Douluo: I Love Bibi Dong

Why don't you comment? Did I write poorly? 😭

How can I put it... The emotional line is okay, but it's too ridiculous to always have sneak attacks and enemies. This is fan fiction, not fantasy 😂

After reading the introduction, the author would like to ask if this film has a single heroine, Bibi Dong.

The heroine Bibi Dongzuo must kill Tang San. It is a matter of stance and cannot be reconciled.

Seeing the single heroine decisively jumping into the trap, I couldn't help but be driven crazy by the harem story.

1. The only female protagonist in this book is Bibi Dong. 2. Regarding the CP in Douluo, we will not dismantle it. 3. The story is mainly based on the main line of Douluo, but the plot will be changed. 4. Ma Hongjun from Shrek's Seven Monsters has been removed and replaced by the protagonist. 5. Qian Xunji did not die, but was seriously injured by Tang Hao, and is the current Pope of Wuhun Palace. 6. Bibi Dong is 7 years old, one year older than the protagonist, and is the saint of Wuhun Palace. 7. As for Hu Liena and other characters, arrangements will be made later...

It feels like this book just bears Bibi Dong's name and licks Tang San.

The writing is incomprehensible, the timeline and age are written in a mess, it doesn't matter if Xiao Chenyu, the son of the Lord of Notting City, remembers it wrong, Bibi Dong's martial spirit is also wrong, but this is the setting, there is nothing to say, but the writing is so inexplicable, speechless.

Um, it doesn't matter which side you take, but your name... Maybe it's just that I'm not interested in reading it, but I believe some people will like it. It's already great to be able to write a book, come on

It's nice to watch, and it's funny to think about Chen Fei misunderstanding that Qian Renxue likes him. I've read a lot of fanfics there, and Bibi Dong's setting is still unique, and the ideas are very novel. Big boost for the author😁

You write Bibi Dong, and I will catch up to the end of the book! !

The character of the protagonist in this book is really bad. He makes me angry just by looking at it.

It's okay if Bibi Dong's martial spirit is changed, but to prevent Tang San from becoming a disciple at the beginning? As long as you have correct views, you will never say that the master is a scumbag.

A year later, I came back again and saw that the old books were still as bad as before, but it didn't matter. After all, everything is not good at the beginning. Don't care what others say, maybe they can't even write a three hundred word essay. And the author is also very close to the readers. I made a lot of comments when I read the real book before, but only one or two were not replied to. It's a really good author.

Big boost, author, keep writing. This book is very well written. Although I don't know why there is no follow-up, which is quite sad, but there must be a reason. Anyway, if possible, don't leave this book without an ending 😢

That heroine doesn't have a harem, it's not pretty and boring.

If you don't have that ability, don't learn from others to write novels. Take this book off the shelves. Don't be embarrassed.

Can. The story of another parallel world. Good

This 3V3 doesn't feel that easy, but I can already imagine Qiu's shocked and unwilling expression after losing 😂

Author, what is the background? Your introduction will be misunderstood and it will be difficult to attract fans.

I really don't like the eight-door, it's half disabled as soon as I open it 😥😥

It makes no sense for the author to write Bibi Dong like this. Not as good as original characters

This setting may not be very pleasing, but if it is well written, some people will definitely read it, but it is difficult.

I don't want to watch Tang San's Immortal Douluo

Take it off the shelves, what is written is messy, and Saint Bibi Dong is dating a girl. You are the same age as Tang San. If you are so good at rewriting any fan fiction, why don't you just open a novel by yourself?

No, there are so many beauties like you, but they will always only love Bibi Dong. The ultimate invincible Daitengu

Uncle, why did the group disband...

Anyway, I find it quite embarrassing. The protagonist has never been tough, and was led by the nose from the beginning to the end. Instead, he has no sense of brotherhood. He obtained the spirit ring early by himself instead of with Tang San. He is not as good as other masters. He only thinks about Bibi Dong. It's too licking.