
Douluo Reincarnation: Atonement from Zhu Zhuqing at the Beginning
斗罗轮回:开局向朱竹清赎罪
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 261k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It made me so embarrassed that I dug out three bedrooms and one living room with my feet.
The protagonist spends his whole life trying to atone for his sins, so what else does he have to live for? You can commit suicide
Brother, I feel that there is a problem with the writing. The plot is too urgent. You can't write too many words like this. The twists are very blunt and there are too few foreshadowings and descriptions, which makes the plot feel like a bloody one. It is very novel at the beginning, but this kind of dual personality is difficult to handle. Once it is not handled well, it will be poisonous to death. Moreover, it lacks a more complete plot advancement. It feels very uncomfortable to watch. Don't be too anxious to advance.