water numbers. Some of the outages are so uncomfortable.

Alas, it's not as good as wearing the same clothes. The complete story is cut into a mess. I'll just read it and talk about it in the next book.

A new book has been released, with a manuscript of 100,000 words. Updated twice daily. Let's see if you are interested.

This simulator might as well be worn directly. It's so messy.

I still hope that each world can be described in more detail. It doesn't feel like it has a story, so it just feels like an outline. The rest of the world is taken from the perspective of the forbidden world in the second person. The changes are very fast and not as good as the previous ones

1. It's messy, the logic is confusing, I don't know what to write 2. Water, all kinds of water injection, suspected of AI 3. The subject matter can be imagined, but the writing style and logic are limited, it's ok

The idea is good, but the plot of the article is extremely messy. I didn't expect that the author could write it till now, and it is very clumsy.

It's like a mess and I don't know who is talking about it. The simulation is superimposed inside the simulation and I don't know who is watching whom. I can really do 1 simulation, 2 simulations, 3-4-5.

In fact, Dragon Ball is pretty good. If Single World comes out and is written in detail, I can continue to watch it.

At present, it seems that the trio of Master and Disciple Sun are going to play with Long Fu and the ancient factory director. Although I have not watched it, I heard that the ending brings out all the previous protagonists. Will the Immortal Lin Tianci meet the Yang God Lin Tianci, the Galaxy Emperor Lin Tianci, and the Holy King Lin Tianci there? {"NickName":"Hantan","UserId":216327363}

There are so many typos in this book. It's very uncomfortable to read. It affects the perception too much.

So little

The author's switching of perspectives in this book makes it difficult 😐

So little

Quick update

I have always wondered how it feels like the sequels to Dragon Ball and Lord of Mysteries are missing?