A Mortal's Story of Immortal Cultivation: I Also Have a Heavenly Palm Vase

This book started from the dream chapter, and I started writing randomly.

The most poisonous thing is Tianlinggen. . . . He was accepted as a disciple by an old guy who had no hope of forming an elixir in the foundation building stage. Alas, the original Tianlinggen was one that formed an elixir and rushed to accept disciples. The most rubbish Tianlinggen is that there is no bottleneck below the Nascent Soul. It is equivalent to the peak of the Golden elixir, and the success rate of breaking through the Nascent Soul stage is 20% higher. It's too poisonous, this old guy has no chance at all

How can I put it, the author's idea is quite good, but the character of the protagonist is not clear and too impetuous. After reading the original work, I am still not wary at all. Maybe you want to write the protagonist's growth step by step? You can add some mental description and write out your mental journey. The latest one is probably because I didn't write it down later, it feels a bit abrupt. Come on, the subject matter is very good. Mortals has become popular recently if I write it and it will become popular.

How can I put it, the author still has no idea about the Tianling Root. As the owner of the Tianling Root, the protagonist is definitely an ancestor of Linghu who went out to recruit disciples. He is also a late-stage pill-forming monk. How can a person in the middle stage of foundation building accept the protagonist as his disciple? If he does not die, he will definitely be a Nascent Soul monk in the future. Oops, the writing is a bit unfamiliar. Moreover, the protagonist has a sky bottle. How can he be worthy of being in the middle stage of foundation building?

You, the protagonist, are not even worthy of carrying Han Li's shoes, with such a character and such a brain. The original work appears in three chapters and must die.

There is no heroine, so you don't dare to seize the opportunity, saying that you are afraid of ruining the plot. In fact, since you time traveled, you have already ruined the plot, and you are timid in doing things, fearing to steal other people's opportunities. Fortunately, the author knows that the book he wrote is a little bit poisonous. I hope the author will continue to work hard

It's so difficult to defeat the seventh floor from the tenth floor. Why don't you just go in and attack directly? You talk so much, and you spent all your time at Qixuanmen like an idiot.

Can you accept Chen Qiaoqian? It's such a pity for anime.

This is the worst mortal protagonist I have ever seen. He has a Sky Bottle and a Heavenly Spiritual Root, and he is so miserable that he can't beat anyone.

Author, why don't you write a fan novel about a mortal with an intellectual protagonist?

The writing makes no sense. The character of the main character couldn't survive the first episode. It made me feel uncomfortable watching it.

To be honest, I really don't understand why you are taking that woman with you? When writing about mortals, I think Han Li should have the same aspirations for immortality. The reason why mortals are attractive is because Han Li relies on his own calculations to pursue immortality in the world of immortality.

The protagonist's character will have to receive a box lunch within a few chapters.

Why don't the author include Nangong Wan?

It's too slow. Each copy is too long. It's been almost a month and you're still in the Bloody Forbidden Land. Let me go.

Fuck you, your Tianlinggen is really rubbish

I was so helpless that I was poisoned (｡•́•̀｡)

Is the protagonist really a single spirit root? In fact, I prefer it to be the Five Spiritual Roots

Yanyue Zong has become a female lead training base

Nine Palaces Foundation Building, Eight Trigrams Pill Formation, Seven-Star Nascent Soul, Liuhe Transformation into God, Five Elements Refinement, Four Symbols Integration, Three Talents Mahayana, Yin-Yang True Immortal, One-Yuan Golden Immortal, Taiji Taiyi, Hunyuan Daluo, Hunyuan Jiuzhuan Kaitian

Is this a fanfic? You just borrowed a setting from the co-authorship, and there is almost no relevant plot. A wolf in sheep's clothing? ? ?

It doesn't look like time travel at all. I feel like I don't know anything.

Kung Fu, magical weapons, and personal abilities are all nothing interesting. I only know the number of water words, and there is no storyline to speak of. Now more than 98% of mortals are not in the same league. It's just your routine, so I must be a eunuch.

There are too few updates, but now that anime is very popular, fandoms are still making headway.

It's not appropriate to write a story about a mortal cultivating an immortal. Besides, you have a second Heaven-Controlling Vase. You can't write anything else better than this. Besides, Han Li is running around and you will fight sooner or later. No matter you lose or win, you will be scolded. It must be because Han Li is so popular. Otherwise, just write from the spirit world chapter to the fairy world chapter and accept him directly. Then it will be easier for him to understand! Your way of writing won't make much difference.

Can you please stop writing emotional scenes? It's so painful to watch.

The author said this book must be completed, and then slapped him in the face

It's worse than bullshit, the main character has a low IQ. How can I still write so many words? I like BB in everything I do. There is so much nonsense. It's too watery.

The road is long and long, I will search up and down 😁