I Have a Shelter in the Wasteland

Is it my imagination? When I read the first few chapters, there was a sense of tearing. I felt that when the previous chapter ended, you suddenly changed the scene and picked up the next chapter. Maybe as soon as I was immersed in this created world, a scene suddenly changed, or there seemed to be a lack of transition in the middle.

After reading Chapter 18, did the author fail to ask the editor for resources? The writing style does not match the results.

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{"NickName":"Enthusiastic citizen Ke XX","UserId":360466053} There are more and more readers~it's about to take off! The quality of this book is not bad, keep up the good work~ Reward and encouragement have been given! Work hard~

(ง˙O˙)วThank you so much, author!

(ง˙O˙)วThank you so much, author! Good evening

Dear author, I am not an irrational person, feel free to discuss, I am easy to get along with.

What I want to say to the author: You should revise while practicing instead of sending it directly... Looking at the content of the story, it is actually not bad. If there is a big difference between your ideas for subsequent development, you can start adjusting now. You sent it directly = ruined all the current accumulation, and will cause a great sense of distrust in readers, unless you stop writing, otherwise this will be very bad. Not everyone is a child of destiny. When I read this book, I don't see any signs of collapse. It's just that you may not be proficient in some writing techniques, but this does not affect the writing! And if you don't need to practice with this book, will you be able to practice it immediately and become familiar with it as soon as you open the chapter of the next book? I suggest you think about it again, write it down, and finish the book.

Chapter 84, page 2, two paragraphs of description starting from the second line: ...... Wearing a rabbit mask... In the poster, her face is full of panic... How can it be seen that her face is full of panic when wearing a mask@@? ? ? It is recommended to change it to "eyes full of panic"

From my personal experience of reading books for so many years, I feel that this book is still very good. Why is the popularity so low? I can't say how good the book is, but at least compared to the highly recommended books, it is better than most of the highly recommended books.

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After reading a lot of books, I found that the author's current mental state will affect the works he is writing at the time. I believe that the two characteristics necessary for success are "persistence and hard work". Come on, keep your passion for writing.

{"NickName":"Enthusiastic citizen Ke XX","UserId":360466053} There are too many typos and it's very dramatic@@

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Isn't it going to be a big hit in the past few days since it's been on the shelves? The breadth of communication is not enough and can only be accumulated slowly, don't be discouraged. Also, I suggest you write a book in the future and the title should not be too casual 😊

Isn't it too fast for the protagonist to encounter monsters? I just read Chapter 14 and there is no pause between the protagonist's encounters with two monsters. Moreover, others believe the protagonist when he says he is an exorcist. It's okay for a student to say, why did the police believe it directly and give the protagonist an organization? Doesn't a national organization or a large organization have no documents?

Where does Feixing come from? They are all in traditional Chinese characters. It's too troublesome to identify them.

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Why is it so less popular? Is it because the editor doesn't recommend it? Or what's the reason? ? I'm afraid this score is only in double digits on average.

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It shouldn't be. This book is more to my liking than other books about monsters and ghosts. How come so few people have read it?

Is there a female protagonist? Although it seems a bit early to ask now.